I Created the Legend of Terra in Naruto

Up to now, the plot (Chapter 60) has been written too slowly. Usually, they either break away from the ninja village and establish an organization, or they directly become the mastermind behind the scenes. There is no real plot development that can summarize the events of Chapter 60 in one sentence, but overall it is still broad enough that it is worth watching.

Personal evaluation ✪✪✪✪✪✪ (out of ten stars) (you can read it, but it's a pity to abandon it if it's tasteless) The writing is good, but the main shortcoming is that it is too slow to get into the topic (water). I haven't seen the apostle after reading more than 50 chapters. Where is the apostle? (I didn't count the protagonists) I came to watch it because of the apostles. I read the reviews and found that there are only 3 apostles at the moment, but there are 14 apostles! Also, when will the protagonist's sister be exposed? There will be follow-up reviews, but these are the current issues.

How many versions of Arad continent are there?

Come on, I hope it will be more and more exciting in the future

Four big poisonous points: First, the protagonist's sister. This character is very fascinating. The protagonist has past life memories, cheats, and has just opened the kaleidoscope. How can a guy who does not exist in the original plot be so awesome? Are you writing a dual-protagonist novel? It robs the protagonist of the limelight too much and makes the protagonist look like trash. Secondly, Namikaze Minato's rise to power was expected by the public, and all his supporters in the village disappeared. However, after he survived, it was as if he had been assassinated by the Third Generation, and he just watched helplessly as the Uchiha clan who saved their family of three continued to be targeted by the Third Generation and Danzo? Just because you haven't completely taken over the power doesn't mean you don't have any power at all. Third, Namikaze Minato gained his reputation on the battlefield of Kumo Ninja. He instantly killed fifty Jounin Kumo Ninjas. He was able to defeat the Fourth Raikage and Kirabi alone. He is still alive. How dare the Kumo Ninja Village come to Konoha to steal the Hyuga Clan and roll his eyes like in the original work? Isn't this nonsense?       ，，，，，，，，？ Finally, if you don't know how to write about conspiracies and intrigues, then write less, and you will be "flawless" at every turn. Do you have the writing power?

List of the Thirteen Apostles of 'Terra' (updated with the progress of the novel, and may be leaked in advance due to plot synopsis and other reasons) Apostle Zero: The God of Creation of Terra, 'The Great Will' Caroso. Successor: Uchiha Li. The first apostle: 'The Destiny' Kahn. Successor: Nagato. The second apostle: 'Weeping Eyes' Held. Successor: Jun Uchiha. The third apostle: 'Tianjiao' Prey. Successor: Neji Fourth Apostle: 'Conqueror' Casillas. Successor: Kisame. The fifth apostle: 'Stalker' Shilok. Successor: Itachi Uchiha. The Sixth Apostle: 'Black Plague' Di Ruigi. Successor: Orochimaru. The Seventh Apostle: Anton the 'Flame Devourer'. Successor: Uchiha Sasuke. The Eighth Apostle: 'Long-Legged' Lotus. Successor: Xiaonan. The Ninth Apostle: 'Maker' Luke. Successor: Scorpion. The tenth apostle: 'Tyrannosaurus King' Bakar. Successor: Uchiha Shisui. The Eleventh Apostle: Ozma, the 'God of Chaos'. Successor: Obito. The Twelfth Apostle: 'Saint' Michael. Successor: Hatake Kakashi. The Thirteenth Apostle: 'Prophet' Celia. Successor: Uchiha Yao. Don't ask me why there are fourteen of the Thirteen Apostles. Ask me why there are five of the Four Heavenly Kings.

If the second sister goes to Naruto, then the Naruto universe will be the nourishment for the second sister to revive Terra. If the cracks in the different dimensions are opened and any apostle is transferred, nothing will happen to Otsutsuki!

Your Terran character is a bit low. Look at the Shinigami next door. The Spirit King who created the three realms is at the same level as the apostle. How many of these Hokages can compare?

Uchiha Yao

The ability obtained by Uchiha Ri's successor as Zero Apostle Caroso through 'Terra' (updated with the book) Ability 1: Absorption By activating this ability, you can absorb your own chakra or ownerless and scattered chakra to promote Terra's recovery, and Terra's recovery will feed back to Uchiha Ri's Sharingan. Through this ability, you can bypass the restriction that the Sharingan must be emotionally stimulated in order to evolve. At the same time, the evolutionary restrictions of the Kaleidoscope are not affected (it is no longer necessary to fuse the Kaleidoscope of a loved one), and the same applies to the above. Ability 2: Gogami Ronbu Through this ability, Uchiha Ri's Susanoo can arm Caroso's Kamikaze. The Divine Wheel is not only a symbol of the gods, but also a deadly weapon that can be used for attack, defense and flight. When equipped with a divine wheel, Uchiha Ri's Susanoo is stronger than an ordinary person's Susanoo. In addition, the armament of the Divine Wheel is determined by Uchiha Ri's will. You can choose to be armed, or you can just summon Susano's body alone without being armed. Follow-up capabilities: unknown

I couldn't understand the main character's operation, and I couldn't tell what the 12 Apostles were doing. The so-called Terra was only mentioned occasionally, and bubbled up from time to time. I came here to kill the ninja world with the 12 Apostles, but I was confused when I saw the thief, saying that he was trying to sell someone else's meat. He also mentioned it from time to time, saying that it matched the name, so he just mentioned it.

It turns out that the fourth generation of this book has no supporters and no influence at all. 666, After all the trouble, the third generation acts as Hokage, so why are you trying to save the fourth generation? Wouldn't it be better to have a plot advantage? Just take care of your injuries for the rest of your life.

It's quite vicious. It's forced to conform to the original work. I don't dare to write any of my own ideas.

Mark it and avoid it later.

In Chapter Ten, Don't Give Up, the protagonist's kaleidoscope ability Amaterasu; Uchiha saved the fourth generation, and the station was moved to the outskirts after meritorious service.

He has the power of an apostle but is still limited to one village, and he has to protect Konoha instead of secretly stealing nutrients to strengthen himself. The layout is too small, and the plot only loses the death of some characters compared to the original work. He is still the kind of author who will not continue writing after the death of a few original characters. The death of a few less characters does not change the plot of the original work. After all, it is just a self-motivated essay.

After saving Minato, no one was seen in Chapter 50, you might as well not save him, and the heroine is so embarrassing that my scalp goes numb.

Let me make a complaint, after saving the fourth generation, it is really a bit poisonous. Minato was only receiving medical treatment, not dead. What is the difference between what you wrote next and the one who died? The same goes for the character Yao, who is full of loopholes. He only likes watching it if he has a bit of a shaking M or a shaking S. He pulls his ears every day, and I am very curious. Who would do this except for those who are in love, oh, except for the yandere. The main character feels dizzy a lot. The plot is not good if it is dizzy too much, but occasionally it is okay.

Some protagonists have Nagato, but some protagonists don't have Nagato. Moreover, Nagato's eyes are not his own, so the protagonist barely wins. What a waste.

Let's put it this way, Minato was rescued by the protagonist, but his account was banned, and he was said to be seriously injured, and then he lay dead at home for more than fifty chapters (I only saw more than fifty chapters)

. . I thought it was Terraria

It's okay for the fourth generation to become invisible after being seriously injured. The plot of forcing the third generation to return to Hokage is really blunt. It's better to just write the fourth generation to death and forget about it.

Just looking at it, one question is whether to weaken dnf, if so I will leave.

How to say it! Suddenly high and sometimes low, it is tasteless to eat and it is a pity to discard it.

I'm too self-satisfied, suppressed and brainless, don't watch it

The heroine is really bad, delete it. Even if it is useful in the later stage, there is no need to increase the number of words in the early stage.

Forcibly giving the protagonist wisdom on Yao's side

23 Monthly tickets please improve

Are you sure you've ever DNFed?

What the hell is this introduction? Apostolic power is given casually?