Cyber ​​Dao Zun

A strong smell of Dragon King came to my face. I don't know if the author just wants to write in the direction of the crooked-mouthed Dragon King pretending to slap him in the face, or something else? But one thing is that the supporting characters and villains are too mentally retarded and tool-like. For example, take the protagonist's classmates. According to the original setting, the protagonist is also a pure genius in school. One second these classmates were smiling at the protagonist, but the next second their faces immediately changed, and all kinds of ridicule came. How about waiting for the protagonist to change his attitude as soon as he passes the test, and everyone runs over to tell him how awesome he is? It seems that they were not the ones who mocked the protagonist in the past. Do you want to show some face? According to normal logic, they mocked the protagonist earlier, which can be said to be envy and jealousy, but later the protagonist also passed the test and immediately ran over to lick it. I would say that in normal logic, no young man should have any shame! These things are my true feelings after reading the latest chapter. I don't know if the author wants to write a story about a crooked-mouthed dragon king who pretends to be a slap in the face, but according to the current audience in the Qidian market, this kind of novel is not very popular now, and the audience is very small.

It's okay, but the routine is too old. Rebirth, useless start, illegitimate child, being framed, mentally retarded supporting characters... It's a great collection.

If you hate that father so much, why do you still have the surname Su?

The creativity is okay, but the method of stimulating conflicts in the early stage is a bit bloody.

The subject matter is okay, but the writing is a bit uninteresting. I hope the author can improve in the future.

Did you know? After reading so many books, your first two chapters couldn't make me have any mood swings.

The subject matter is novel, but the pace is too fast, and there are a lot of pretense and slap-in-the-face plots. It can only be said to be barely enough.

The routine is too old, the IQ of the supporting characters is too lacking, and the subject matter is good.

Very creative and beautiful.

The writing is okay and basically readable. I hope the author will try his best to complete the book. Even if it's half a million words, the main thing is that the story is complete and not unfinished. With the completed book, readers will have a sample and know the author's strength. Only with new books next time can I hope to gain more readers.

I just love reading novel and exciting articles!