Chat Group: Transmigrating Across Billions of Worlds at Once

Writing about immortal combat power is the most difficult thing to control. Meng Ruishenji's works in Zhutianliu are either weakened, or they are as crazy as him and have stronger combat power than him. I hope the author can control it. By the way, post the performance of eternal life

It's too shabby. You and the others are just bastardizing each chapter in one chapter. Every sentence you say and every sentence I say makes another chapter shabby.

Chat 90% main plot 10%😥

The plot of the chat group is just water, but the key point is that it is boring. The plot of the chat group of Emperor Rencha is just water. What others wrote is at least interesting. The plot of the chat group you wrote is boring, and the story of immortality is not very advanced.

It doesn't feel like the same person has traveled to other worlds at the same time. It feels like a time traveler and a group of indigenous people who know their own destiny. They are always the group leader. Are you too awesome? What should the group owner do? Please, are you all the same person? He is not immortal, he has traveled through time for decades, and he is a big boss. He has traveled through time at the same time as you, so he just buys pills and exercises. When people in other worlds are immortals, do they know their clones themselves? Are you still banned at every turn? Damn it, if I had a clone that muted me all day long, it would definitely be thinking of revenge in the future. We are all the same person, why should he be higher than me? Besides, it's just the beginning of time travel and they all have the same ideas. If one person is a pervert, the others must be the same. Not everyone has lived for decades, so everyone's ideas are different.

Practicing the Nine-Yang Divine Art in Eternal Life, can you break through to the realm of supernatural powers? You have to practice the method of eternal life again. Jin Yong's internal energy has no effect of strengthening the physical body, and he is weaker than ordinary people when he loses his true energy, which shows that true energy is closely related to the vitality of life. It is best to apply a patch. It can be said that the stronger the true energy means the stronger the life energy, which can speed up the practice of the tenth level of physical boxing. Write less about low-level martial arts like Jin Yong, they are all bad. Write about strange worlds, and just have a few representatives of the martial arts genre. Also pay attention to the differences in the world, different races, meridians, acupuncture points and Dantian are all different. Don't stay by Fang Han's side all the time in the future. This is the last era. The door to eternal life is on the verge of collapse. Fang Han's side is very dangerous. He can turn danger into danger, but you can't. You don't want to die by always staying by his side.

After reading twenty chapters, one is the problem of water, and the other is the problem of world selection. Since you have chosen, you must respect the upper limit of the world. The author here directly equates the acquired peak state of the world of Xiaoyao Jianghu to the tenth level of the physical body of the eternal world. It just made me laugh! At worst, you can create a new world, but you can't do this! Although the setting of each book is different, since we have chosen the Zhutian series, the general situation of each world is to be honest. The readers of Zhutianliu have a basic understanding of this. It is not a question of you saying: "I strengthened the setting for it". Either write an original, or change the world, or write well. You write an original world, and you can add settings as you like. But Zhutianliu is a humanistic, and it is best not to add things that are not mentioned in the original book or the drama version or the film and television version! It's not that it's not possible, it's that it gives people a bad sense. The second question is, although it is said to be a chat group, the chapter content is all about chatting, which is really good. I have seen with my own eyes that the chapter reviews have plummeted from the first chapter to the second chapter to the third chapter. The chat content has been written for several chapters since the beginning. . . After the tenth chapter, there are basically a few chapter reviews for each chapter, and the number is only a handful. It shows that the content after the first chapter cannot retain people, and most of them are lost in those chapters! Finally, I would like to give you a suggestion. I don't have much content to write now. I feel like I can salvage it if I revise it in the future. Otherwise, I feel that the final ending of this book will most likely be a eunuch!

I am here to expand the novel of the same type for the author. My clones in all the worlds are all King Gou (the world includes Douluo, Doupo, Lord God Space, Tiga, Dragon Clan, etc.), And I travel through countless non-human beings at the same time (the world includes Douluo, Wudong, Super Seminary, Magic Forbidden, Stealing Stars, Game of Life, Tiga, Xiaoting, etc.). At the same time, I am lying in the world and become a twenty-five boy (through the tube) The bureau, main god space, chat group, Zhutian City, system and other heavenly institutions are all described, and even the heavenly elders Yue Buqun, Tony, Xiongba, etc. Are also protagonists' clones). These are all excellent clone-style novels. Others either never return on the road of fantasy, or the protagonist becomes dark after becoming powerful, or they are all otaku culture such as spiritual cages, dungeons, and zero.

I don't know why, but I always feel that the author's writing has a bit of a petty attitude. The Underworld Map and the Golden Pill are very important to Fang Han in the early stage. The Underworld Map directly binds Fang Han's physical body to the cultivation resources of immortality, and the Underworld Map is bound to the World Tree, and the World Tree is bound to the Gods. And the author is very petty in what he writes. Does eternity lack resources? There is no shortage. Simple pills are calculated in hundreds of millions (Fang Han can do it at the seventh stage of the supernatural power). Fang Han can burn tens of millions of Nascent Soul Pills with just three thousand magical powers, and it is not impossible to even burn out his worth in one go.

The author continues: I have found another book. I will put this book away and take a look at it whenever I think of it.