My Journey Through the Heavens Begins in Water Margin

Author, the writing of your book is fine, but there is a problem with the setting. You can limit the character of the protagonist, whether it is more carefree, a virgin, or evil. . . But you must have a bottom line of character so that the plot will not be sudden. For example, if you play it realistically, even if you change it, it will be sudden. Nowadays, it is better for readers to pursue more reasonable and old-fashioned points rather than sudden ones. Then some people will say that you are a bit poisonous. . . .

Once you see the reality, you will know that it is still the rhythm of fighting

Your plot about killing Hua Wu and his daughter is really awkward, and it doesn't threaten the protagonist. The protagonist kills the father and daughter just to repay the favor. The key is to risk the daughter running away and threatening the people around him. Although the author relies on the author to succeed in the kill, whether there is a bottom line is another matter, but the protagonist who makes a blind gamble is really useless...

The Water Margin Uprising wanted to kill Song Jiang, but Gao Qiu wanted to keep him alive to harm the court.

I was speechless after reading Ning Zhongze's chapter. Is the author a good wife? There are things to do and things not to do. It feels normal to mess around in the gym in front of you. After all, that's how modern people think. In ancient times, people still had sex like that and got married. This is a serious moral problem

As of now, it is much better than most similar models. Although it is not outstanding, it is not bad either. Just be steady and don't collapse later. Also, the author, it seems that your other books are all still unfinished? Will this book take longer to write?

Water Margin was relatively readable, but when it came to the modern city, even if I completely dismissed the chapter, the plot and writing were almost ten years ago, and I couldn't stand it anymore.

Traveling to the Water Margin world. If you don't get Pan Jinlian, your journey will be in vain 😏😏

It's a good subject matter, it's turned into a game...

I saw Lin Chong and didn't want to read it after reading a few chapters. People like Lin Chong are not worth saving.