The Blood Moon Looms over the Abyss, This World Is Terrifying

My own grades are pretty bad, but as a fellow sufferer who recommended each other, I wouldn't presume to offer advice. I'll just share some of my impressions of your book. I admit I haven't read the beginning, only the last few chapters, so my perspective might be a bit limited; please don't mind. But I'm absolutely sincere. Your recent chapters feel like they lack focus.

**Title: The Virgin in Prayer** Author: Giovanni Battista Salvi da Sassoferrato 17th-century Italian Baroque painter (Related work: Chapter 10, The Mysterious Holy Mother) This painting gives a sense of peace and tranquility, as if we were in the same room as the Virgin Mary, who was praying quietly and devoutly before us.

Your protagonist's personal qualities are far too mediocre, like a little girl who can only scream. He doesn't show any qualities of becoming an elite, so why does he always manage to survive?

Riddlers are really hard to keep up with.

First of all, thank you for your valuable feedback! I've seen quite a few readers with similar questions, so I've singled out this comment from the reply I wrote in the "Yanzu!! Welcome to the Readers' Circle" section to the reader "Skaar Don't Run".

Added to bookshelf. It's really good! I've discovered a hidden gem of an author!

Cool

Um... I feel like you might need to improve your lines. I tried dubbing your character tonight, and then I realized the dialogue and lines didn't quite feel right.

Hey guys, I'll be updating two chapters a day, 4.5K-5k words each. Those who want to build up the story further, please help me increase your readership! I'm begging you! This new book desperately needs readers! If you don't continue reading, you'll miss out on all the subsequent recommendations and resources! Please, fellow readers, be sure to read on until the very last page where it says "To be continued"! Thank you for your support! 🙏🙏🙏

Someone actually saw it faster than me... Who is this guy with such fast reflexes...?