Pirate: I Am Kaido's Son-In-Law and Dog-Headed Strategist

Water is critical Each chapter has 2,000 words, of which 1,500 words are all water, 300 words are punctuation marks, and only 200 words are the main text One thing needs three chapters to explain

The writing is good, please give me some help, The author is afraid that the protagonist is not ruthless enough, and is born with a body of steel, so he gave you a fruit, and the fruit's ability is a little bit different. Personally, it's a bit of a drama, If you want to develop into a big person. In the later stage, if you directly improve your strength with a perfunctory plot like the one at the beginning, it is probably not going to work, and you will probably collapse. It's like a certain protagonist becomes the sun god and everyone complains about it. Sauron's combat power soars but no one says lies. Do you understand what I mean? Because the story itself is a fairy tale about strength, and the strength here is composed of sweat and talent. The Sun God is the best example of deviating from the basics of this story. This is why so many people are disgusted. On the other hand, the author's writing style is relatively down-to-earth and can easily bring out the funny elements. However, it highlights one part and reduces the drama of other parts accordingly - or in other words, without sufficient level, it cannot be better integrated with other styles. For example, if you are funny one second and want to create a touching atmosphere the next second, or if you want to be funny but also passionate or deep, it will be difficult. I haven't seen the complete fighting scene yet, so it's not easy to comment. At least for now, the cuteness and portrayal of Yamato's scenes are better integrated - According to the current selling points, the cover is still not highlighted, and it is much better for Kaido or Yamato instead of an inexplicable man. The introduction is much better than the cover.

Set a small goal and stick to it until the book is finished.

Oh, no wonder, I said, it turns out that the fruit is the "omnipotent" book lover's opinion.

I don't know what everyone thinks about Senryōdo transforming Baki into the Yonko. Anyway, after the Nika Fruit came out, looking at Baki, I think it can be regarded as starting from scratch, step by step to reach the Yonko and the Pirate King (doge)

I don't know if there is any way to rewrite it later, but the nonsense I wrote earlier was too much, and the description in my mind was too much. After reading twenty chapters, my writing style is not good.

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Kaido's son-in-law, please note that Yamato is 2.63 Meters tall

Change the title of the book. Pirate: Kaido is my father

This novel is under review! I admit that I read King Crimson a little bit, but I'm not indifferent to good or bad. The writing of this novel is indeed not very good. I have read nearly a hundred chapters and I haven't seen anything about what the protagonist is doing, and he is still only 8 years old... Practicing.

Is it okay for Black Maria to become a regular? Despite the ugliness of her fruit, she and Stussy really fulfilled my fantasy

Because there are not many of them now, but as far as the plot is concerned, I think the current image of the protagonist is better than the protagonists of other One Piece fans. At least it feels like a flesh-and-blood person.

Quite cute

I feel that the description of the fruit that the protagonist eats is too self-aware. Anything with self-awareness should be wary of three points.

The animal-type phantom beasts have the form of the snake fruit Ouroboros. According to mythology, the largest Ouroboros can grow to hundreds of miles long. Their heads look like cows' heads, and their bodies look like dragons' bodies, but they don't have dragon-like manes and scales. Ouroboros have an insatiable appetite and will devour all edible materials wherever they go, even softer limestone. Ouroboros is distributed in the mountains of the dark and cold north. It breathes every five hundred years, and the breath it breathes changes into a hurricane on earth. When breathing, Ouroboros opens its mouth and swallows all the materials brought by the hurricane. After precise decomposition and reorganization, Ouroboros sends the materials back to the world.

Stars

Did the protagonist eat the fruit? , In fact, I want to say that there is no need to eat the fruit at all, just write that the protagonist has Kryptonian blood, there is no weakness at all, and there is no need to even have domineering power.

If Kaido wasn't physically strong, he would have been sucked dry by his aunt.

After seeing Momonosuke's treatment, he cut off his children and grandchildren! I burst out laughing 😂😂😂

Yinglong image reference

Who the hell is Yamato? I want to know who is the woman who can interest Kaido