The Handsome Guy in Tokyo Doesn't Dream of Becoming a Pretty Girl

Briefly describe your viewing experience. (The first time I saw Mei) 1. Writing: I have a good experience in writing, and it has a very young feeling 2. Plot: 🍬It is still sufficient, and the daily writing is good 3. Characters: The idea of the male protagonist having a harem has been in the novel since the beginning It's very obvious, which makes me feel that the process of the male protagonist's desire to open a harem is missing, and the character changes are missing. Now I feel that the male protagonist is a bit of a scumbag (it didn't resonate). He flirts with girls in a fair and upright way, and the character of the male protagonist is not very three-dimensional at the moment. As for the female protagonist, I feel that the author has portrayed it very well (more carefully than the male protagonist). Shiratori is a little confused and cute, and Mei is arrogant and can show off. The images of the female protagonists are still relatively three-dimensional, emm, I feel that the male protagonist is not worthy of the female protagonists (at present). You can add more events later and add a climax of conflict appropriately to portray the male protagonist.

Yesterday I started reading this novel from Daily Guide with the mentality of giving it a try. It was surprisingly good. Let me briefly talk about my feelings after reading it. This is purely my subjective opinion. 1. Subjective attitude This is a novel that has the Japanese light flavor that I imagined. The content of the stories in Japanese light novels are actually very similar. How to distinguish good from bad depends on whether the narrative flow of the story and the style of writing have the flavor of Riqing. I think the author's writing skills are good and he balances the two very well. From the beginning of the novel, the suspense of how the triangular relationship between the protagonist and the two girls came to be, and the subsequent unfolding of the story are all in line with my taste. Well, Riqing, slowly unfolding is the feeling of Riqing. At the same time, the content of the story is also okay. I see that there are no poisonous points in the update, and there are no problems with the story logic. 2. Characters At present, the plot still does not involve the protagonist's childhood, and the story line about the protagonist and the teacher has not yet been drawn out. The emotional line is established, but the characters are not completely established. Except for feelings, other aspects are weak. At present, we can only see the protagonist's attitude towards beautiful girls. What about other people and his attitude and handling of things? It's not obvious. The background setting is that one's parents died when he was ten years old and he has become the present by himself. This kind of hard work and the resulting mood are not deep enough yet. They only exist in the background setting. Readers know it, but they can't feel it from the story. Other characters have the same problem. In short, this is a novel with an absolutely passable emotional line and a slight lack of characterization. However, considering that we have only written the paid chapter 27 so far, it seems to be okay. After all, it is not fully developed. There is a long chapter to make the characters more three-dimensional. Come on, author. If you maintain this quality, I will order it all.

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The new book issue is updated twice a day. Although the number of words is small, I still hope that everyone can read the latest chapter. Each new book is a seedling that needs your support to thrive. When you have time, you can leave a comment or the like. Of course, it would be best if you can vote. Thank you all. If the results can exceed expectations, there will be extra things like extra cars in the future, please. The author has never been on the newcomer list, and I really want to go there. . .

This book was reported by someone and after it was released, the following content was modified. Sakurai Naoko does not exist. Yukina Naoko lives next door to the Sakurai family and has been close to Sakurai Ruiko since she was a child. Treated as [relative] by the latter. The identity of Shiratori Xiaoxiang is clarified. (The original identity was the same, but I was worried about being maliciously misled by some people again.) Shiratori Koka is always Shiratori Koka, and Shiratori Ayaori has never existed.

This protagonist doesn't know anything, can't do anything, and has a very weak personality. He is really a trash person. It is outrageous that a group of female protagonists like him. Only the two female protagonists, Shiratori and Amakusa, are suitable for a Japanese Asashi male protagonist like him. The other female protagonists feel too inconsistent with him.

Madam, will you accept it too? If you don't accept it, this plot will feel like pure poison. I always feel inexplicably ntr

The book is good, but there are always people in the book review section who are obsessed with Lianyou. I really think Lianyou is the origin of all things, right?

The writing is quite good, the characters are well-developed, and they are not too facial like other light characters. The daily writing is very good and very comfortable to read. The only thing that made me uncomfortable was seeing the male protagonist's attitude towards Igarashi being too licking and not liking it. Although I know that this attitude should be caused by the past of the three of them, it is reasonable, but the main plot is too long, and it is a riddle type that has been kept pressed and not revealed. I tear it apart today and tear it up tomorrow. As a result, I always want to see Igarashi eat a lot but cannot, and the daily shaping does not make her particularly likable, which makes this character more and more annoying. It wears away the enthusiasm and patience of reading this book. (It's just personal preference, not poisonous)

The original name of this book: "Plan to Raise a Rich Woman in Tokyo" The reason for the name change is very complicated. . . I hope everyone can invest, vote, and so on...