I Became an Immortal in the World of Liaozhai

Observe and observe, it feels okay

Is the protagonist the Virgin, or is she impotent?

It doesn't matter whether your emotional intelligence is low or not, but you must be a villain, but you can't be a treacherous person, let alone a holy mother, because you are a cultivator, don't write too well, your cultivation state must be stable, don't practice too fast, slow down, the practice speed can be slower, it is OK if you are ordinary, or if you have a chance, but the chance should not be too awesome, otherwise your novel will collapse, be stable, you are a novice, the author must know It is a book. You must write it steadily. The advanced realm system, spell system, magic weapon system, and world view must be written completely. Don't cut off the roots or eunuchs. Write the outline of the story first and write slowly. Anyway, you only need to pursue one word to be stable. Then check the information. It's OK to take your time. Just like you are writing now, the point is that writing novels must be stable. Don't rush. You must read it over. If you feel it is not safe, you can correct it.

Why do I feel like the protagonist is a villain with low emotional intelligence?

Come on, author, you can be a good person but don't be a holy mother. It is best to be able to establish that the protagonist is the agent of the underworld in the human world. Personally, I don't feel that you should be a swordsman who comes and goes with just one sword, and you should learn some magic weapons and Taoism. You don't have to be an all-rounder, but the magic weapon rituals and other wonderful things. Flag array, magic weapon, Taoism, please ask God so that the subsequent battle will be exciting and beautiful.

From chapter 18 to 58 pictures, it's a bit uncomfortable to read and a bit irritating. The writing is a bit inconsistent and I'll probably be criticized by people for being a holy mother.

Ask if the protagonist is impotent

RefinementAdditional refinement

A5 I haven't pushed a single pig's trotter so far.