The Demon Refining Master's Mortal Cultivation System

I have been following the update from the beginning until now. Although there are only about 120,000 words now, I can clearly feel the author's progress in writing, plot, and character structure. Many things about the original work are also well analyzed. The author also works very hard to write his own things based on the original work. The shaping of the protagonist is the type I like. There is not too much fighting and killing, it is more about the exchange of interests. It is a bit too calm in the early stage, and the sudden attack in the battle later is a bit abrupt. Some are too dependent on external objects and do not pay attention to the improvement of one's own strength. The emotional lines with other characters are a bit... Well, I just don't feel that the protagonist has feelings for other characters. They are all used. It is a bit too cold-blooded, making it difficult for people to substitute. Other changes in the plot are very innovative and reasonable. The simultaneous destruction of Spirit Beast Mountain and the Yan family is a bit unexpected, but it feels reasonable. The items issued by the system are a bit too advanced and difficult to grasp. In addition, the system has gradually been weakened later, and it feels like a classical cultivation of immortality. Generally speaking, the writing style is good, but the portrayal of the characters' emotions needs to be improved.

Did no one really watch it? 😭😭😭

The more you write, the better. Come on, author!

The writing style and ideas are very good, and the storyline is quite reasonable. I don't understand why it is not popular. Is it because the word count is too few?

Brothers who have read it, can you please go to QQ to read and add it to your favorites? Please 😭

Family members, I want to rewrite the previous chapters, enrich the plot of the story, and highlight the character of the protagonist, so that we can clearly understand the reasons why the protagonist makes this choice. The main line of the story will not be changed, but some details will be added. However, there are too many chapters in the past, which may affect the speed of subsequent updates. I can only guarantee one chapter and two thousand words a day.

It would be nice if there were more updates every day. Two thousand words is enough for anyone to read, and they are updated in the middle of the night...

It feels a bit like a copy of the original work, and the storyline has basically not been changed.

Please don't insult mortals. The Legend of Immortality is good. Holy Mother Bitch

You shouldn't write the system, being reborn as the protagonist is already awesome, you can downplay the system later,

If you write up to 100,000 words, you can apply once

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. Originally, there were very few mortals with spiritual roots, but as a result, there were a lot of people from the Qixuan Sect!

It would be great if the system is supported. What kind of task failure is no longer popular?

Actually, I really like watching Han Li's replacement.

I think this kind of systematic task method that gives two choices at once is very good. It is not so rigid and has more room for imagination. Come on, you must finish writing!

Not many people can survive Han Li's rebirth. It's too evil. After all, the age we live in is not suitable for hell difficulty. Even if you know there is a chance, you don't dare to go there. It's easy to die if you go there. How many times has Han Li wandered around in death?

The protagonist is about to become invincible in the human world

There are many fan fictions, most of them replace supporting characters, and some directly create a character and insert it into the plot. So far, I have only seen one person write to replace the protagonist, Li Kuanglan. His characteristic is that he basically does not change the original plot, follows the plot, and occasionally advances the plot.

Of course, he mainly works in the field of fantasy, and is especially good at writing works about Tiancan Tudou.

Of course, one book is not as good as one

But doesn't this way of writing involve infringement?

What does this say? I can't stand it anymore, bye bye