My Infinite Script Space

The later part of the story, with the resurgence of spiritual energy and the rise of a system where the strong reign supreme, is still watchable. If it weren't for the fact that it's basically over, then everyone's preparing to cultivate immortality in the dungeons. Furthermore, if you offend anyone you meet, you'll either die or be killed.

Let's talk about some of the major flaws in this book: First, when he was still unknown, he was spotted by Hong Kong kung fu director Sammo Hung, who was preparing to promote him. However, the protagonist thought, "I have my own magic touch; I don't need your connections," and refused abruptly, which made Sammo Hung's face darken.

Why the hell did they suddenly start writing romance scenes? Almost every chapter has sex scenes! Has the protagonist become a jackhammer?! Speechless =_= Can't you write something else?! This is endless… 😡

The female lead they chose is unlikable and disgusting.

Here's my suggestion: don't make a remake of "The God of Cookery," especially not a remake of Stephen Chow's films. His movies have a very distinct personal style, and you could say they're unwatchable once the actors are replaced. You can tell this from the fact that Wong Jing and other directors have never managed to find replacements—people like Eric Kot, Nick Cheung, and Dicky Cheung are examples. The box office results weren't that good.

I've heard it's chapter 30 already, and the supporting characters you've written are so weak and lifeless. Also, that octagon match thing you wrote is completely unappealing. Being a henchman has no future. I thought you'd finish it in one or two chapters and then start making a movie, but I didn't expect this... The plot, setting, and character development all feel like reading an ancient novel, and the writing style is like that of a high school student.

Your main storyline is about urban life; the title doesn't really relate to it.

This is the first time I have seen the three energies of light, darkness, and transformation equivalent to the Taoist practices of refining essence into qi, refining qi into spirit, and refining spirit to return to emptiness.

Chapter 11 suddenly discourages players from leaving and suddenly introduces a strength classification system. I'm speechless. There are early stage and mid stage Ming Jin, why don't you just introduce a half-step Ming Jin?

I didn't understand. He beat Huo Yuanjia in the beginning, then he defeated him, gained his internal energy, and improved his boxing skills. But when he tried to do karate, he was so slow and hesitant. Why did he have to improve his skills so many times? It was all for nothing.