My Journey Through the Heavens Begins in Water Margin

Author, your writing is good, but the premise has some issues. You could limit the protagonist's personality a bit, whether it's being carefree, a saint, or evil... But there must be a moral bottom line so the plot doesn't unfold abruptly. For example, if you change the part about playing it realistically, it still feels abrupt.

Looking at reality, it's clear it's going to flop again.

The plot of killing Hua Wu and her father was really cringeworthy. They didn't threaten the protagonist at all, and the protagonist killed them just to repay a favor, risking the woman escaping and threatening those around him. Although the author helped him succeed in killing them, whether he had any moral bottom line is another matter, but the protagonist's mindless gamble without any benefit is really...

The Water Margin uprising wanted to kill Song Jiang, but Gao Qiu wanted to keep him alive to cause trouble for the court.

I was speechless after reading Ning Zhongze's chapter. Is the author a "good wife" type? There are things one should do and things one shouldn't do. The earlier scene of people messing around in the gym seemed normal, given modern thinking. But in ancient times, for married people to do that, that's a serious moral issue.

As it stands, it has already surpassed most of its peers by a large margin. While it's not outstanding, it's not bad either. It needs to hold on and avoid a complete collapse later. Also, author, it seems like your other books were either abandoned or unfinished? Could you take your time writing this one?

The Water Margin was relatively readable, but the modern urban setting completely turned it off. The plot and writing style were practically from ten years ago; I couldn't bring myself to continue.

If I transmigrated to the Water Margin world and didn't manage to get my hands on Pan Jinlian, my transmigration would have been a waste. 😏😏

That was a great premise, but it was turned into a game...

I only read a few chapters about Lin Chong before I didn't want to continue. Lin Chong isn't worth saving.