The Pale Ring

This is probably the most popular book on my bookshelf? My current evaluation is: if you don't have time, you can put it on the bookshelf, but if you have time, it's worth spending time to read. With the current information, I can only confirm that this book is a book about supernatural powers The meaning of the title is not revealed at all. It is discussed in the introduction, but not much The pros and cons are discussed together: 1. The book has a tight rhythm. From the beginning of the game to entering the tree city, the reader sees it Wild runs with the protagonist, and the daily part is compressed (it seems that the author is not good at writing about daily life) The movement of scene events can be quickly cut into a new "copy" after a short interval 2. The writing is concise, and the short chapter is not weak. The information obtained in a chapter with a small number of words can afford the problem of a small number of words 3. The lack of a clear main line, I pondered for a long time , understand where the feeling of fatigue lies In the content of nearly three hundred thousand subtitles, there is no clear driving force, encounter an event-to solve the event-new event-to solve again In addition to the first point, the lack of daily life makes the so-called compactness more like a directionless running 4. Inferring from the contact with the institute and the things and objects in the protagonist's lost memory, The author is already trying to launch a main line But because of the lack of content now, I don't know what the author can write, but I personally expect it to be very valuable All in all, I think this book is worth waiting for everyone who likes to read to find out why. Those who started reading it can just keep reading until it is finished. It is worth spending time to read!

The book is a good book, but it may not be a hit because of the way the author tells the story. . . For a niche, the threshold may be a little higher. Generally speaking, people will subconsciously avoid things they are not familiar with (referring to the narrative technique of continuous reversal in the early stage, which is very rare in the online literature world. It can be said that many readers are not familiar with this method), which means that it is easy to be persuaded to quit. Then maybe the introduction is a little off topic? Of course, it may also be because the introduction corresponds to the later stage and cannot be seen now (it is Chapter 22 at the time of commenting). I haven't seen the title of the book yet. I feel it may be the previous type of book title, which is different from the current mainstream clear-cut titles. Of course, this does not mean that the title and introduction of this type of book are not good. It can only be said that the market response may not be very good, but it does not matter if the author does not care about the market response. This review is purely a personal subjective evaluation. The entire article does not mean to teach anyone to do anything (including but not limited to teaching readers to read books or teaching authors to write books). If you think so, it must be the problem I expressed. The following is just nonsense and has nothing to do with this book. It is probably the words of the readers? : I have always believed that authors should not focus solely on studying the market (what kind of stories and what kind of narrative techniques are most profitable). The best situation should be that the author feels that the narrative techniques are sufficient, and he can write the story he wants to say according to his sincerity, show the world in his heart, and then write something that readers will like. (But this does not mean that you can completely abandon the study of skills. It just means that if you feel it is enough, go and learn it. If you learn enough, it will be a big hit. If you just write casually and can please both at the same time, it will be a big seller. However, this situation is very rare. More often, you have to stick to the center and find a good balance between pleasing the readers (market) and pleasing the author himself. Of course, if the author doesn't care so much about the market and just wants to tell the story, then he doesn't have to worry so much to please the market and just write his own book.

The writing is very good, the story atmosphere is very full, and it can be seen that the author is very careful. Come on, work hard to become a niche product, and you will become a god if you write a million words! The biggest problem at the moment is that updates are too slow...

I can't understand. As the country's Bureau of Investigation, we don't know everything we ask. What is the significance of the protagonist joining in? And after working on it for a long time, the main character is a person with super powers. What is the relationship between being the Lord of Shadows and the protagonist? Second personality? What are you doing if you don't want to regain your strength? I said earlier that if the people in the laboratory find it, you will forcibly devour the girl's mental power and complete the transformation. The result? Forgot the ball? Why are you helping the investigation bureau guy walk like a nanny?

It looks good, add oil

Is this update going to be cut off? It's a pity that I've only watched half of it and read the comments. As for the problem of immersion and satisfaction, the main reason is that the setting is not precise enough. Now it's a double-protagonist mutation game. Originally, according to the description, the protagonist should be the big devil. As a result, the weak Yang body has no way to strengthen the fusion and control the clown. He spends all day playing house with some mortals who don't know the so-called, passive solutions. Secret can neither improve strength nor establish influence. In fact, another way of thinking is that the protagonist directly conquers the awakened people and becomes his subordinates, then cultivates diehard loyalists, takes back the strength, establishes a lair in the realm, collects materials, and competes with the laboratory, or adds buff to the world, the number of awakened people increases, and the official identity power expands, which is better than the current situation where it is neither better nor worse. Come on, author, reorganize the details and hold on, it's a pity to cut it!

Can the protagonist later regain his intact state as a cold-blooded paranoid lunatic? Or have you always maintained a disabled mental state?

Come on, I remember that I wrote a book before, which was similar to a stand-alone game. I hope you become popular.

Happy New Year, I wish the author that the novel will be a hit in the new year😁

One update every six days, thank you for your hard work. There may be something very important to do. Come on.