
Konoha: There Is Definitely Something Wrong with These Sharingan Eyes
木叶:这双写轮眼绝对有问题
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- Ongoing
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- 564k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
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- Qidian
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It's such a waste to give the protagonist the ability to glare at someone's pregnancy. Only Uchiha Sasuke next door really needs this ability. In three years, in just three years, the Uchiha clan can be revitalized. In three years, 1,200 children will be born.
How can I put it this way? The protagonist's abilities are so impressive, but he gives people the feeling of being a piece of trash. He doesn't look like a time traveler, but like an uninformed native.
The power of staring at someone who is pregnant is simply terrifying. I seemed to see all the beautiful young women in Konoha Village becoming pregnant with the protagonist's child after being stared at by the protagonist. This is amazing. Also, during the Infinite Tsukuyomi, when the protagonist uses this illusion, all mothers in the world will be pregnant with the protagonist's child. Isn't this supreme joy?
The ability is very strong, but the protagonist doesn't know how to use it. He has the pupil technique, which can solve the battle quickly, but it is too slow to show the power of the pupil technique. You can only know the strength of the pupil technique by relying on the setting.
I was given a bunch of incredible pupil skills and then didn't use them. I went up to level A by myself. If I felt that the protagonist was too strong to write, I shouldn't try to use such an invincible ability right away.
The setting is very strong, the protagonist is useless, the subject matter is very novel, and the author's writing style is a bit stretched, otherwise this book will be a hit🔥
The biggest problem of the author is that he takes the skills for granted and wrongly. The author thinks that the one-second forced control is too short and not enough time to kill. You need to learn the speed of lightning escape. The speed of throwing shuriken is too slow. Where is the slowness? Ordinary people can reach speeds of up to 50 meters per second with a 50-pound bow and arrow. Ninjas with chakra will not throw shurikens slower than this. One second of forced control and normal throwing of shurikens can kill all the fragile ones, including the Kage level. The reason why the Flying Thunder God is fast is because of teleportation. The kunai must fly first. If you don't control it, you can fight against the ninja. For readers, the speed of kunai is not the inescapable restraint of the Sharingan. It is purely for lust. The protagonist's three-eye technique can break free by glaring at anyone who is pregnant. The low-matched Amaterasu will catch fire in just one second, and it will be a big bug without cooling down. However, the author takes it for granted that this is just a slightly outstanding skill. . . . . .
Everyone who has been rescued by the protagonist, whether it is the rope tree, the Uzumaki clan or White Fang, all have withdrawn from this book. I originally thought they would be the protagonist's help, but I was disappointed.
The enemy has a flaw, the protagonist rushes forward, eh, it's a trap, eh, I found it's a trap, eh, eh, there's another trap, eh, eh, I also found it's spicy, eh, eh, there's actually a trap, eh, eh, I found it's spicy again! This process is repeated in almost all battles, and the winning tactics are delayed and used. As mentioned above, the winning tactics are repeated 3 or 4 times. The key is that every battle is like this, so boring that one suspects a robot is writing it.
Pig's feet are a bit useless,,,, it's all about rules-based skills. It's a lot of effort to beat a Jonin,,,, then why bother with such rules-based skills?
In the end, the Lord changed nothing except changing the fate of the Uzumaki clan being destroyed! Obito was still taken away by Madara, Tsunade's lover was still dead, and Tsunade still ran away. Although Naoki and White Fang are not dead, they are just not dead. They have a bright future and can no longer be ninjas. What is the difference between being dead? I can already think of Obito's darkening in the future, the death protagonists of the fourth generation and Kushina in the Night of the Nine-Tails have not changed, Orochimaru will still betray, Jiraiya will still run away like Tsunade, and Akatsuki will still have black schemes. Even the genocide of the Uchiha clan is not known whether it can be avoided. So, there is obviously an opportunity to change the plot, why not change it? Since the fate of the Uzumaki clan has been changed, why not change the tragedy that should never have happened?
The protagonist has a problem with his IQ and is poisoned. The protagonist's golden finger does not require fighting. He only needs to practice honestly to improve his chakra. Why is the protagonist still trying to expose his ability? Are there any benefits to being so prominent? I don't know how to preserve my strength. I used up all my chakra when I went to the battlefield to kill. I must be sick. I was almost killed by Black Zetsuin. Don't you understand the basic principle of obscene development? Hokage is more dangerous, Kakuzu, Tailed Beast, Black Zetsu, one style. Also, from a certain point of view, chakra is very rubbish. It can neither increase physical fitness nor increase lifespan, and the more refined it is, the shorter the lifespan is. Look at the strength of the third generation and the elders. Itachi died suddenly at a young age after excessively extracting chakra. So why don't you practice well until you come out of the super shadow? Then wander around every day, wasting and overdrawing chakra, which is dangerous and shortens your lifespan. It's not good at all.
How can I put it? The author wrote that the protagonist's strength is very powerful, but he doesn't want the protagonist to face those famous people. Then he creates a passerby and then strengthens this passerby like crazy. Even if the author writes the protagonist to be very weak and fights with other noobs, it is better than just strengthening the passerby casually.
Those who are more poisonous can develop their own techniques similar to the Rasengan. In the last chapter, it was said that the mental power is doubled, and the control is very precise. In the next chapter, the chakra cannot even climb trees. In order to be able to write more words, the author hard watered one, or destroyed the way of reading.
The protagonist is unable to survive and is forcibly weakened. Forget about removing the Kaki, and also weaken the Sharingan.
Chapter 29: Genin fights Jonin. No need for forceful control with pupil skills. He creates flaws. No output. No detonating charms. A villain with the face of a miscellaneous fish. He talks sarcastically. Is this the work of a time-travelling person? Don't be a ninja at this level. Just pierce your eyes and give a blind massage. You might be able to survive Shippuden.
It's so powerful and written so stupidly, it's not worth reading.
Staring at so-and-so's pregnancy, giving a big family in Konoha hundreds of pairs of red eyes, that'll solve it
After reading a few chapters, I really can't stand it. It's too poisonous. It's an advantage to write the pupil technique yourself. You don't need to write another system to kill me. After you finish the skills, you don't need to write them.
It's not very poisonous, but it is both poisonous and watery. The author doesn't read the comments to take suggestions. He is probably a rusher. He gave up after reading chapter 31. It's a waste of time.
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