Lord of the Mysteries!

It's best to be careful if you don't like soft rice. The characters are very impersonal, so they look a bit stiff. There are cute people, sad people, strong people, pessimistic people, extroverted people, even death💩 so many people don't even have a mother to cry. It's just a set of data, so it seems to have no soul. It's a purely narrative book📖, personal reflections. Why don't you have any friends of the same sex? It's too exaggerated to think of having a harem.

This book has the potential to be a big hit if the description of details is strengthened and the pacing is controlled. The current pacing is too fast and the fights are non-stop. The protagonist upgrades too quickly and is prone to collapse.

Please do more, I will always support you.

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The boss is a woman, the companion is a woman, the police officer handling the case is a woman, and the two masters and apprentices who refine the medicine are also women. The proportion of women is too high, and most of the positive and important roles are women. The men are either villains or sidekicks. Looking at the protagonist's personality, he doesn't look like a stallion type, right?

1. The background is Western fantasy, but the pretentiousness in talking and doing is still too oriental, and the things are neither east nor west 2. The protagonist has not developed the ability of Goldfinger. To be honest, it is just a physical attack. Since Goldfinger can improve the skill level, you should learn more skills at this time, such as physical attack, spell attack, movement speed, constitution (defense), etc., And improve these aspects simultaneously. Otherwise, except for attack, the protagonist himself is still an ordinary person. This protagonist's brain is abnormal and he is not a qualified protagonist.

An idea is that the secret training level in the article will have a secret organ. If multiple secret skills are required for more than twelve levels, the secret skills will not cooperate with each other and are simply accumulated in quantity. If the secret skills cooperate with each other to form a system, it can be advanced, such as legs, feet, shoes, lungs (endurance). After advanced, it will become an agility system legend. If multiple systems cooperate, such as fighting, movement, and resistance to strikes, it can become Myth Because the mysterious organs are not necessarily physical, the combination is not necessarily physical. For example, if the organ is a gun, a boat, or an artillery, you can be promoted to captain The number of component organs is different, and the strength is also different. Four components are stronger than three The system combinations of each myth can overlap. For example, if you fight and move, you are a warrior, but if you move and hide, you are an assassin. , Fighting, gunner, movement is like a gun fighter

I feel so weak. The villain's ritual is destroyed at every turn, and the villain's IQ is not enough. In other books, the instrument is activated and cannot be destroyed. The ritual is in a different space and cannot be found normally. The villain of this book is a little destroyed when the ritual is activated. Let's stop. Not only the protagonist is so weak, but the villain is also very weak. There is no such despair, suffocation, grandness of the villain's ritual, or the tension that if you don't do something sexy soon, you will be beaten Mediocre villain, mediocre ending 😵

At first, I thought that there was a huge gap in strength between the cult organization and the security bureau, and that they could only develop followers secretly, like rats in the ground afraid to show their faces. It turns out that the strength of large-scale cult organizations is on the same order of magnitude as that of the Security Bureau. Even two large-scale cult organizations are strong enough to resist the Security Bureau. With such strength, do they still need to hide? Do you still need to secretly develop believers? Just break the soil and become independent.

I saw the latest one, let me tell you a few words, you are an extraordinary gunman, but you don't learn the art of gun fighting, and you become a gross gunman? Looking at what you wrote, Pigfoot keeps muttering, it's time to learn to fight, it's time to learn to fight, dozens of chapters have passed, where is the fight? How many times have you encountered danger? Once he was choked, and once he was almost disemboweled. Can you give pig's feet some IQ?

The Security Bureau is too overwhelmed. How can we suppress all the cultists? One organization branch and the Security Bureau branch can fight against each other. If there are a few more, it will be over. The Security Bureau's actions are always known to the cultists and ambushed. The Security Bureau in this article is resisting the cultists, right?

That's too cool. What I just said should be explained again immediately. If a woman appears, even if she appears several times, her clothing and appearance must be described repeatedly every time, which greatly affects the reading experience.

There are too many women, and all of them are beautiful. It's boring to watch. It's already 2023, not 2013.

This book gives me the impression that it is better than the previous ones. Compared with the starting point, most of the current works are still worth reading, but they cannot withstand criticism. In fact, there are many shortcomings, but after thinking about it, I forget it, because there are very few good works in the Western fantasy genre. If I say it, there are better ones. I can only say that the current writing style of the Lord of Secrets is a bit childish, but it does not affect the general direction. As long as it is not a big stupidity, it can be forgiven 😁

The writing is getting worse and worse! After developing for so long, when the evil god came, he was still a minion, useless and could only passively follow the crowd. I don't even know the point of watching it for so long!

The story setting is very interesting, but can there be fewer common sense errors or can it be changed after others suggest it? The muzzle velocity of sonic bullets is said to be many times faster than that of ordinary pistols. . . The initial speed of ordinary pistols is basically the speed of sound, sniper rifles can reach twice the speed of sound, and there are also ceiling-mounted gas lamps. Has the author really seen any gas lamps with suspended ceilings? The chandeliers are all kerosene or candles, and the gas lamps are either floor-mounted or wall lamps. Moreover, the gas lamps need to be lit manually, and they do not light up as soon as the switch is turned on.

Remember, what you are writing is a novel, not a composition that requires a certain number of words. If you repeat a sentence twice, it will still remain intact. Doesn't this drive people away?

Have you seen the one behind it? I really like the setting. I just saw the released chapter, but I feel it is good. Moreover, the protagonist is like a robot, upgrading, killing monsters, and completing tasks. I wonder what happens later?

What can I say about the writing? It's too bland It's not that there are no twists and turns and no battles, but after watching it, I feel like drinking coffee without adding sugar. It's sweet but not completely sweet In addition, the characters have almost no personality to speak of. I've been watching the male protagonist for most of the time and I can't summarize a general image. Maybe this is the reason for this dull feeling. Because I can't empathize, I don't feel it when the protagonist and a group of people fight to death.

It's rubbish. It's really poisonous. The main character's three-ring gun comes standard with armor-piercing bullets. But when you actually use it, you need to engrave runes on the bullets one by one. You don't have time to use it when fighting at the same level. When you fight at low levels, you don't need armor-piercing bullets. Do you think it's poisonous or not?

To be honest, I haven't watched it for a long time. Felin should have died since the evil god came out. The protagonist is not unable to die and does not have a happy ending. I calculated this based on your settings. Felin is like a grasshopper jumping around in front of the evil god. He will die if he pinches him. If he is not dead, it is just because you force him to continue his life 🙂

Such a good book was ruined by the author. It started so well, why didn't you write more about it later? I have no sense of expectation at all and I don't want to continue reading. How great is the expectation, how great is the disappointment. I started chasing this book at 130,000 yuan. I don't want to pursue this book now. Too watery, too disappointing. Well!

What a great book! I didn't write it down later. The early world structure has been completed. Just add details slowly. But the author arranged a lot of villains to add big details. A small villain with a lot of supporting characters. The protagonist fights all the way, fight or fight? Does the protagonist only know how to fight? Will the world simply be destroyed if the protagonist is no longer around? The protagonist is to understand the world and increase the knowledge of the world. This is the next step. The protagonist comes into contact with knowledge such as alchemical formulas, cursed objects, alchemical objects, and sequence promotion to increase these knowledge. The world structure structure is basically almost complete. The author does not add this further knowledge. So the backend of this book is very watery.

Author, you have also read recent fans' posts. To be honest, I feel the same way. I don't want to say whether it is dragging the plot. Recently, the protagonist Felin has been struggling to cope with the situation, not to mention the big boss. Even with the evil god's men, there is an obvious strength gap. This is not fatal. There is something wrong with the foundation of the setting of the protagonist's force value. In terms of abilities, the protagonist can currently teleport, have space, have clones, and detect Check, these auxiliary abilities are almost full. The problem is that the protagonist's combat power is now stretched. He has no problem defeating small monsters, but he has no decisive ability to defeat big monsters. According to the original setting, the sniper rifle bullet annihilation should be able to take on this task, but now it seems that the shield can block the monsters, which is inconsistent with the initial design. As a result, fighting monsters now becomes a bastard punch. After a random beating, you can't defeat it, escape, and sometimes almost can't escape. The bosses on our side have basically been wiped out again. Haha, I feel like you are in trouble. I was quite optimistic about this, but I am disappointed!

Incredible plot and outrageous setting. But that's not important. What's important is that I kept reading for a long time.

The evil god came out too early, and the protagonist has not yet gained strength. Can the evil god come out again after the protagonist has gained strength? The weaker ones will come out first, and then the stronger ones, one by one, this general trend comes out, the protagonist is still a weakling, and then he hides around, it's boring, he's just as miserable as the previous cultists

The setting of this book simply forces people into the camp of evil gods and cults.

If you haven't read "The Holy Blood Warrior" and "The Ultimate Knight" and don't think this novel is interesting, you can read these two books. The basic core is almost the same, and the protagonist's plug-ins are relatively simple and crude cheats. It stands to reason that the author should be getting better and better as he writes, but I feel that this novel is a bit sloppy and not as good as the author's previous two novels.

After the 3rd secret, I kept a running account, which was completely different from before.

Tell me when you open a new book, don't open it quietly by yourself