Among the Tombs, I Am the Chief of the Xieling Raiders

When I saw Chapter 191, the Folklore Affairs Bureau invited the protagonist to enter. Later, the protagonist proposed to set up security, and then Ding Sitian said There can't be more than 30 people. Later, I called home and agreed to join. Let's analyze it. At the beginning of the novel, it said that it would not work alone, but it never hired any assistants. It should be easy to find assistants in that era, so that when we arrived in Qinling, there was no one around except Old Hu Fatty. They were all official, and they said that there could not be more than 30 people. Haha, then why are you writing this novel? Which force only has 30 people? And if you join, no matter how much power you are given, there will only be one result, and that is that you will always be a tool. So what do you think, author? Do you think this kind of organization is kind? Since you are writing about tomb robbing, don't write these official things. Otherwise, you won't be able to write anymore, and you will lose interest in reading. When you read about 200 chapters, the prisoner wanted to be kicked by the fat man, and then Ding Sitian thought about whether this was considered a lynching. You see, this is just because you haven't joined. If you join, what you write will have no logic at all. Even though it is a parallel world, there must be logic.

After reading other Tomb Raider fanfics, when I read this book, I was pleasantly surprised, very surprised. For others, start at Niulan Mountain - General's Tomb - Guandong Fortress - Ghost Forest - go home. This book, Niulan Mountain - Tomb of the General - First Floor - Second Floor - Third Floor of the Guandong Fortress - Yin and Yang Seam - Wuxianghua - Run away - Call the folks to move supplies - Just call the officials to collect the arms. This book gave me the feeling that hidden levels were opened after swiping the pictures, so it was a real surprise. From now on, every tomb is the same, but the author of each book has a different writing technique. Other books feel more procedural, with every level being the same. This book just doesn't take the usual path, so let's take the ancient city of Jingjue as an example. For other books, find a guide - Hiding from the Sandstorm - Gusu Tomb - Army Ants - Abandoned Ancient City - Zagrama Mountain - Entering the Tomb - Breaking Through the Pass - Tomb Collapse - Escape. This book began to change from Gusu Tomb. Discover the organs, study the documents, discover the sacrifices, and use the waterway to reach the interior of Jingjue Ancient City through the sacrifices. Then divide the work and cooperate to achieve the goal and retreat along the waterway. [There is a lot of content, it is recommended to read it in detail]. This book is more detailed, and the protagonist is not a lone hero, nor is he a king leading a kid to complete the map. Everyone has their own character and role, no redundancy or nonsense. Of course, since it is a comprehensive tomb, each tomb will have changes outside of the plot, and this often gives me the excitement of opening a blind box. The author's writing style is very good, and the various plots are written in great detail. [The Tomb of King Xian feels amazing to me. The ecology inside it forms a cycle in the author's writing, so that the methods in the tomb can remain unchanged for thousands of years.

I have never seen such a badass protagonist. Every time I go to the grave, I know the ending and how to do the next step. I never say anything. I don't know how to explain what I say. The fake orangutan asks other people's opinions. Will you listen to what others say? The plot is slow and the word count is low.

This system is too rubbish. The rewards are all useless and do not improve the protagonist's strength.

The Tomb of General Ye Rengou was only completed in Chapter 74. It's really too boring. There are a lot of irrelevant things. The system rewards are not very powerful. They are basically foreign objects. I don't see anything that improves my own strength.

It's still a bit of a protagonist at the beginning, but it becomes a commentary later on. The system is gone, so why did I send you here? Listen to you babbling? The plot has gone astray, a lot of things are happening, and the protagonist is a little too developed. Are you sure he is not a serious character?

I'm talking about the Shiling Rikishi, but none of my subordinates are funny. I don't even know how to use the equipment of the Kanto Fortress to arm myself, and I even gave it to the official. Why are you so showy?

They said the timeline was messy, but I think the early stages were fine. At least the author has managed to let readers clearly know the development of the plot. Moreover, the protagonist of this book is not like other male protagonists in tomb robbing fan fiction. Like Stallion, he accepts all female protagonists. The descriptions of other supporting characters are quite good, and readers can easily get involved with the carefree character similar to Fatty. The tomb-robbing fanfics I used to read were either about stallions or the kind where the system was outrageous. This kind of article is generally a good article, and you will feel happy after reading it. Why start with the Qilin bloodline, and then add the Faqiu Tiangong inheritance? You made me think that the protagonist is the little brother, or the little brother is Zhang Qiling. It's true that I like reading cool articles, but that doesn't mean I have no brains, so this book made me feel that the characters in the article all have brains, unlike other mindless cool articles, so I hope the author will stick to it (●'◡'●)

It's too boring. It took me a long time to write a general's tomb. Apart from the original plot of "Ghost Blowing the Lamp", what else could I come up with? Also, the system is so weak, my head is buzzing just watching it. I didn't want to comment at first, but I shook my head because you poured water into me.

The system disappeared after about 200 chapters, and it was all verbose writing.