Hogwarts: How Can You Learn Magic If I Don't Ask You to Do It?

As the author continued to write, he forgot what he had written before. . . The dialogue is written like that of humanoid creatures who cannot understand human speech. For example: Person A: This is edible rice. B: What is this and what is it used for? What the author writes is similar to this. Of course, this kind of situation usually only occurs every other chapter. Otherwise, I wouldn't say that the author doesn't know what he has written before...

When I read the introduction, I thought it was a story about a scroll king. I didn't even know it was the HP world in the first three chapters. And the name Wednesday is so weird. When is it rolled up like the introduction?

Might as well cut it off and write about the magical journey of the Trump family, let Trump's ideas govern the British wizarding world, and stir up the situation.

Are you writing about the growth of a wizard or how an adult becomes mentally retarded and how to live a mentally retarded life?

One setting of this article is: The Addams Family is also in the magical world. Book lovers can read it if they are interested.

It feels like the protagonist has replaced Harry Potter, giving people the feeling that their fate is being manipulated. More than 100 chapters in, Harry didn't enroll in school. There is too little interaction with Wednesday, and the panel is useless. Neither Harry nor much of Wednesday. Seriously off topic. No wonder I bought a book before and gave it an initial subscription. Not see.

The title and content are really inconsistent, it's difficult

The original setting of this book is quite novel, The Addams Family + Proficiency Goldfinger. According to the Goldfinger setting, this book should have the protagonist learn a lot of various magical knowledge in the early stage, and then selectively progress. After the world view unfolds in the mid-term, the protagonist sets goals and then selectively grows. As for the later stage, it depends on the writing style. . . The protagonist of this book feels that he doesn't pay much attention to cheats. He knows that the skills practiced by cheats at level 5 and level 10 have characteristic rewards. If he doesn't focus on practicing one or two magics first to see the effect, the protagonist feels that he is just hammering here and there. At the same time, the combat power shown by the magic in the book is a bit weak. . . After seeing the free chapters, I lost the desire to read them. Summary: This book has an extreme title, low usage of Goldfinger, and no obvious main plot. The combat system is a bit weak, and the characters are not very likable.

The protagonist doesn't focus on studying either? Why not change the topic

The title of the book is a bit unappealing, you could add The Addams Family to it

The idea is good, I joined the Addams Family, but the main character is too bad.

Hello, author, I like your works very much. Please don't be a eunuch, otherwise I will strike hard.

I support every author who writes about Hogwarts, but this book does have too many shortcomings. Just stick to finishing it. How can you be a master if you don't practice your writing? Come on

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The writing is pretty good, for a newbie, please give me some encouragement. Wednesday belongs to the dark gothic style. It is not easy to integrate it with the fairy tale style of Harry Potter, but it is worth looking forward to. Looking forward to what kind of sparks Wednesday and Hermione can create, just like the big impact of the century between Leonard's mother and Sheldon Cooper's mother in The Big Bang Theory.

I just started watching and found that there has been no update for seven days. Does anyone know.

It's really idle to take a little wizard and use Legilimency right from school.

Wednesday·Adams

The writing is quite beautiful, but I am curious about one question: if there are question marks in the dialogue, the author will use double quotes at the end. But if it's a period, use double quotes first and then the period.

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