Seeking Immortality by Slaying Demons

Adopting Mei Niang is a complete failure. The main character dotes on you inexplicably, which is a poisonous point. Mei Niang's character development is very poor, which is a poisonous point. Later, when the aura of the chicken and dog ascending to heaven is opened, it is another big poisonous point. I just don't know how much the author wants to give the protagonist a halo of chickens and dogs to ascend to heaven. Will he write about the charming girl overpowering all the geniuses?

After Chuntao died, I held my breath in my chest. It was very uncomfortable. A fierce woman who would rather die than surrender had just left the tiger's den and entered the wolf's den. Later, she said that there was no reincarnation in this world, which made it even more uncomfortable Sigh I really hope that the author can not be conventional Create a chivalrous male protagonist Personal opinion...

A county capital is superior to the Demon Slayer Division, and there is also a county magistrate above the county. An armed department is too much. What is the difference between the Demon Slayer Division and the police officer? There is no such thing as the police officer Xiaoyao, and the setting of the chicken

The fantasy of martial arts turns into the power of officialdom in an instant. It is a talent to write it like this. Cats and dogs can come and step on the protagonist. I'm just confused. The protagonist has the power of transformation, can control the line of cause and effect, and is alone. Shouldn't he be happy to take revenge under such circumstances? The enemy changes his identity and is killed. There is nothing wrong with having a vendetta. Why do you have to accompany him to play a conspiracy.

First, when your cultivation level is low, you can eliminate the memory of Mother Mei. When you were in the underworld, your cultivation level improved so much, but you didn't even think of removing the memory of the princess. Do you want to use the princess's hands to promote yourself? It says hide everywhere. Isn't this a slap in the face? Second, if you don't know how to deal with the relationship between a woman and a woman, please don't write it, it will be embarrassing. There are also many books that are still good-looking without a female protagonist at all. If you write well, that is the icing on the cake. If you don't write well now, it is just superfluous. Third, I know the tricks of pretending to slap in the face, and there are many, and it is not disgusting. The key is to use it just right, pretending for the sake of pretending, and telling others that you don't want to pretend, it is a bit of both doing and establishing. Fourth, the protagonist does not have a plan for anything, there is no plan, he just writes wherever he thinks. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write a good book. Unlike in the past when there were few books and lack of resources, those authors were easy to become gods. Now there are more books. If there is no new ideas and colorful protagonists, it is difficult to become gods. There are many books now, and there are more books of the same type. Why do some people write the same memes very well, making the book more readable and entertaining, while others have the opposite effect?

The novel is a lot worse. I have no desire to read it. The more I read, the more boring it becomes. The author has not written his own style and characteristics. He is just following the trend. Tomorrow Ming is fighting monsters and upgrading, but he has not dedicated himself to fighting monsters and upgrading. He is obviously killing monsters, but he is too close to the scholar. He spends a lot of time describing it. The protagonist is not a Long Aotian-type character, nor is he an obscene person. He spends all day committing suicide and wandering around.

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This introduction is very contradictory. You are a monster slayer, but other monsters still respect you as a saint.

，，， Now that I can control cause and effect, what are I afraid of? Offending others and cutting them off, wanting to kill others and forcing them to join me, let alone being the savior of the underworld, I don't know what I'm afraid of, thinking of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger? The previous article is pretty good. It's understandable to be a bit stubborn if you have low strength and no background. When you get to the county and the enemy is dead, you have strength and power, and you are backed by the Yin Division. You are still timid and afraid of being exposed. If you surrender, what will happen if your cultivation level is exposed? Will your status not be improved by then? Wouldn't it be nice to have more monsters to kill and brush gold fingers? Can't it be improved faster? The settings of all aspects of your book are okay, and so is Golden Finger, but the main plot is not suitable. It's a pity. I probably wrote it like this just to show off in the future. If you want to be good at writing, just change to a cheat. A simple proficiency panel is better than this one.

After reading the whole book, I can only say that the protagonist has no courage, and it is hard to say whether he is a normal person or not. When the villain kills him, he has the strength not to fight back immediately, but continues to let the other party use various means to kill him because he is really afraid that he will not die.