Killing Proves the Truth, I Become an Immortal While Sleeping

The writing is quite good, and the writing style is also good, but the villain characters are too disgusting. They are really all kinds of beasts. The most important thing is that the elders and the like have lived for too many chapters without dying. Personally, I feel that it is better to kill them within 20 chapters.

The book is okay, but there are too few people

This book is good. He is obviously lazy. Although he always encounters things and adventures, he is lazy and it seems reasonable.

At first glance, I think it's weird. It's really a breakthrough with killing. Unless this rule has just been implemented, otherwise in 10,000 years, there won't be many lives left to kill, so how can we make a breakthrough? This rule is too taken for granted.

I just want to know why there are so many swords and there are no other weapons besides swords? Just because he looks handsome in movies and TV shows, wouldn't it be awkward if you try it in reality?

Author, please update quickly. If you don't update, I won't be able to get my monthly votes. If I can't get them, I won't be able to vote for you.

Sorry for the trouble, thank you! ! ! ! !

Gong Douwen... Likes it.

I was a little bit immersed in watching it, but suddenly I lost it.

I want to see you behead people, behead them from the beginning of the village to the end of the village, instead of being beheaded by others

By writing this novel, I can become like the Sleeping Immortal Chen Tuan, travel all over the world and become a Taoist master.

Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo to to to to...

A heroine without pictures has no soul

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These chapters have too many awkward plots and are childish. First of all, if we all know that he is a spy from the Demon Cult, why don't we just ask a few sect bosses to witness the face-to-face beating and body search? How can the world of immortality put this aside to pursue procedural justice? Then after you knocked down that palace master and kept talking nonsense for a long time, I was convinced. You were already crippled. What kind of information could you not get out using the soul-searching torture illusion technique of dreaming? How do you know it's not fake news and you won't be ambushed if you keep talking like this? And the most important point is that he is obviously a big shot, but it is too unbelievable to talk nonsense and threaten to pour it out like a bamboo tube. At the same time, this is also the biggest flaw of this book. People all think by mouth, and there are too many dialogues and no depth. I have read books for more than ten years and written novels that are not up to par with fairy tales. There is no novel that I have not read And it is obvious that the protagonist's thinking level is better than that of an elementary school student, and he always wants to make various events "big boss" They come to set off the whole day of analysis by the smartest man (although the plot arranged by the author himself is correct in the end, but the level of analysis in it is really not significant) I suggest the author find more dark and brain-burning novels to accumulate first, or later rewrite the classification of light novels with weak quality hhh