Naruto in the Diary

This kind of thing needs to be done like an eagle. Otherwise it looks like 250

This protagonist looks a bit like Akihara Kagura

Don't give up, there are a lot of fun people now, so we need to write about the fun genre

Orochimaru heard that the reincarnation of the dead body would hinder his immortality. His first reaction was not curiosity but exaggerated surprise. He screamed in pain and impossibility. Why? ? ? Don't understand

I have been wandering for half my life without meeting the enlightened master → A sudden enlightenment came to my mind                                                                                         →

Your tone sounds a bit like another Naruto novel.

I can't stand the protagonist's personality and behavior (chaotic neutrality and constant trouble-making). Maybe others like it. I withdrew first.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

It's the book about the mastermind behind Fire Style, and it also deceived Danzo into lameness.

Opening a new book so soon

The symbol used for dialogue is "". I thought it was the same, and I also used it when writing diaries. You couldn't tell the difference... It looked hard. It is a novice article in itself. Anyone who reads it line by line with you will only focus on the key points.

There are too many positive descriptions of the character's psychological activities... This method of directly writing the character's inner thoughts can only be more poisonous than using the author's narration to describe the character's psychological activities. If you are not good at describing psychological activities from the side, then simply describe only the external performance of the character's activities and leave enough blank space for the reader to make up his mind.