Seeking Immortality by Slaying Demons

The adoption of Mei Niang was a complete failure; the protagonist's inexplicable doting on her was a major flaw; Mei Niang's poorly developed character was another flaw; and the subsequent rise of her entire family to power was yet another major flaw. I wonder how far the author intends to give the protagonist this "rise to power" halo—will they write about Mei Niang overpowering all the other geniuses?

After Chun Tao died, I felt a tightness in my chest, a deep sorrow. This fiercely independent woman, who had escaped one danger only to fall into another, was now even more distressed by the claim that there was no reincarnation. Well I really hope the author can avoid clichés. To create a chivalrous and awe-inspiring male protagonist Personal opinion...

A county magistrate is above the Demon Extermination Bureau, and above the county magistrate is the county head. An armed department is too weak. What's the difference between the Demon Extermination Bureau and the constables? The Demon Extermination Bureau isn't even as carefree as the constables. What a pathetic setup.

The martial arts fantasy has suddenly transformed into a political intrigue story; the author is truly talented to write it like this. Even the most insignificant characters can come and take a jab at the protagonist. I'm just baffled. The protagonist possesses transformation abilities, can manipulate causal relationships, and is all alone.

First, when his cultivation level was low, he could erase Mei Niang's father's memories. However, his cultivation level improved so much in the Underworld, yet he didn't think of erasing the princess's memories. Was he trying to use the princess to spread his own fame? And yet he kept writing that he was hiding something. Isn't he contradicting himself?

The novel has many flaws, making it uninteresting to read further. The more you read, the less engaging it becomes. The author hasn't developed their own style or unique characteristics; it's purely a copycat work. While the premise is about leveling up by defeating monsters, it doesn't focus on that.

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This description is contradictory; you're a demon slayer, yet the demons revere you as a saint.

You keep saying you should stay low-key, but your cheat ability isn't exactly low-key, and your profession is the same. You might as well be straightforward. You can manipulate cause and effect with your own Dharma body, so what are you afraid of? If you offend someone, cut them off; if you want to mess with someone, forcibly connect them. Besides, you're the savior of the underworld.

After reading the whole book, all I can say is that the protagonist is a coward; whether he's even a normal person is debatable. When the villain tries to kill him, he has the ability but doesn't immediately retaliate, instead allowing the villain to use various methods to kill him—is he really afraid he won't die?