Bitter Sea Raven

The front is really good. At first, I felt sorry for not being a werewolf, but the bus and the bridge guarding were completely inexplicable and exciting! The incident is inexplicable, the fighting power is just oral pleasure, there is no logic at all!

The second floor plan should be easier to understand if you read it together. It will be added later.

I didn't plan to give up badly because my grades were really bad, I'm sorry. When this book was released, it was posted on Zhutian. Com, because I was greedy for the traffic there, maybe because of the supernatural element. It has more than 70,000 words, and it was only collected by 58 people after it had been released for two or three weeks. It was natural for me to not push it. Some book friends are wondering why there is no one in the comment area, because there is really no one... If I had known better, I wouldn't have deleted the advertisement. But I didn't give up because I had a few book friends who had been reading this book, so I asked the editor to help change the category and move it back to suspense. In the same streak, the number of collections increased in one week was more than that in three weeks. With the help of a webpage to promote, the situation improved a lot (but so far it is only more than 300). I really want to finish this book, because I have prepared all the copies and outlines, and also prepared a lot of foreshadowings. I put a lot of thought into writing it to make the characters not look stupid but also feel a little fun. I really want to finish this book, so I am shameless here. I hope that book friends can contribute some follow-up reading and try to get more recommendations for this book before it is put on the shelves, so that the results will not be difficult to see that I will throw away the outline and run away after finishing it. The humble author bows down

Please don't be ignorant and hand over the manuscript as soon as possible

It's a pity The beginning is very good, the atmosphere is created very well But the writing of Mori Hashi immediately collapsed From supernatural to a fantasy novel covered with supernatural powers If the writing method at the beginning can be maintained This book should do well

Books were abandoned at the bus station. The writing is a bit strange. It feels a bit like Obiye. It's obviously scary, but suddenly the writing style changes.

It's okay. I think the small copy of the taxi at the beginning and the series before boarding the ship are quite good. I don't know if I saw it a little too fast. I didn't understand it when the bus arrived at the defense battle. I didn't understand it when the volunteers appeared. Personally, I think the taxi side is pretty good, but the back end is a bit bland. Overall it's okay

It's very well written, why don't many people comment?

The first episode made me excited for no reason.

Personally, I think it's pretty good. I can give it an 8 out of 10 points. Cheers, author (∂ω∂)

Wow I found a treasure! ! ! Love it, love it

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Are you serious about the typos in the introduction?

There are only six of them, so I don't dare to buy them. The author should write more!

Suddenly I came across this book in my bookshelf. This book left a deep impression on me. I can still think of it two years later. I feel that it was quite well written. I don't know why I stopped writing it.