This Shop Has Genuine Goods

I haven't finished it yet, so far I just saw the end of the copy of Peach Blossom Temple. But I still want to share my thoughts after reading it so far. I mean no harm, but I have some problems with wording and sentence making, so please bear with me. I just want to give my own opinion, but after all, I am just a novel reader, and I am not a professional. If the author really thinks what I said is wrong, just leave me alone and follow your own pace. In short, it's rare to see a new book that matches my taste. Go ahead and write it, I will support it (｡ò ∀ ó｡) First of all, let's talk about the protagonist's character. The author obviously wants to set the protagonist to be the kind of person who has an online IQ, is bold, and is not a virgin. Goldfinger is not the kind of person who can press and beat the devil at will. The protagonist has a certain ability to fight back, but he also needs to perform some necessary puzzle reasoning. But from the three dungeons I have seen so far, it is obvious that the protagonist's ability shaping is a bit behind his own character design. You can say that the protagonist's IQ is online. He was so stunned in Peach Blossom Temple that he couldn't see any clues, so he just kept lighting lamps and burning incense and walking around the temple. The off-site aid had just provided a few clues, but it turned into a mystery again. I searched the temple in the afternoon to no avail, and couldn't find any clues. I decided to wait until later in the evening to make amends. Most of the time, I was trying to flatter him. Then you have to say that the protagonist is bold. After the first dungeon, he was a little suspicious when he saw the darkness. He was startled, which is a bit inconsistent with his madness when he first appeared in order to stimulate his six-year lifespan. There is also the ability of the protagonist. Although the author later patched it up to almost eliminate the bugs in the ability of the protagonist, the protagonist seems not to have had the slightest idea of ​​having an off-site bug in the main text, such as the idea of ​​sending the materials for testing to see what they are. It's like something's not quite right. Then I feel like the author has not been able to control the rhythm of the copy so far. The first copy ended in a hurry with heavy thunder and small raindrops. The same goes for the second copy. I wrote a bunch of mysteries that were not completely solved in the end. It's like watching a live horror game. After the UP owner triggers a bunch of plots, he finds the key, opens the door and leaves the mansion without exploring the plot behind it at all, which is very frustrating. The third dungeon seemed particularly slow due to the lengthened battle line. Like the second dungeon, it only gave out the mystery but did not allow the protagonist to solve it. The truth was finally revealed through the oral explanation of the old monk. Actually, I think that when the author was writing the copy, some of the less important mysteries in the middle could be properly solved, instead of dragging them all to the end. For example, in the section about the eternal lantern in Peach Blossom Temple, the protagonist can see it during the search, and then keep this related mystery in his heart. When others mention it later, the protagonist can give several hypotheses. When the old monk finally reveals the mystery, the protagonist can also sing with him, and it will not be a one-man show by the old monk. In this way, readers will not be confused by one mystery after another, and the protagonist's character will be established, and he does not need to be like his brother in Prometheus. [What clue? I can't come. JPG Anyway, it's my personal advice, so don't take it too seriously. If the author really feels that it is not possible, he can go at his own pace. After all, I am not a professional. Speaking of which, is this a long review? Ah, does Qidian have a long-term review? (Scratches head)

A few more chapters, I don't know if the author is too busy on weekdays, maybe he takes time to update every day, so that his thoughts are disturbed. The Peach Blossom Temple dungeon thread is a bit long, and the actual content in recent chapters is very little. The main character just walks around and lowers his head to meditate. It seems that we can only wait for a while to fatten up before looking at it.

Can you send me pictures of the protagonist's shop and the shop front? {"NickName":"Book Friends 20220416205242327","UserId":382925621}

Regarding the shroud, many people say it is useless. Here is an explanation. In the copy of Apartment No. 44, The shroud has no effect because the shroud worn is bad and was damaged by the ghost of Qingshan Hospital, but the memory was also deleted. I thought it was good, so I always thought it was still useful. It is mentioned in Chapter 11 that Qingshan Hospital is a trap. The original text is as follows (The purple nails reflect the silver moonlight, and the top is stained with a piece of gray cloth. The unique texture is somewhat similar to the pale fingers.) In the Peach Blossom Mountain copy, Lu Zhili was given a shroud, so the other one he took was good. The effect of the shroud is evident in this copy. Just in case someone didn't notice it in the copy, the function and performance will be explained later.

Why does the protagonist have to die? Wouldn't it be fun to let the props made by the supporting characters and the protagonist show off their power?

The biggest problem with this book is that in terms of currency, it should be written that they do not use money to buy the protagonist's things, but that they use their lifespan to buy them, and directly write invincible text.

Regarding the Ghost, The Ghost rating is a rating system compiled by the Supernatural Players Forum. It is based on the number of Ghost illustration fragments and is not a player panel system rating. Therefore, it does not absolutely represent the strength of the Ghost, but only the difficulty of activating the complete illustration. Of course, in most cases, the difficulty of activating the complete illustrated book also represents the strength of the ghost.

Your house only sells for one thousand a year, so cheap.

At first I thought it was a business stream, but then suddenly I became a player trying to break through levels. After watching two dungeons, I feel like it's not my cup of tea.

Please recommend a book of the same type where the protagonist sells ghost-catching props and catches ghosts by the way.

Alas, it's a pity. I just discovered that this novel is actually quite good. It's much better than those novels about ghosts that bully the weak and fear the strong. Alas, it's a pity that the market favors those novels now. It's really sad.

Xiaomu Village writes well

There is something wrong with this currency! The materials are all purchased after their useful life, and they are all based on years! How can there be so much life! It will definitely collapse in the later stage!

It feels like the author has a lot of malice towards the protagonist's golden finger. Except for the cheapest incense to exorcize spirits at the beginning, the more expensive shrouds and lamps later were deliberately cut down by the author. They are not as good as the lowest-end props.

Supernatural zone forum, rich buddy, memory flow copy, protagonist doing tasks. It can be said that the things I dislike about this type of novel are all gathered together. But I can't criticize it directly. After all, I've only read more than thirty chapters. There is still a bit of a formal feeling at the very beginning. I can only say that if it had been four to five years ago or even three to four years ago, I would have been able to watch it.

I looked at a few pictures and they are pretty good, but there are many shortcomings. For example, the things made by the protagonist are too cheap. You can look at Mysterious Resurrection. Although at the beginning, only a thousand ghosts can be exorcised. And there are 18 at the beginning. It doesn't look very comfortable. Make it a little more difficult. If it's not an invincible text, I suggest you make it a little more difficult to make, and it's too cheap.

This author wrote that he took it crookedly and took it to the ditch 😁😁😁

If I had known that I would become a eunuch, I would not have subscribed or rewarded

My investment is gone again Am I really a poisonous milk? ? ?

Regarding the production formula, because all production materials are provided by the mall, in order to ensure the interests of the mall, all the ingredients in the formula that can be easily obtained in the human world will not be disclosed in the formula. The names of the specific materials will be used collectively, such as the cloth of the strange shroud and the fuel of the soul-destroying lamp.