The Blood Moon Approaches the Abyss, This World Is Too Scary

My own grades are very poor, but as a brother who recommends each other for positions, I dare not give suggestions. I just want to share some of my feelings after reading your book. I'll admit first that I didn't read the beginning of your book, but only the last few chapters. This may be a bit one-sided, please don't mind. But I'm absolutely sincere. The last few chapters of yours have given me the feeling that each chapter has no focus. After reading it, I seem to know something, but I also seem to have seen nothing. In other words, there is no plot progression in the chapter, and it seems like the protagonist is just wandering around. I guess you want to write more details about life so that you can build a three-dimensional world. But there is a problem. No matter it is the world view or anything else, it always serves the story, so your foreshadowing of the world should be brought out in the plot and story, rather than specifically making up an interaction to explain it. Including your dialogue and character design, as well as the recent chapters, I feel that you want to make jokes. These ideas are correct in themselves, but they must also be based on plot progression and storytelling, which are not available. I think every time you write a chapter, you have to think carefully about what you want to write about this chapter, what is the key point, whether it is foreshadowing or climax, what the protagonist gains or loses, this is the first point. Secondly, what is the highlight of this chapter. The third is what is the hook of this chapter. Instead of writing wherever you think now. Whether it is world view setting or anything else, it all serves the story, and character is the foundation and source of the story. Don't sacrifice the good for the bad.

Name: "The Virgin in Prayer" Author: Giovanni Battista Salvi da Sassoferrato 17th-century Italian Baroque painter (Related Works Chapter 10 Virgin Mary) This painting gives people a sense of stability and calm, as if we are in the same room with the Virgin Mary, and she is praying quietly and devoutly in front of us. The background of the entire painting is plain, pure and dark, so that when people look at the painting carefully, nothing can divert our attention from her white headdress, lowered face, and gently held hands. There seems to be a beam of bright light in the painting, scattered on her dazzling blue shawl, making people unable to take their eyes away. The painter's delicate and realistic brushwork seems to give life to even the folds of the fabric. Our Lady of Prayer, we listen to her devout prayers, and in her infinite mercy, let go of careful egoism and anxious pursuit of quick success. The Madonna's eyes are downcast in the painting. If we look up at her on the prayer mat, or even on a hospital bed or death bed, when her gentle gaze falls on us, it will give us the freedom and dignity to regain our strength.

The Riddler is really hard to keep up.

The personal quality of your pig's feet is too mediocre, like a little girl who can only scream, and does not reflect the characteristics that can become an elite. Then how can he survive every time?

First of all, thank you book friends for your valuable opinions! I see that there are many book friends who have this kind of question, so I wrote this paragraph in "Yanzu!! Welcome to the book friend circle" in reply to the "Don't Run Skar" book friend's comment sheet. I admit that the pace of the first book is a bit slow, but many settings are actually listed in my outline, and I will release them to you bit by bit.        ，，，……        ，，，，， This was established hundreds of years ago by the first Duke. See the next question for the other part.        ， Unlike the dispute over the divine right of kings on the Blue Star, the Will of the Abyss is not a special event that exists independently in a certain region, a certain city, or a country, but an ancient outer god that has been entangled with the gods since the birth of the world. It involves the birth of the planet and the origin of the gods (the details will be written later, and the outline has been completed). It only began to wake up after the landing of Filagia, and suddenly became active in recent decades.        ，，""， The church cannot do without the support of the empire, and the empire cannot do without the extraordinary people of the church. After all, the method of awakening (which will appear later) is full of danger and uncertainty. Without the support of the church's divine magic, etc., It is simply the same as conducting a nuclear experiment at home. If you ask if there are conflicts, yes, there are, but overall we still have to take the overall situation into consideration. The church will make concessions in some aspects, and the empire will also arrange for some people to join it. As we say, only by knowing yourself and your enemy can you win every battle. The will of the abyss is becoming more and more active. The empire cannot leave everything to the church to solve. It must have its own people inside (this is hinted in the previous article and a character on the character page) in order to grasp first-hand information and not let the other party lead the way. This review may be a bit messy, so I won't spoil it. I'll try to update it as soon as possible! Finally, thank you for reading this book!

Added to bookshelf. It's really good. I discovered a treasure writer.

Cool

Someone can see faster than me... Which Yanzu has such speed...

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Um... I feel like you may need to improve on your lines. Because I was trying to dub your character tonight and realized that the dialogue and lines didn't read quite right.

The protagonist has a duke father who is also a top official in the country, but he doesn't even know about extraordinary things. The protagonist still travels through 22 years and thinks it is an ordinary world. There are too many contradictions in the setting

The writing is really messy. During the day, the old man told the protagonist that his wife was killed 20 years ago, and asked the protagonist to help. At night, the old man directly said that he was a member of the country's extraordinary people, and asked the protagonist to join. He didn't say anything about his wife afterwards. It was really speechless. The identity of the protagonist and the situation in the world were not introduced at all. It was like being inserted directly from the middle of a story. The reading experience was very Suluk.

The writing is actually pretty good. Personally, I think the problem lies in the pace of the main storyline.

It's rare to find a good fantasy book, but the descriptions in many places feel too complicated, with long paragraphs and long paragraphs. After reading one chapter, there is too little effective information. It would be nice if it could be more concise, and the reading experience would not be so tiring. Hope it gets better and better in the future.

Everyday Amway Japanese culture does not look at the background

Individual name:The Hanged Maid (the name of an independent individual) Similar individuals: No similar individuals have been found yet Psionic energy level: Pain level (tentative) Archiving organization:Ranger - Belongs to the Church of the Goddess of Glory Discovered by:Ashe Mejia Freya Location of discovery:Effalonia-Fastin-Siglan District-Dinge Street-No. 118 Mansion-Underground Storage Room Individual Description:  [The pale skin is twisted into a twist-like body. There is a bloody mouth on the abdomen, and a tentacle-like tongue stretches out from it, twisting in the air like a giant snake. It has six or seven skinny arms with teeth and claws, and its broken legs have anti-joints. The head still has a vague outline of a human being. The tear at the corner of the mouth almost occupies the entire face. It can be opened to almost 180 degrees. The densely packed blood-red eyes in the mouth and throat seem to be the visual organ in the physiological sense.              ·· Samples retained: No samples retained Anatomy test: No dissection (signature of the chief surgeon: None) Pset energy relics and their abilities: No relics retained Individual handling opinions: This is a quite special individual. Due to the lack of comparison of similar individuals, the disaster level is temporarily designated as "injury level". The handling opinion is: it needs to be handled with a certain degree of caution. File organizer: Stephanie Hornloa The above files have been included in [Praise of Light·Secret·Abyss Files], and can be viewed by "Inspector" and above.

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The writing is delicate, and the characters and scenes are very realistic; But now that I have seen the latest chapter 50, the logic of the story background is not very smooth. I don't understand how the top brass of the country should let civilian police from the General Administration, who are ordinary people, take over a series of mysterious/religious cases like the Mysterious Virgin Case? Does the country maintain its rule without forming a supernatural organization to deal with related incidents, or does it rely on the church's supernatural power to maintain order? I hope I can explain it in the article later. In addition, the protagonist's father is a duke. As a noble, he must know about dangerous things like mysterious events. He doesn't teach any relevant background knowledge at all, and he directly allows his ordinary son to participate? (In the chapter of the protagonist, the mysterious Madonna, her eyes glow with gold, and the mysterious woman fights with the big eyes from a distance. Is this a backup plan left by the Duke for his son?)

Although the whole book is written about the Western Victorian era, the writing style is very down-to-earth and has some small humor interspersed from time to time. I like it very much. I like you very much.