Nyx's Curse

The plot feels forced and contrived. The protagonist, just as he's trying to understand the supernatural, immediately encounters a harmless superhuman, who conveniently drops a letter in front of him—a letter with no encryption that leads him to the supernatural community. Then, just when the protagonist is desperately needing the secret code to join, a random passerby hands him the code for free.

The plot suggestion for Chapter 15 is either to omit it entirely or to kill them off. Killing the cult members while keeping the son, who doesn't see them as wrong, needlessly sows seeds of hatred. This doesn't just annoy the protagonist, it annoys the readers.

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It's not as good as the first book, The Cursed Ship. Maybe I'll write a similar one next time.

It's not as good as the first book about the ship; it's bland.

Looking around, it's all female characters; I'm a little hesitant to make a move. I'll just wait and see. (After all, this isn't an urban drama.)

The author should really take some time to develop their skills. The early and mid-stages of *The Ship of Curses* were almost phenomenal, with good adventure and harem pacing. Aside from the slightly weak writing style and a vague power system, everything else was quite good.

The author's "The Cursed Ship" is quite good, but the main characters are too much of a simp. For example, that vampire—they've only just met, yet he gives her all the good stuff and helps her unconditionally. He's a dog who eats shit, a total simp.

The Curse of Nyx? I didn't find any connection between the plot and the Goddess of Night.

Sorry, I've gone back to the countryside and don't have time to write right now.