Thinking back, Lin Yue once had a passionate youth steeped in full-blown chuunibyou.
And so,
After transmigrating, he had planned to strive onward, fight one powerful enemy after another, and ultimately become an immortal, an Immortal Venerable, an Immortal Emperor, a Heavenly Emperor: someone who could suppress all foes.
But just as Lin Yue was about to set out, the cultivation world's first golden finger went online and brought him back to reality in time.
[Word has it: A young woodcutter found an unknown cultivation manual deep in the mountains three days ago. He broke through three realms in a single day, displaying the makings of a genius... On his way home, he encountered a corrupt official and angrily struck out... He has now been taken to the execution ground, where his head is about to be chopped off.]
[Word has it: A disciple of a certain sect spent years studying every martial arts manual in the collection. Twenty-three days ago, he finally attained enlightenment and mastered the profound mysteries, breaking through the Qi Refining threshold overnight. Truly, such a heaven-gifted genius is beyond compare... He has now been possessed by a passing demonic cultivator.]
[Word has it: A ruthless demonic cultivator had a sudden insight into the possession technique amid a killing spree twenty days ago. Fourteen days ago, he possessed a genius disciple of a certain sect, his demonic flames blazing to the heavens... He has now been imprisoned by a renowned orthodox sect, which is torturing him in an attempt to force him to reveal the possession technique.]
[Word has it: A certain person was overflowing with good fortune and picked up a pill by the roadside... He has now been killed, and the pill is quietly waiting for the next passerby.]
After hearing these rumors, Lin Yue quickly reined in his aura and murmured to himself, “Should I keep my head down? Or keep my head down? Or keep my head down?!”
P.S. This book is also known as The Cultivation World Is Actually Like This, The Protagonist: How Is He Even Stronger Than Me?, and No, No, I'm Not a Genius!
The premise is okay, but there's too much unnecessary dialogue. I'm dropping it; it's just too padded out.
I've read six chapters, it's so tedious!
Too long-winded, too long-winded, too long-winded!
Should we raise it or not? That is the question.
My head hurts from reading this; there's just too much nonsense.
It's very verbose, writing a lot of irrelevant things, and then presumptuously thinking this and that.
It's too wordy; most of it is just various explanations and inner monologues. My head is spinning.
What would happen if Liaofan's request was changed to "um"?
Why not keep at it? You write very well. Try writing more; you'll get more exposure and more readers.
This is a forced attempt to show off, and it backfired spectacularly. As a 20-year veteran of Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform), if I can't understand it, who can? They started by saying the true disciple had arrived, then ran away—what kind of logic is that?! They explained it later, but it's just a series of nested scenarios. I've seen 30 of these nested scenarios; it's really annoying. Doesn't your logic ever get messed up?