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The plot is bloated and the protagonist is mediocre and childish. I can only say that it is average.

Pure fantasy and refreshing writing style. From the beginning of Naruto, writing anime fan fiction is completely popular and attracts cloud readers who know little about anime. However, writing fan fiction is very perfunctory in collecting information and is extremely unfriendly to the original fans. But for cloud readers who simply want to watch the protagonist fight against the villains in their childhood memories, it will be very interesting.

Chapter 82, what a mentally retarded plot. The protagonist kills people but doesn't kill them all, and has to keep Luo Sha to be saved. What else can this plot do besides disgusting readers? It feels like the protagonist's body has been upgraded and he has entered the realm of seeing God and not being bad, but his brain is broken. Generally, people like Luo Sha and Ye Cang should not be sealed into scrolls and taken away after killing them? In the ninja world, the body of a ninja is also of great value, but the protagonist just threw it there, and Luo Sha was later revived, which was also a disaster. The author is afraid that too many well-known ninjas will die and there will be no plot, right?

I'm really speechless. . . Thousands of tons and tens of thousands of tons can beat the complete Susanoo. This logic is so stupid that it is equivalent to dozens of speeding heavy trucks that can smash the complete Susanoo. There are still 800,000 equivalents that can destroy the island. It makes me laugh. This island is so small. . . Do you know how much equivalent the Castle of Applause is to destroying a kilometer of island? It took tens of millions of Cheer Castles to blow up one kilometer of the island. It is recommended that the author add more common sense

I was really fucked. I read a few chapters and felt something was wrong, but I didn't feel anything was wrong. Then I watched the dialogue between the protagonist and Kurenai Yuhi. Isn't this the way to write fantasy dialogues? I cut off a sentence: "The legendary realm, only a few people in the entire ninja world can reach it."

Don't be fooled, it has extremely high poison properties, is extremely outrageous, and is very discouraging. The protagonist is senior to Shikaku, and Shikaku is Minato's senior, and then the protagonist calls Minato his senior? Just after World War II, he dated the adult Yuhi Kurenai and then accepted Kakashi as his disciple? The last time I saw such an outrageous setting was in One Piece, where Zoro was asked to deliver letters and lead the way to Luffy. You can't write fan fiction just by giving it a name. Please respect the original work. It doesn't have to be as rigorous as the textual research party, but at least there shouldn't be any plot that causes readers to have cognitive impairment.

Author of Yun Hokage! . Just put on a Hokage skin and write it by force?

I read the latest chapter in one go. The writing is super exciting. It can be regarded as the best among many fan fictions. The IQ of both the protagonist and the supporting characters in this book is online and there are no poisonous points. I give the author 5⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ praise. The only worry is that the protagonist's strength value rises too fast and I am afraid that the book will collapse later. This is a humble worry from a reader.

Persuade you to quit in Chapter 4? Death from poison. . . It's like writing about a red aunt, etc. It's quite important to write a fan timeline. . . Zhu Tianwen's emotional harem drama is a fixed poison pit

This author's writing is a little better than other fans, but the plot of the original work, especially the timeline, is ridiculously wrong. Those who should be alive are dead, and those who should be dead are still alive. . If you can tolerate this, try taking a look. . .

Let me just say one thing: the protagonist has risen to the level of six levels of strength in Naruto. In Hunter World, not only does he not kill everyone, but he is trash. Although he may have been injured due to traveling through the world, the protagonist still has all the abilities of the Samsara Eye, the realm of indestructible gods, and a body of iron bones and steel skin. As a result, even the Spider Brigade was able to go back and forth with the protagonist, and in the end, he tricked the protagonist and ran away. It's really rubbish. I really regret subscribing.

The author likes anti-intellectual characters like Jiraiya. He was deceived and still moved himself. He was poisonous.

I really don't know if those who gave good reviews have not read the original work or are just asking for it. Anyway, I couldn't stand it after reading the fifteenth chapter. The protagonist is in the same class as Asuma and Kurenai Yuhi. It turns out that the protagonist is seventeen years old and Kakashi is only seven years old. The protagonist is still Kakashi's leader. The timeline is so messed up that people who have read the original work can't stand it at all.

In order to complain, I specially rewarded it. The timeline is so messed up that I really don't understand how he was able to write it down.

Just to complain, I rewarded him with a few coins, but I was really not happy about it. Doesn't the conscience of the person who said he hasn't seen a fanfic of this quality in a long time hurt? First of all, let's not talk about the grammatical errors I saw. An author of the Nara clan actually said that there are more than twenty and close to thirty jounin. Are you kidding me? Are the jounin worthless? The Nara clan is just a small clan. Brother, don't you know that Japan likes to call a family a clan? You said that the Nara clan has a total of thirty people, which is about the same. Thirty jounin? Let's take one jounin out of ten people with ninja talent. Then the Nara clan must have at least three hundred ninjas alone. Counting those without training talent, there must be at least one thousand or two thousand people.

The book starts with a lightning strike, the protagonist accepts Kakashi as his disciple, and then falls in love with the adult Yuhi Kurenai. Nara Shikaku calls the protagonist his senior. The protagonist's name is Minato-senpai. The timeline is very confusing. It's pretty cool if you don't think too much.

Writing a fantasy with Naruto's basic board... It looks good from the beginning, but becomes more awkward as you go to the back. Moreover, the character of the protagonist, who has not yet become a god, is indifferent to life. He often talks about God's ideas and makes himself appear to be aloof. As a time traveler, don't you know that there are people outside the world and there is a sky outside the world? Well, and the time traveler doesn't know that Naruto's strength is not high in the world, but the protagonist is still enjoying himself, what kind of god's mentality, since he has a god's mentality, why do he care about those shadows, just push them sideways, and he doesn't have that strength and likes to pretend. Hashirama, as the god of ninja, doesn't have this problem. Moreover, the protagonist has only reached the realm of martial arts and sees gods as indestructible, and his mentality is so transcendent. When Shattered Void comes, will he directly transform into the way of heaven? Moreover, the sanctification of the body and Shattered Void are the same realm. You want to write about the realm of martial arts, and you want to drag it out again. If a person who doesn't know the realm of martial arts can still understand the casual Yuanshen, the pure suture monster is nothing but a mess. A modern person has no skills at all. And how can you write Zhutianwen with a character like yours? To be honest, I'm really curious.

Kakashi and Sunset Kurenai, Sarutobi Asuma's first class. Turns out he's ten years younger than them? Have they been squatting for ten years? You, the Hokage, have never understood the fanfic you wrote in detail? ?

The thinking is OK, the writing is average. I looked back and took it back. It was very rubbish.

The world chosen by the gods is the downfall of the entire book, especially the second world, so what the hell is a hunter? Who knows what a hunter is! I can't understand it from beginning to end. Does the author have no idea about the public and the niche?

I don't like Jiraiya, he has no responsibility and no courage! Nothing but strength! Apart from that strength, is there anything outstanding about it? He is also a die-hard loyalist to Konoha, knowing that Konoha is rotten and unwilling to change. Instead, he will beat others to death when they change! Small things are done well, but big things are a mess

The timeline is a mess, and the seniority is also a mess. One moment, he is the same generation as White Fang, and the next moment, he is in the same class as Asuma. What a mess.

At this time, I can still see fanfics of this quality. If I write about it, I will definitely give it a try. Come on 😁

I have been permanently banned from complaining about traveling through three generations, so many people are complaining. Traveling through three generations was a drama to watch.

Dear author, since you have cut it, please send me the outline of the rest, and then finish the book.

Recommend a good book, you can tell just by looking at the name, good subject matter, not the Holy Mother, fun all the way, also written by a handsome guy Starting from Konoha to play the role of a native of the motherland

There are too many conspiracy theories and it's a bit boring to read.

Is this the end? The ending left me confused 😰

The early stage is very interesting, but it takes too long to write about the God of Death, and there are too many points, which makes it difficult to read and not enjoyable! I haven't subscribed much, so the author may find the problem.

The author writes well, and I give you three recommendation votes.