Prequel to Journey to the West: the Story of the Jiao Demon King

Specially reward 500 for commenting. The more I think about it, the angrier I get. I still need 500 fan points to comment. After transforming into a dragon, a dragon is 1.70 Meters tall and has a thin body. Was your dragon malnourished as a child?

It is better to use a trident as a weapon, but it is still water-based, and the knife is inferior.

Based on this situation, it seems that the protagonist may be weaker than in the original work. After all, except for the one who masters the five thunders, all other magical powers that he can use rely on equipment. As the saying goes, there are only wrong names and not wrong nicknames. The nickname of Fu Hai Monkey King must be justified. In the original book, if there was an extra fight during the sworn vows, it should have been arranged for the Jiao Demon King to be proficient in the magical power of water. It is most likely to be one of those that can create land by rowing rivers, overturning rivers and seas, pushing mountains to fill the sea, or taking mountains and crossing the sea.

To be honest, I really feel that the protagonist is a bit weak. He has been practicing for less than a hundred years. His spells basically rely on armor. He is not able to overturn the sea and the mountain is not big. The traditional background of the Jiao Demon King is that he was one of the nine dragons that pulled Donghuang's chariot during the prehistoric times, a disciple of Kunpeng in the North Sea, the illegitimate son of the Dragon King in the North Sea, and so on. Then he had a huge underwater force and was called the Great Sage of the Sea. Of course, we are not involved in prehistoric times, and the authentic Journey to the West myth is also good, but Sun Wukong has 72 cave demon kings and more than 40,000 monkey soldiers, and the protagonist has few people. Moreover, you skipped the three hundred years when Sun Wukong ruled Huaguoshan. It really shouldn't have happened. It should have developed over three hundred years and become stronger before becoming sworn friends. Because it has only been about 50 years since he claimed to be the Great Sage of Overturning the Sea, the protagonist's ability to become stronger must be limited.

It's really hard not to vomit. Now that I can speak, I'll tell you everything. Let me say in advance that I like this book very much and it is very well written, but there are a few things I am not satisfied with that I have to talk about. 1. I think the timing of the protagonist is a bit late. Although the background of the Seven Saints is not explained in the original text, they are sworn to Sun Wukong and have some background power. They should be the demon kings who have been famous for a long time. The protagonist only opened the mountain within 20 years after Sun Wukong went out, which is a bit late. 2. The true form of the Bull Demon King is eight hundred feet long and a thousand feet high, more than 3,000 meters tall. The protagonist, Jiaolong, is only 300 meters tall. Of course, his size cannot indicate his strength, but I always feel that the protagonist is actually too small. 3. The magical powers in the book are all taken from Disha Seventy-Two and Tiangang Thirty-Six. It seems that there are no magical powers except these 108 magical powers. Tiangang Thirty-Six is ​​a great Taoist supernatural power, which should not be revealed easily. I don't think the Seventy-Two Small Magical Powers should be so common. It seems like everyone knows some of them wherever they go. This is no ordinary small trick. 4. Why do you, the author, put quotation marks around everything? Your name, skills, and realm are all in quotation marks.

I've only read a few chapters so far, and they're pretty good. I just want the main character to be a little taller, and he's in the form of a dragon...

I specially rewarded and commented Up to Chapter 81 of the novel, the novel is very comfortable to read. After finishing the novel, the score of this novel should not be bad. But, a lot of space is used in the article to introduce the environment and cultivation (it should be said that a lot of space is used to introduce the environment. In a 4000-word chapter, it is estimated that only 500 words are about the protagonist), and the story that happens to the protagonist is very small. How should I put it? After reading a chapter, I would say there is a protagonist, but it seems that there is not, so I would say there is no protagonist, eh! There are only a few hundred words related to the protagonist. I usually read novels, and I read good books. I can't just delete them from the bookshelf or add them to the blacklist. I was confused about your book. I said it was good, but I didn't feel it was good. I thought it was not good. It would be a pity to delete it... You really worry me to death...

The protagonist must be the boss of the seven saints in the future no matter what 🙂

I can't bear it anymore, so I'll give you a reward of 500. After Sun Wukong was born from the stone, "How can the Monkey King live happily and innocently for three to five hundred years." He was the queen of Huaguo Mountain for three to five hundred years before he went out to travel and become a disciple. Then he became a disciple and studied arts for a total of about 20 years. But as written in your book, from the time when the sound of the birth of the stone monkey was heard in Luzhou, Beiju, to the time when the protagonist came to Huaguo Mountain, it would not have been more than 20 years at most. Then when we arrived at Huaguo Mountain, Sun Wukong had already gone out? The Demon King is already here? Author, have you eaten up the more than 300 years of Sun Wukong's rule?

I guess Taoist Haiyan is Shen Gongbao. I don't know if I'm right. After Shen Gongbao became a god, wasn't he used to suppress Beihai Haiyan?

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Once the style is set, don't listen and don't change it randomly. Toad said that the biggest achievement for a novice is the growth gained from writing a book. In terms of rationality, seriousness in checking information, and deep exploration of original ideas to expand the plot, it is still very good. I look forward to finishing it, and I also look forward to your growth.

Alive again😎

By the way, you have too many characters. The characters are important people. There are 74 of you, and you wish you had one for every monster. You got a lot of people who died in less than one chapter.

This update has less than 10 chapters in half a year, 6

I finished it today. Will there be more tomorrow? Each chapter is too short.