League System: The Infinitely Growing Void Terror

As long as they don't poison the protagonist's so-called relatives who are natives, it's fine. As for the sister and her best friend, I almost thought it was some urban trope from ten years ago...

The family storyline... I have a lot to complain about. In short, it's not the old-fashioned plot of a fight to the death in the beginning and then making up in the end. Instead, it's a dark storyline about personally wiping out one's own family... Well, it won't be too dark. Basically, anyone who bullies the protagonist won't get away with it; revenge is the only thing to do.

I couldn't continue after reading 21 episodes. Putting aside whether the protagonist was involved or not, just the fact that he was affected by the bugs made his personality disgusting (it reminded me of a classmate who died; he was short-tempered and a bit of a radical, and eventually died after fighting for a girl and lying in bed for half a year). It's a dark novel, but the protagonist's lack of guile makes it very difficult to immerse oneself in the story.

The author forcibly suppresses the protagonist from the start, adhering to the game's rules without any changes. Logically, void creatures in reality shouldn't be limited to fixed attack patterns like in a game, but the author insists on making it exactly like the game.

People who don't nip the problem in the bud are idiots. They know the other party will definitely turn against them, yet they still want to let them go. Do they want their family or friends to be hurt? The other party isn't stupid. Knowing they can't beat you, wouldn't they target your weaknesses?

Why label it as a mythical beast story when it's always been written by humans? It's a case of false advertising.

He could easily become invincible by grinding in any random dungeon for a few years, but he insists on wandering around the city. It's ridiculous. This isn't a society governed by law. The protagonist almost got himself killed while delivering goods to another region. He's arrogant and overconfident, thinking he's so great that he can beat four Platinum players.

Are you going to jail for another few days? All those stat boosts I got were for nothing? I got hammered to below 50% health by a Silver 4, what happened to my Might? Forget it, I'm deleting this!

Keep it up, author! Having more teammates doesn't seem to suit me anymore, I'm outta here.

I don't like novels where system items can be used on other people.