I Can Plant Skill Trees

The writing is actually okay, but the problem is that it's too confusing, without any clue. The first 30 chapters are probably all about setting things up, and there are too many inexplicable things intertwined together. The plot seems to be incomprehensible, the causes and consequences are not laid out, and the protagonist's character is also weird. Goldfinger is complicated for its own sake. I just watched Chapter 37 from the beginning, and I didn't feel that it was any fun. The protagonist's occupation looked very awesome, but it didn't show what level of combat power the protagonist had. The main world and the other world alternated, and there was a strong sense of fragmentation.

The author's writing style and imagination are getting better and better, but the number of words is getting smaller and smaller. See if the author can write 1 million words. If the writing is full, there will still be a reward of 10,000.

Come on, come on, the author's imagination is really good, but it's a pity that the eunuch

So I'm the first one. Isn't the title of your book what it says? Don't lose dozens more pictures

This book has great ideas, but the problem is that it is too confusing, and what should I say, if the Chinese literature were better, I would not have read it in such a painful way. His paragraphing and sentence fragmentation are really uncomfortable, and his logic is also a bit poor. His writing brain circuit cannot be resisted and he slips away.

Oh my God! I originally started a novel to relax, but then I just read the first few chapters and it made me feel depressed. First, the setting and abilities, and then the introduction of the characters. Oh my goodness, it has to be about a father who is dead, a mother, a dead mother, and a grandparent. It's not like I haven't read novels about bitterness and hatred, but this is the first time I've seen such writing that makes people look depressed.

The protagonist's ability is best reported to the country. This is the best option. Let the country manipulate public opinion for you and make you a scientist, warrior, genius, evolver, etc., And then repay the country to achieve a win-win situation!

The author's setting is very good, but the writing is a bit too messy, just like the second chapter about the encounter with the flower elf. As a result, he started to write about the city-state without writing the end...

The setting is interesting, but the plot and presentation are a bit confusing

This book is not only messy at the beginning, but the whole thing is messy. The author just writes wherever he thinks? It completely ignores logic and doesn't talk about cause and effect at all. People who watch it are very confused and at a loss! The author has a good idea! It's just that the writing is so rubbish, and the main plot is very confusing. One moment I wander around in the Greek world, and the next moment I go to the projection world. The story of the Greek world is written in a mess, and the story of the projection world is also written without beginning or end. It can be seen that the author writes whatever he wants on a whim, but the result is that he can't explain the cause and effect, and the readers are confused. It can be said that the plot and story of the whole book are not smooth, and it is really unreadable!

The writing is too messy and completely unorganized. It can't even be called an article.

I feel that these recent chapters are a bit complicated, and I don't understand them well. There are too many settings in one chapter, and it's confusing. I can write them out bit by bit in the subsequent chapters. It's confusing to read them all together (Only personal opinion )

What should I say about this book? I don't know what I'm writing about the main plot, and the various settings are extremely troublesome. After writing about traveling to another world, there are a lot of setting data, which makes my head swollen. Forget it

It is recommended that the author take a look at the beginning of the props you wrote. There are settings, but it does not affect the development of the plot. The content is clear, focused, and revolves around the plot development of the protagonist. Don't set settings that affect the plot and make readers feel watery The plot revolves around the protagonist, do not flash the plot, and it is not recommended to engage in any "innovation" unless your innovation is indeed like the author of "Mysterious Resurrection" who innovated the concept of ghosts. A

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This book was very awkward to read.

There are too many typos and many sentences are not fluent.

Is this the legendary random update method?

First, there are too many language errors. You cannot separate those that should be separated by commas. Second, your brain is too big and your writing is illogical. You cannot explain what should be explained and what does not need to be explained. It took me a long time to write. After reading a few chapters, there are so many problems for now. Goodbye.

The writing is good, but the author has a lot of typos and sentences... Did he type too fast?

Why does it feel so confusing? Is the logic inconsistent?

It looks good, but can the updates be more regular?

It's so confusing. Why can't I understand it the more I look at it later?