The Blood Moon Looms over the Abyss, This World Is Terrifying

My own grades are very poor, but as a brother who recommends each other for positions, I dare not give suggestions. I just want to share some of my feelings after reading your book. I'll admit first that I didn't read the beginning of your book, but only the last few chapters. This may be a bit one-sided, please don't mind. But I'm absolutely sincere. The last few chapters of yours have given me the feeling that each chapter has no focus. After reading it, I seem to know something, but I also seem to have seen nothing. In other words, there is no plot progression in the chapter, and it seems like the protagonist is just wandering around. I guess you want to write more details about life so that you can build a three-dimensional world. But there is a problem. No matter it is the world view or anything else, it always serves the story, so your foreshadowing of the world should be brought out in the plot and story, rather than specifically making up an interaction to explain it. Including your dialogue and character design, as well as the recent chapters, I feel that you want to make jokes. These ideas are correct in themselves, but they must also be based on plot progression and storytelling, which are not available. I think every time you write a chapter, you have to think carefully about what you want to write about this chapter, what is the key point, whether it is foreshadowing or climax, what the protagonist gains or loses, this is the first point. Secondly, what is the highlight of this chapter. The third is what is the hook of this chapter. Instead of writing wherever you think now. Whether it is world view setting or anything else, it all serves the story, and character is the foundation and source of the story. Don't sacrifice the good for the bad.

Name: "The Virgin in Prayer" Author: Giovanni Battista Salvi da Sassoferrato 17th-century Italian Baroque painter (Related Works Chapter 10 Virgin Mary) This painting gives people a sense of stability and calm, as if we are in the same room with the Virgin Mary, and she is praying quietly and devoutly in front of us. The background of the entire painting is plain, pure and dark, so that when people look at the painting carefully, nothing can divert our attention from her white headdress, lowered face, and gently held hands. There seems to be a beam of bright light in the painting, scattered on her dazzling blue shawl, making people unable to take their eyes away. The painter's delicate and realistic brushwork seems to give life to even the folds of the fabric. Our Lady of Prayer, we listen to her devout prayers, and in her infinite mercy, let go of careful egoism and anxious pursuit of quick success. The Madonna's eyes are downcast in the painting. If we look up at her on the prayer mat, or even on a hospital bed or death bed, when her gentle gaze falls on us, it will give us the freedom and dignity to regain our strength.

The personal quality of your pig's feet is too mediocre, like a little girl who can only scream, and does not reflect the characteristics that can become an elite. Then how can he survive every time?

The Riddler is really hard to keep up.

First of all, thank you book friends for your valuable opinions! I see that there are many book friends who have this kind of question, so I wrote this paragraph in "Yanzu!! Welcome to the book friend circle" in reply to the "Don't Run Skar" book friend's comment sheet. I admit that the pace of the first book is a bit slow, but many settings are actually listed in my outline, and I will release them to you bit by bit.        ，，，…        ，，，，， This was established hundreds of years ago by the first Duke. See the next question for the other part.        ， Unlike the dispute over the divine right of kings on the Blue Star, the Will of the Abyss is not a special event that exists independently in a certain region, a certain city, or a country, but an ancient outer god that has been entangled with the gods since the birth of the world. It involves the birth of the planet and the origin of the gods (the details will be written later, and the outline has been completed). It only began to wake up after the landing of Filagia, and suddenly became active in recent decades.        ，，""， The church cannot do without the support of the empire, and the empire cannot do without the extraordinary people of the church. After all, the method of awakening (which will appear later) is full of danger and uncertainty. Without the support of the church's divine magic, etc., It is simply the same as conducting a nuclear experiment at home. If you ask if there are conflicts, yes, there are, but overall we still have to take the overall situation into consideration. The church will make concessions in some aspects, and the empire will also arrange for some people to join it. As we say, only by knowing yourself and your enemy can you win every battle. The will of the abyss is becoming more and more active. The empire cannot leave everything to the church to solve. It must have its own people inside (this is hinted in the previous article and a character on the character page) in order to grasp first-hand information and not let the other party lead the way. This review may be a bit messy, so I won't spoil it. I'll try to update it as soon as possible! Finally, thank you for reading this book!

Added to bookshelf. It's really good. I discovered a treasure writer.

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Um... I feel like you may need to improve on your lines. Because I was trying to dub your character tonight and realized that the dialogue and lines didn't read quite right.

Dear friends, there will be two updates every day, 4.5K~5k. Those who want to gain weight should also help me to keep reading! Please! It's so necessary to catch up on new books! Without further reading, there will be no subsequent recommendations and resources! All book friends, please read more! Be sure to see To Be Continued on the last page! Thank you for your support🙏🙏🙏

Someone can see faster than me... Which Yanzu has such speed...