Hogwarts Ancient Wizards

I haven't read it yet. I'm very interested after reading the introduction and reviews. But the heroine Hermione is really too common. It brings down the taste a bit.

First of all, thank you all for reading my book. Here are a few questions. The protagonist's attitude is similar to Merlin from FGO, but he is not that fun-loving. He enjoys life and reads other people's stories. However, he will intervene when things are interesting. He is a wizard driven by interest. The plot will definitely change a lot. The early stage is mainly for laying the groundwork. The author has an outline of nearly 10,000 words. Don't worry, the main plot is included. Finally, the author once again asks for recommendations and collections. Thank you. I hope you don't keep books.

I can't understand it a bit. I feel like the protagonist's motivations are lacking and he seems to just follow the crowd.

It seems that after dozens of chapters, I feel that it may be because the pace is a bit too fast for me. From the entrance to the queen releasing the first generation of the Dark Lord to the protagonist and Lao Deng fighting, it makes people not have much sense of immersion in reading. The protagonist is a time traveler and has the memory of Halbo, so the only reason why he can still go to Hogwarts is the modern magic system thousands of years later and more new magic or magic props, alchemy props, such as the magic stone. I think the person who is more interested in the magic stone is the person who invented the magic stone, or the person who programmed magical creatures, the person who invented the wolfsbane potion, etc. Explore more possibilities of magic. For humans, what else is more exciting than exploring the unknown! I know that the author wants to expand the world view of Harry Potter, but the expanded setting is not to write whatever you want, but to expand on the basis of the original work. For example, in a magic text professor at Hogwarts, he used the analysis of ancient magic texts to make himself reach the point of a magical creature, thus breaking the rules of transfiguration and not being able to transform into a magical creature. But when the protagonist becomes a magical creature, he can transform into other magical creatures. This is very magical, isn't it? I think this is considered an expanded setting! And if you don't want to write the plot exactly according to the original work, you can add your own settings, but you must also combine the basic logic. The so-called queen releasing the first-generation Dark Lord is actually not very logical, because the first-generation Dark Lord was locked up by himself due to the failure of the revolution and being defeated by Dumbledore. The queen you wrote said that she was moved by him in a few words, which makes me find it difficult to accept. Secondly, the scene of the fight with Dumbledore made me not feel how powerful the protagonist or Dumbledore was. After seeing this, I felt like I couldn't read on. I didn't feel the character of the protagonist or Dumbledore. Let's stop here. Maybe what I said is a bit difficult for new authors. I still hope that the authors can write better and better! Come on 😆

Magic? Is the magic of Suyuan from the Demon Realm not worthy of respect or Master Shenxu from the Demon Realm not worthy of learning?

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Who is the heroine? Don't be Hermione, it'll make you vomit

I thought it was directly Haierbo

Good guy, is this ancient resurrection? Dark wizard Herbo Witch Morgan Athena who is suspected of seeing through time Druid Maokai

I thought the protagonist was directly Haierbo

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I did miss a lot of words because I was too busy at work, such as the school song, the song sung by the Sorting Hat, etc. Today happened to be a day off, so I revised it. Most of the missing words were deleted. In fact, I only talked about the beginning, and basically didn't finish the rest

Gee, this book is too new. Please use your imagination and let me see the ending of this book.

190,000 Words completed? •᷄ࡇ•᷅

In the end, you still lived up to my expectations😢

First of all, the protagonist can slowly activate the blood of magical creatures in the body. There is no need to strengthen the protagonist too quickly, because the ceiling of Hogwarts is Dumbledore, Voldemort, Nick, and the first generation Dark Lord. The protagonist is currently fighting Dumbledore back and forth. How do you show that the protagonist is slowly getting stronger as he absorbs modern magic? Secondly, it can be written that the magical world thousands of years ago was barren and primitive. The magic of the world is growing, more abundant, and more vital. Therefore, everyone is exploring more possibilities and unknowns of magic. The modern magical world is more complete and systematic, but the magic of the world has entered a period of slow growth. Therefore, it is said that ancient magic is more powerful, while modern magic is more convenient and more complete. When the ancient concept of magic - - For example, you only learn one magic all your life and make it more powerful and invincible. Modern magic is more arbitrary. When the two concepts of magic collide, a protagonist is born. A person can use all the magic he has learned to do whatever he wants and is powerful. The protagonist is still exploring more possibilities of magic until the protagonist himself becomes a symbol of magic. I think this is the character of the protagonist I want to see. Of course, this is just a small suggestion 😆

This could be a book about ancient wizards fighting each other

It's too white. In fact, the setting is very good, but the description and plot are too dry, and it's like a running account.