Mr. Fang's Monk Life

After reading Chapter 26, I can only say that it is a pity. The writing style has grown up, and there is a clear gap between the writing style of the Internet cafes back then. From character description to environmental description, there has been growth in all aspects, and the taste of the words is different. The content has changed. The short stories with quotations from scriptures and the words about various consciousnesses and paths come right out of your mouth. You can see the weight of the author's self-reported "reading a lot of books in the past few years". But it's still a pity. This book is not white, the threshold is high, especially a short story every few chapters, which is too preachy. When the protagonist starts telling fortunes and talking to villagers, he has the image of a hermit in his mind, friendly and mysterious, but later, he is the image of a kind old man with a deliberate smile on his face. Everything and people are like a kind of habitation. The condescending attitude, I have calculated this danger, it can be solved, I have seen this practice method, I can fix it when I get it, I understand this person's bottleneck, inner demons, even the use of spiritual energy to release skills can be broken "with a thought", can anyone be able to replace this invincible image, this kind of golden finger from nowhere, this kind of pretentiousness without foreshadowing, is anyone really happy? A rainbow you see without going through wind and rain is just a rainbow, not a beautiful sight. There is no level in the "Five Thousand Years" content of this book. I guess the only thing that changes is the level of the person who teaches it. Yesterday a sentence was said to be as good as water, and tomorrow it can be said. Anyway, the protagonist is naturally at full level, and there is no cost to quote the scriptures. I don't pity this book, but I pity the author, whose edges have been rounded off by some means. This text feels like he is going to become a monk. If I can write it down, I hope there will be better changes to slap me in the face later.

See the latest chapter. The author is completely different from the Internet cafes two years ago. This article is excellent and worth reading. But there are many flaws. The first is the male protagonist's character, which is seriously inconsistent. In the beginning, the male protagonist saved Qu Minglu inexplicably, and the male protagonist is just a mortal. When you see two immortal cultivators fighting with each other, you take a bow and act bravely for justice? This can be explained by the youthful spirit of a young man who encounters injustice. However, the male protagonist has the memory of two lives. He was stabbed to death for bravery in his last life. I can only say that he has not forgotten his original intention, although I can accept this plot ( I am also this type of person in real life, and I like to meddle in other people's business.) But I think a large number of people will be persuaded to quit because of this plot, and I suggest that this scene be polished a little more. There is currently no bloody plot in this novel, and the plot processing is excellent, but the author may not have explained it clearly enough in some places. Then in the later stage, we followed Qu Minglu's clue to find the immortal Note that the male protagonist fell into coma after saving Qu Minglu. The two had no direct contact or dialogue. They were pure two people. The meaning of Qu's existence was to help the male protagonist find the path to immortality. But later when the male protagonist met Qu Minglu in the sect, he inexplicably said that there is a big gap between her and me in status, so it's better not to disturb each other now, and the male protagonist is the kind of Taoist character who goes with the flow and is open-minded. ???????????? What the hell, brother, you don't have half a dime to get along with her, okay? If I hadn't read the previous article, I would have thought you were chasing your fiancée to become an immortal from an ancient online article. I strongly recommend changing it here. It really affects the perception. If the author really can't write the emotional line well, try to avoid it. Go to this Internet cafe. Wen Jiu Nalan Mingxue also has this kind of weird plot. Some authors know that they are not good at writing emotional stories and just avoid it. There is no need to forcefully install a heroine In short, my impression is good. I have the same comfort feeling as when I watched Ke Qiyuan for the first time. If there are not the above two contradictions, my impression is excellent. It is scheduled to be a masterpiece.

Perhaps kindness is the spark that Fang Mian brings to another world. I hope the author sticks to his own path, and I also hope that this spark can start a prairie fire in a world where moral corruption and violence are rampant.

All kinds of people write hundreds of kinds of books. It is rare to see books that are not the same, and the clear springs moisten the mind.

Hello everyone, I am the author, and I am indeed back. I may have been focusing more on writing books recently, so I haven't read the comments very much. Please forgive me Due to my health and some busy schedules in the past few years, and I really can't think of what to write, I haven't opened a new book Now, because I have read a lot of books in the past few years, my mentality has improved a lot, and I have things I want to write. I feel quite satisfied, so I came back to write.

The beginning was okay, but it gradually fell into a cliche from the scene of saving a girl by the river. When the neighbor's sister appeared, it fell off a cliff. I skimmed through two slides and couldn't watch it anymore.

Does anyone remember Fang Laomo's Laotan Pickled Cabbage Noodles? Three years later, it became sour 🦶 noodles😅. Was he eating it when Ni Shuizhiye wrote it, or did he like to eat it?

How do you say this? It's a bit of a trick, of course, it doesn't mean that the writing is not good. Really, what you write at the beginning is really good, but you will find that later, when you help others after fortune telling, but you don't get any benefits, and the woman in the back keeps stalking you to find immortality, which is particularly poisonous. Cultivation to immortality may be beautiful, but the world is already so cruel, let alone cultivating immortality? It should be more ruthless, bloody, cruel and violent. After all, good people don't live long. As for the morality of the world, it doesn't matter if you describe a casual world of cultivating immortals. But why do you write so viciously? If it was really that kind of cultivating immortality, and the protagonist helped the woman, the woman should have given him something, but in the end she didn't give him anything. That means they should be in a very cruel world, so your leisure is not like leisure, nor cruel nor cruel. I really can't understand it. I am not talking about these nonsense here to say that the author is not good. I just want you to throw out all the things in your mind, don't be attracted by the introduction, and leave quickly. Brother, this book has countless poisonous points. Please withdraw it immediately.

Try not to read it if you are under 20 years old. What this book is about is that like the great sage Buddha in ancient times, he did everything without asking for anything in return. If an eagle wants to eat meat when it is hungry, it doesn't matter if I give you all my meat. I thought the first few pictures were another copy of "Lan Ke Qi Yuan", but who knew it was a copy of "Poisonous Weed". It's almost like the 2 pictures. The 2 pictures are not the same chapter {"Url":"https://qdreaderpic-1252317822. File. Myqcloud. Com/6479521 8/f782b9c59c5c4e23be6803fcc4f4e9e1_original. Jpg","Width":"1080","Height":"2408"}

Isn't it because it's hard to find a job now that I came back? If so, I'm afraid that the few people I finally made up my mind to pursue ended up being eunuchs. After looking at the beginning, I thought it was a retirement life in a black technology Internet cafe that was a system. It turned out to be a new one. Save and wait and see.

In fact, all kinds of great principles and chicken soup have been said long ago, and all the truth and irony have been said by the ancients. If you fail to do the same thing, it means that there is a time in your destiny, but there is no time in your destiny, so don't force it; if you succeed in doing it, it means that everything depends on man-made efforts. Anyway, what the ancients said is right. In fact, people are always willing to listen to what they want to hear and what they think is right.

It was okay at the beginning, creating the image of a hermit, but as soon as he started to practice immortality, he fell into a cliche. It would be okay if he was trying to cultivate immortality by himself, but the protagonist has just started to practice, and he has not understood his own practice. He has to teach people to be good and teach others to practice. As a result, a small boss takes action, and the protagonist becomes unbearable. The protagonist is made to look like a rotten scholar, and the story of cultivating immortals is made to look vulgar. How could a world with a complete national system and a system of cultivating immortals be as unbearable as the author wrote, as if the world was full of filth, and only the protagonist promoted the right path and persuaded people to do good.

I feel that the protagonist is just a useless scholar like the Confucians of later generations. He does not have the courage of the earlier Confucians. If the early Confucians were like the protagonist, they would all be dead before they could spread Confucianism. It would make me want to vomit.

At the beginning of the book, the protagonist seems to be a spiritual practitioner, following the path of the ancient sages, but in the later part, it seems that he is walking his own path and interpreting his own path through the words of the sages. This would have been fine, but the protagonist does not seem to have reached that state. It looks like he is using the words of the sages to make excuses for his behavior, which is not very comfortable to watch. Moreover, the description of good and evil is not appropriate. Many of the protagonist's actions have a sense of innocence, as if the protagonist has not considered the consequences, but can accept the risk. It's just that I think it won't happen or I haven't thought about it at all. I feel that the protagonist relies too much on heaven, as if heaven and earth will definitely help him.

Just a brief introduction. In the world of cultivation, 5,000 years of civilization is nothing. It may not even have a fraction of the lifespan of top cultivators.

Poisonous weeds, there is a problem with the logic of this book. The protagonist's private goods are equal to the way of heaven, and then he gets the strength from heaven to deal with troubles. So, the private goods are equal to the ability to deal with things? Logic genius! You don't have the strength to be beaten up by someone named Nian, why don't you pretend to be cool? Inner saint and outer king, strength is the basis of survival, and morality only alleviates internal conflicts. The definition of good and evil is very vague. As time changes, good today may be evil in the future. The author says that doing good is absolute? Bah! People in the world should pursue the causes of good deeds rather than the consequences of good deeds. Zi Lu Shou Niu is the best explanation.

Practicing, cultivating one's mind and cultivating one's abilities, this is my ideal cultivation of immortality. Cultivation of both life and life is the way to practice Taoism, not the current kind of martial arts and gangster type cultivation, which only talks about strength but not the heart.

The writing is good at the beginning, but it becomes very slow at the end. It's only a few dozen chapters and it's like this. It's a tofu account. I don't recommend it.

I very much agree with what the upward rabbit said. It is a question of value orientation. People who understand Taoism and Buddhism know very well that they have certain philosophical principles and promote the values ​​of being a good person. One hangs a pot to help the world, and the other opens a temple to serve porridge. This is the benchmark for Taoist priests and monks. If you are powerful, you can help the world, and if you are poor, you can be alone. Mencius proposed the way of a gentleman. . Fan Zhongyan has a unique understanding of this sentence. When he is high in the palace, he worries about his people; when he is far away, he worries about his king. This sentence clearly states that although he is out of reach, he still carries them in his heart. The core of this sentence is the same as Mencius's words. Poverty means hardship, and you still insist on yourself when you are desperate. How can a book that is supposed to conform to the traditional values ​​of Chinese culture be poisonous.

There is nothing wrong with doing good deeds, but there is something wrong with doing good deeds without expecting anything in return. Since we are following the path of a saint, we should understand the thoughts of a saint. Not everyone has the private virtue to do good deeds without asking for anything in return. Only if there is something in return can the public be mobilized to do good deeds together. (The above is also the view of Confucius)

At first I thought it was a novel similar to "Lan Ke Qi Yuan" and "Ji Yuan", but now after reading it, I feel it is a bit boring. I still can't compare it. No, I can't compare it. But overall it's pretty good, but I think it's just average in comparison.

The System's Black Technology Internet Cafe is the only one I've finished and watched many times.

Borrowing the words of Prince Nalan, An Huwei and the others: What fun is there in Jiuhua City (outside)? It's better to come back and play games (open an Internet cafe). Boss Fang, everyone is waiting for you to come back. Don't forget, there are not only Song Qingfen, Lin Shao, Xu Luo, Xiao Yulu and the others in the Internet cafe, but also cloud players like us. Moreover, Boss Fang, you are good at describing Internet cafes. You are actually not very good at fighting and causing trouble outside. Why don't you just go away and stick to what you are good at? Just treat it as a teleportation and open it again. This time, you will reopen the store in a different place.

Was it written by the same person? I feel that there is a big difference in the writing style before and after. The following chapters can all be automatically generated by writing software.

This is to make the whole world become saints. When you see the chapter on the fireball technique, it is said that the spirit of the fireball helps evildoers do evil. It is said that the way of heaven is good. Does Tao only include goodness?

After talking about a lot of Confucian principles, how about practicing Confucian immortality?

Please open a store system to stream novels 🥺

I have been saving it for a long time, but I didn't expect it to be finished after writing so much. The author's writing skills are actually pretty good, exceeding 90% of the starting point. I think the opening chapter of this book is well written. However, this slow-paced and bland writing style no longer matches this impetuous era. Writing this kind of writing is not as effective as brainless and refreshing writing. I hope the next book, Return to Relaxing Entertainment, will have good results.

Can you please add more oil after ordering?

When will you publish a new book? I hope to write another Internet cafe article. It's really good.