Game of Thrones: Attack of the Northern Wolves

I have read a lot of Ice and Fire fanfiction, and this one is by far the best. The author insists, and I will give you my monthly vote.

I wrote a book about Marvel Technology three years ago, but then my dream was no match for reality. After hard work, now my life is stable and my family is happy. Thinking about not giving up on your dreams, I continue to read books. I usually like to watch movies and TV series. So what I write is related to it. I hope you will find it interesting and support this book. Thank you!

There is no need to overestimate Taiwen, although I understand that when writing a novel, you need to highlight the protagonist's strengths, and you also need to write the opponent well. But Tywin is essentially a traditional medieval lord, and the Lannister Empire has been pulled out for you. After all, the Lannister family is a family without extraordinary power. It is okay to be a mid-term boss, but in the end it has to be a duel between the giant wolf and the dragon. This is called ice and fire. Just like the most exciting part of the Dance of the Blood Dragons is the decisive battle between Daemon and Aemond in the Lake of God's Eye, when the bloodworms leapfrog to challenge the remaining dragon Vhagar of the Conqueror trio. From the perspective of historical prototypes, Tywin's prototype kingmaker Warwick was just a transition. The red and white roses destroyed Britain and made Henry Tudor (the prototype of Daenerys) funded by France cheaper.

Cersei is just a little smart, not very wise. She has been imitating her father but can't compare to her father. She only learned a little bit. After her father died, the queen mother was forced to run naked by a high sparrow. You call this an outstanding politician? 🤫

Such a good-looking novel should really become popular. The writing is smooth and the plot is excellent. It still suffers from the fact that Binghuo is a little outdated. If it was written a few years ago, I guess there is no problem with being the first fanfic.

There are too many war scenes. You must know that this is a song of killing and fucking. If half of it is missing, the pleasure of reading will be reduced by half.

Now Tywin is not a lion but a deer, and his territory is the royal territory, the Stormlands, the northeastern part of the Reach and the eastern part of the Riverlands, basically the territory of the deer family. In the future, we will have to fight less and more, and we can add buffs, but not too many points. The supply of soldiers should still be based on land. No matter how much loans the Iron Bank gives, it will only support mercenaries for one or two years. The mercenaries who do not pay wages will be the first to kick the ball with Tywin's head. What Tywin has to do now is to take charge of the defense, maintain the confrontation between the two sides, win over the valley, and then secretly instigate mischief. If there is a decisive battle, it will be obvious that he will suffer a loss. To maintain peace for a period of time, the protagonist can also start to build the skeleton of his kingdom, and then blackmail Hightower to keep Dorne stationary and fight for the valley.

Although, it is still not recommended to write about Tang Dao, although most people should not understand it. . It's a big poisonous point in my opinion.

I just read it, but it seems that the author has not read the original work, or has a wrong understanding of the world view of the original work? The world of ice and fire is completely subject to the eldest son inheritance system. Illegitimate children have no inheritance rights unless the king corrects them. Moreover, when the eldest son dies, the inheritance rights fall to the eldest grandson. So the chapter on the Rite of the Wolves is ridiculous, Ned can't skip Robb and let someone else inherit it, it would be illegal to do so. For reference, why Sam was sent to the Great Wall was because his father could not directly deprive him of his inheritance rights because the consequences would be too serious and it would violate the rules.

Is it serious to lead a few people to the enemy's base camp? Just because he is the protagonist, according to the Game of Thrones routine, this kind of person will die the fastest 😴

After reading more than 200 chapters, I don't understand why these people with extraordinary abilities have to oppose the protagonist? As for the King of Light's fight with the protagonist to the end? And why do people in Essos have to fight against the protagonist? It's just for the sake of increasing the difficulty. It doesn't take into account the facts. Moreover, the King of Light has suffered such heavy losses and still insists on antagonizing the protagonist. He doesn't think about win-win cooperation. I can only say that this way of forcibly increasing the difficulty is really disgusting.

The nurse can just be a lover, there is no need to marry her

The author takes it too much for granted. I don't know what he thinks about using a modern army to train ancient people. Ancient people couldn't do it at all, okay?

How should I put it, go to King's Landing and have someone beheaded by force. Whatever his plans were, he put himself in danger. I always feel that if I didn't have the halo of the protagonist, I would be cold.

Let's talk about Lao Lang's death. Although I have repeatedly explained why I wrote it this way, I still feel uncomfortable. The purpose of coming to King's Landing is to save his family. I still don't understand how the protagonist suddenly believes that leaving the old wolf in prison will save him from death. Putting aside the original story, death does not mean that you will not die if you kill the executioner. Joffrey who wants him dead is still alive, so he will definitely die. Moreover, the purpose of coming to King's Landing is to change and take initiative, but don't you think leaving the old wolf in prison is too passive? I always feel that whether it is the original soul mentality of valuing family members or the post-soul mentality of striving for change, this step is too hasty, and it feels like a forced intellect. Besides, if the old wolf does not die, it may not be all useless. Not to mention that the family is preserved, it would be easier to unify the northern territory, and it would be easier to govern the northern territory. If you trick him into avenging Lao Lu, he may not be depressed. If he does not have a name, he may not be able to lead the seven realms. Isn't avenging Lao Lu considered a name? Finally, I think unifying the powers of the seven realms is only the first step. The key is to fight the White Walkers and eliminate the evil gods. Can the Three-Eyed Crow die? I think it's almost boring to rely on wolves to defeat them. After all, the most powerful dragon in the original book is only a matter of time. Either you need to use a big trick later, or you have to quickly integrate the seven realms and fight against the White Walkers with all your strength. In short, Xiaodu is not considered poisonous. The author writes well. I will continue to read it.

It's also good to have a giant wolf versus a giant dragon. Don't make any super mortals or make the protagonist super. You can develop an army and concentrate power.

I hope the author will not limit the map to the Iron Throne. To develop the map, you can learn "Game of Thrones: Wrath of the Sleeping Dragon". Not to mention the Free Trade City, you can also write about the Golden Fields, the Dothraki Sea, the ruins of Valyria, the Land of Shadows, the Summer Islands, Nass Island, and even Sothothros. And don't the Dothraki admire the most powerful Khal with the most powerful mount? I think one thing that needs to be paid attention to is to be cautious in showing the power of gods in novels, because writing about gods really does not have the epic feel of the Game of Thrones, and it will be very arrogant. For example, "Game of Thrones: The Wrath of the Sleeping Dragon" collapsed in the later stages. It was not written about Game of Thrones at all. The battle of gods was not interesting at all, and it no longer had the flavor of Game of Thrones.

In the end, I feel like this book can only be written in 1.5 Million words. After defeating the Night King and the Three-Eyed Raven, the only enemies left are gods like the King of Light, the Cold God, and the Drowned God. But the author hasn't written much about gods before, so according to the book's performance, he probably won't appear in it. All that's left is farming, but I haven't put much thought into it before, and I don't seem to be very good at it. In terms of war, the protagonist is more like a general than a king, and he is also a general whose great power belongs to himself. The writing of the big battles can only be described as ordinary, relying entirely on force and recklessness. This not only reduces the difficulty of writing, but also makes the content pale, and the epic and grand sense of the Western fantasy war is basically missing. The author writes a story of salvation, but the focus is entirely on the protagonist, and there is little description of other characters. It is basically set according to the original play. There are some extended characters such as Neptune and the Three-Eyed Crow. They oppose the protagonist all because of their own selfish desires. They want to live forever and gain great power. Although this is realistic, the style is very low, and it is very likely to conflict with the original work. Uncle Martin did not write to the end, so the subsequent plot can only be written in the script. However, most fans of the game admit that the ending of Game of Thrones is unfinished. It can only be said that the author carefully consulted. After all, when writing plots, we hope to optimize them in a better direction. Just like unfinished anime such as One Piece and Conan, many fans add settings as reasonably as possible and write plots on this basis. The bad thing about this book is that many of the supporting characters die too casually, or in other words, they are too worthless. They died because the protagonist's opponents, who were hindering the protagonist's great cause of reunification, were directly killed by the protagonist who relied on cheats. The protagonist's family and the wolf are also quite tool-like, and while reading the novel, I couldn't get a detailed glimpse of their inner thoughts. They only serve as a supplement to the protagonist's combat power, providing materials, connections and force. However, this novel is generally good enough. Considering that the author works part-time and is a newcomer, it is understandable. It can be considered a book that can be read among Game of Thrones fans. There haven't been many comments recently. I wrote a little bit when I was bored at night. Unexpectedly, I wrote more and more. It can be regarded as my first long comment.

It would be nice to choose Little Rose as the heroine. Little Rose is the granddaughter of the Duke of the Reach. Marrying her is equivalent to uniting the Reach. The Reach is far away from the north, which is in line with the strategy of making friends from far away and attacking closely. And the territory of the Reach is the second largest after the North, but unlike the North, it is large but barren. The Reach is large and wealthy, the richest among the Seven Kingdoms. Furthermore, Little Rose's family is the original Duke family of the Reach - after the Gardener family was exterminated by the Targaryens, they were forcibly placed in the position of Duke of the Reach. Most of the other nobles in the Reach were dissatisfied with them, and they also needed foreign aid. The brain of Westeros, the Citadel is in the Reach. Controlling the Reach controls knowledge.

Carrot has done very well in the original work, mainly because he is surrounded by a group of pig teammates. Theon. In the original book, Deepwood Castle and Torrhen Square were captured, not Winterfell in the show. Forcing the soldiers in the north to be unstable and homesick Roose Bolton. When Carrot attacked the West, he left a partial force to contain Tywin's main force in the West. As a result, Roose Bolton sent all the soldiers loyal to the Stark family, and then no troops were sent out, allowing Tywin to calmly transfer the main force to King's Landing. The biggest pig mate, Stannis. The two swords sent Junlin's 100,000 soldiers. He killed his brother Renly with a knife, and took the nobles of the Reach to King's Landing. He killed the acting Lord of Storm's End, Cortanai Penros, and took the Stormlands nobles to King's Landing. The first two pig teammates are gone now, but the biggest pig teammate Stannis is still there. Therefore, if the author allows the situation to develop, the final result will be that Stannis will be killed twice, and King's Landing will get a hundred thousand soldiers for nothing, as well as the Riverlands and Stormlands, which have not experienced war.

The straight line between Winterfell and King's Landing includes the two key fortresses of the Twins and Harrenhal, which must be led directly, and a governor or acting city lord can be appointed. In fact, the land under direct control should include the Northern Territory, the Crown Territory, and the eastern part of the Riverlands. The Tullys of the Riverlands can use the eastern territory of the Westlands to make up for it. If the northern part of the Stormlands and the northeastern part of the Riverlands can be included in the Crown Territory, this can really guarantee the level of centralized rule of Louis XIV. Supplemented by the system of ordering knights and requiring dukes to live in the capital, he will basically be the most powerful king in Westeros, the Westeros version of Louis XIV.

Since this work still has two deer fighting each other, and Stannis is the last and only Deer King, I hope that this book can make him more consistent with the wise king in the later stages of the original work compared to the religious demon in the TV series. When I read the original work, I thought that if there was a full battle in A Song of Ice and Fire, Stannis must win the final victory. Legally speaking, he is Robert's death. The most orthodox heir in the end, and because others first grabbed the throne and then saved the people, he saved the people first and then took the throne. "Relying on winning the throne to save the country is putting the cart before the horse. I should save the country to win the throne." "I want to bring justice to Westeros" etc. Were so hot that my heart was racing when I watched it (although according to Teen Wolf's character, I saved the country first. People, but he died without giving him a chance 😅) So I am personally very dissatisfied with the adaptation of the fifth season of the TV series. In the original book, Stannis basically took advantage of the Lord of Light, and would not burn Shireen. The book even said that if he died, he would immediately make Shireen queen 😅 Although in the early stage of the original work, Stannis was also for the king. He directly assassinated his younger brother and gave the Flower Family to the Lion Family. To be honest, it was quite strange to kill the younger brother first. Stannis's series of operations in the second volume were not only clownish, but also quite fascinating. So at the beginning, I did always feel that Stannis's faction was about to attack at any time 😅 It was already a miracle to me that he could survive so long after reading. This man is indeed a strange character who has always been evil but good at the same time, but maybe this is what a good king needs 🤫 p. S: The highlight moment of the original book Snow should be his ice-fire version of the dragon-centered pairing with Stannis. If Stannis listens to Snow, I will probably send it. In the TV series, Snow's scheming and Stannis's wisdom are severely undermined😭

It's scary, he actually recruited the little devil as a traitor. .

Twenty cavalry, led by the duke's heir, were at least elite. They attacked a dozen resting infantry deserters in full armor and helmets. The deserters woke up in their sleep to resist and turned to Shun to complete the formation. Then the cavalry was disabled at least two horses and at least one or two casualties. The leader even had to be forced to single-handedly fight with others in the battle. In the medieval setting, I won't say whether it is reasonable or not. I just want to ask if the author thinks it is reasonable?

There was an interesting Game of Thrones a few years ago, but unfortunately the author disappeared inexplicably, and I finally saw hope again 🙂

It's so good, but it's not popular. The writing is good, the plot is innovative and rigorous, and the characters are well written.

In fact, I am very curious about how to deal with the captured dragon Dany. If there is no way to use the golden finger blood contract, it is actually better to kill the enhanced blood wind. A large bomb 💣 is placed in King's Landing, and the three-eyed crow is everywhere. There are no two days in the sky, and no two masters in the earth. It would be too poisonous to let someone like Snow ride a dragon.

Update it quickly, dear. It's the only novel I've always paid to read.

I have subscribed and hope the author will read more. Well written.

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