I Am a Celestial Dragon!

When you get to the navy, you'll find a woman. Can't you live without a woman?

I think the author has a talent for writing daily dog-food stories. If he uses this talent in fan fiction, it will look watery. Dog-food stories are actually an advantage.

The quality is very good. On the other hand, the character design is improved, and the description of each person's personality is relatively good. The overall reading is very smooth, and it does not feel like a mindless book, so it is still highly recommended.

I have read a lot of pirate books and anime, and I have always said that the Celestial Dragons are stupid. They can actually rule the world. They cannot be all trash. The setting of this book is very good. It clearly explains that the Celestial Dragons have elites and trash. The role of trash. The goals of the elite are clearly written. The goal of the protagonist is also clear. I think the protagonist can reform, but he cannot make the world a democratic politics. Let the protagonist rule. If the protagonist doesn't rule by himself, that means he overthrows his own family.

Here comes the human fruit phantom beast Houyi's form, the sun god Nika, blow him up with one arrow

I personally think that according to the pattern of Little Devil, judging from the plot of the comics, the setting of the Tianlong people cannot be said to be unified. However, as a fan fiction, as long as the logic is self-consistent, I think there is no problem in extending it based on the basic setting of the comic. After all, if you completely follow the setting and plot of the comic, why would you want to read a fan? It's better to just read the comics. From the setting of this book, the author explains the world view of One Piece from the perspective of the Celestial Dragons and the idea of ​​unity as the starting point, which gives people a bright feeling. Especially up to the current chapter, I personally feel that most of the settings in the book have no major logical problems. The author's writing style is also good, which is very rare. From the perspective of the protagonist's setting, he is resolute, unpretentious, and has clear ideas. I personally prefer this type of protagonist. Overall, so far, it is a good pirate novel, suitable for book lovers who like One Piece and like to see different plots from comics.

The author wants to use the background of pirates and the identity of Tianlong to write about King Qin's campaign to conquer Liuhe. If you are interested, you can read it.

This unified design is absolutely 2 designs. You don't need to use your brain to know that Oda can't think like this. The Draco are all wearing spacesuits. In the world of pirates, there are space pirates like the moon. What kind of aliens are they 80% likely to be?

This is the first time I read a Pirates fanfic. It's quite good. The character settings and supplements in the original work are complete. After reading it, I found that some of the very annoying characters in the original work can be quite empathized with. Among them is Spandam, a typical villain whose face all the viewers of the original work wanted to be cut into pieces. Suddenly, I found that he acted so strong on the outside and even annoying on the inside, just to cover up the fact that he was weak. Later, after the Dressrosa incident, he was still able to work behind CP0 led by Lu Qi, which also showed that he could take things up and let go, and even his own subordinates would recognize him as the boss. Now that I am following the progress, I suddenly realized that the life experiences of the three ASL brothers in the original work all have one thing in common, that is, they do not love their biological father and follow their godfather to conquer the world. Let's talk about it respectively. Ace is the son of Roger and always resents his biological father whom he has never met before. He went to sea and recognized Whitebeard as his godfather; Sabo was already disappointed with his biological father. Dragon directly trained Sabo as his second-in-command, which is more like a biological son than a biological son; Luffy even No one knows his father, but Shanks gave him the Nika Fruit and Roger's straw hat. If Uta had not disembarked halfway, I have no doubt that Shanks would have given Uta to Luffy, and then he would officially become Luffy's father-in-law; think about it like this I'm really scared. Although it is said to be a story about passionate adventure and hard work to realize dreams, it feels like a liar. Not only does your biological father need to have a strong bloodline, but you also need to know a godfather with strong backing when you grow up, otherwise your dreams will come true. There is a ghost, maybe he died in the middle of the voyage, and there will be no known to the world as the captain of Whitebeard's second team or the son of Roger; the resounding title of the second-in-command of the Revolutionary Army; and the future Pirate King, owner of the Nika Fruit, and the reincarnation of Joey Boy.

1. Ordinary people's way of writing: I put the battery into the flashlight. 2. The normal author's writing: I stuffed two AA batteries into the somewhat worn flashlight. 3. The author of Simu Water Injection writes: Now, I have an old-fashioned flashlight in my hand. Holding it, I felt an uneasy feeling in my heart. I looked at it and found that, like other old-fashioned flashlights, it had a cover on the hip that could be opened by rotating. When I opened the lid, as I expected, I was speechless when I saw that it was empty inside. My brows furrowed tightly, and the feeling of wanting to commit suicide by throwing myself into a lake hit me from all directions. Because I was faced with a difficult decision: go downstairs and buy two batteries, or find two batteries at home. There is no trouble in life. Although it is daytime and I haven't had breakfast yet, as the only old-fashioned flashlight, it does not have two AA batteries in it, which is very, very unreasonable. Has anyone heard of such a thing? How could I allow something that no one had ever heard of to happen? I'm human too! I have feelings too! ! ! Just... Making a choice is really, really, hard. When I go downstairs to buy batteries, I have to put on clothes and pants, I have to be careful that I forgot to bring my keys, I have to avoid speeding cars on the street, and I have to be wary of meteorites in the sky; thinking about this, I am speechless. . . But if you look for it at home, my dear friends, in this age, who else still has AA batteries in their home? I thought about it over and over again, and was in a dilemma. I thought about it for almost two hours. . . Finally, I couldn't help but let out a deep sigh. Well, I can only put these two AA batteries in my pocket. These two batteries were love tokens given to me by my former and former girlfriends. I thought I didn't have to make such a sacrifice, but it wasn't true. Everyone was involved in the whirlpool of flashlights and batteries. Life is a life of problem solving, and if you have an old-fashioned flashlight that doesn't have the right center of gravity, stick the batteries in it. Oh, by the way, Simu Ai asked for leave

Can Wulaoxing be washed? To return to a unified state, you must first settle down the internal affairs and do not understand how to return to a unified state. As you write, I am really not convinced. Internal corruption, the Tianlong people under my command are making enemies everywhere, condoning the slave trade, and the annihilation activities in the Valley of the Gods. They use people as points to ban people. In this way, we are trying to restore a unified state and touch the First Emperor. The main character is a person who almost became a diplomat of the Lord. If he is a diplomat, I can only say that this country will be finished sooner or later.

If the author replies to me, I will tear up great white sharks, count sand in the desert, put rings on ants, and install elevators on Mount Everest🌚🖕

The protagonist really interprets the word hypocrite vividly.

How about this?

The protagonist talks too much, but actually does too little. The whole story seems very vain, and the long conversations seem very tiring. However, it is consistent with the identity of the protagonist, a former diplomat who traveled through time and space. He can only speak but not do anything.

I read the reviews and thought it was pretty good, but I was fooled. I guess all the bad reviews have been deleted.

I can see that Oda only provided an outline, the real work still needs to be read by One Piece fans🐶

After reading the first twenty chapters, there are a lot of characters for the protagonist, including a diplomat, a young man with a heart, and a Celestial Dragon. The one that best fits his identity is the Celestial Dragon. The author may want to write a story about the unification of the young man with a red heart in the pirate world, but many small details show that the young man with a red heart has been corrupted by his identity as a Celestial Dragon within one second after time travel. I have been reading these twenty chapters with comments for nearly three days, and I have no motivation to keep reading. The rhythm is very strange, and every action of the protagonist is based on the author's description in the comments. It is reasonable to do so, but because there is no necessary foreshadowing, the behavior will appear very abrupt. In terms of character design, the insignificant supporting characters provide more foreshadowing than the protagonist. The author keeps talking about how handsome the protagonist is, but refuses to do a few paragraphs to develop his character. From the mouths of passers-by, they said that the protagonist was smiling and easy to get along with, but then they turned around and saw the standard male protagonist template of Internet novels, those who follow me will prosper and those who go against me will perish. Then the author commented in the comments that the protagonist has no strength or power at this time, so this is what he should do.

I really admire the author and Oda, the old man. Oda is really not sensitive to numbers at all. The author also suffers from Oda, the number idiot. The sky island is only 10,000 meters in the sky, and the mermaid island is only 10,000 meters under the sea. As a result, White Star can summon a 5,000-meter sea king. One of these creatures is bigger than the entire mermaid island. How can it swim in the sea? But judging from the performance of Fishman Island in the animation, there is a square block with a length and diameter of 5-10km, which is very contradictory. Shouldn't Fish-Man Island be so big that it should have surfaced long ago? The depth shown in the animation is far less shallow than 10,000 meters. In the world of One Piece, there are tsunamis hundreds or even thousands of meters away. Tsunamis of this level are more terrifying than the 2012 Doomsday J. They can destroy the world casually. If you want to cause such a tsunami and feed such a sea king, it is reasonable for the sea water to be at least dozens of times deeper. There is also the problem of population. A big country like Alabasta only has a population of 10 million. There are more than 200 franchised countries in the world. If you double it, it will have a population of 4-5 billion. There are actually 87 trillion UTA fans. Just laugh at this number. The current population of the earth is only 8 billion, and the surface area of ​​Jupiter is only 100 times larger than the earth. If there are really 87 trillion, it would take 10,000 times the area of ​​the earth to support it. There are 2-3 million people in Luoge Town. Does the author know the concept of 2-3 million people? In China, it is a city like Ningbo or Tianjin. The population of a town like this is 50,000. There really are the 300 trillion people the author mentioned. The number of babies that Ace was born and executed must be at least 1 trillion, enough to fill the entire earth with people. Let's just say the author is careful. He always seizes and magnifies some unreasonable aspects of Oda's design and ignores the reasonable ones. I'm really speechless.

Forget about the Holy Mother in the early stage, then don't use your identity as a Tianlong to cause trouble later. Is this person really the disciple of Captain Ah Wei? Let's make money together for those rich people who praise their writing skills! If you want to avenge the mermaid, you can just find any excuse, as long as it's not consistent with your identity as a Celestial Dragon. After receiving modern education for so many years, even if you don't understand human relationships and accidents, you should learn to adapt to changes after receiving so much information. The most outstanding thing about this operation is one - reducing intelligence!

The author's second hypothesis is very good and logically consistent. But from the time when the little maid was a nymphomaniac to when Peach Rabbit saw the main character's tiger-like body and jumped in to cast her, I felt that the writing was a bit off-topic, and the general impression of the Denon people was not written clearly. No matter how handsome, potential, and people-friendly this Denon person is, it will take some time for people to change the impression. You can write that Peach Rabbit has no choice but to follow the protagonist, but that kind of light-speed brain supplement and Xiaodi transformation is a bit outrageous? The author's way of writing always feels like the protagonist and NPC in an RPG game. He writes Peach Rabbit like a local aborigine, but does not write Peach Rabbit as a thoughtful person.

Your novel has the same problem as your Superman fan. It is completely daily in the middle and later stages. The key is that your daily writing is not good enough, and the Naruto chapter is really bad, and it is not very pretentious. It is not even as good as the previous one. I skipped to the back because your progress was really slow. At the same time, your description of women is also very poor, but you like to write about the interaction with women in large lengths. Where do you get the confidence? You have already written a book. Don't you realize your shortcomings and the market demand? Whether you feel so good or not, you are really neither up to nor down.

I feel that after the protagonist enters the East China Sea, the plot becomes long-winded. It can be summarized in a few sentences and has to be written in several chapters. Except for the flamingo chapters, which are okay, the other content is just all kinds of pretentiousness. If you want to read a pretentious article, isn't Li Qiye more pretentious than you, Gao Wen? And after the Golden Lion killed so many people in Rogge Town, the protagonist actually developed a feeling of admiration and appreciation for the Golden Lion. Don't you, Gawain, want to end the deformed social structure in the world of One Piece and create a world of freedom, equality and peace? Why should you admire such a big villain? The Golden Lion is just a powerful careerist. After being hit on the head by the rudder, he acted like an idiot. Why do you, Gao Wen, admire such a person? I really can't understand the author's writing. I rarely post book reviews, but the early stage of this book is really a masterpiece among fans, the kind that has the potential to become a god.

This book was originally well written, but it ended suddenly without giving any reason. Before, I used an old chapter as a new chapter and used Manqin without giving a reason. If you really have something to do, just post a single chapter to explain it. It's not that you can't understand it. Say nothing and it's your own fault. We spend money to read books. If you really have something to say, instead of making trouble on your own and losing a large number of readers, now few people finish the book suddenly after barely reading it? The operation is true 6!

If you haven't written it, don't post it. That's not how Hun Manqin works. He's just fooling around.

How can I put it this way? It is the most awkward Pirates fic to watch. It looked okay at the beginning. After all, from the perspective of the Celestial Dragons, I thought it was just a slap in the face, but in the end, it was a golden finger in Xianyang Palace, and the first half of the plot was only released. I thought it was a funny fanfic that pretends to be a slap in the face, but it turned out to be like a historical struggle for hegemony. In the middle period, it traveled through Naruto and became Morten Ryu. In the later period, it collapsed directly and went through Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba and Tokyo Ghoul. Then Death briefly wrote it, Naruto wrote it again, and finally Dragon Ball ended inexplicably. What, it was very confusing.

After reading this book, I really want to applaud👏👏👏👏 1. I didn't want to read it when I saw the title, but I clicked on it. 2. The progress in the first few chapters is a bit too fast, and Xianyang Palace feels a bit stripped away. 3. I feel really good after watching it. It really provided me with a different vision and different thoughts! Overall good, details need to be improved! Come on! Take good care of you!

I haven't subscribed to a few chapters, so just talking, it can be seen that the author likes pirates and Naruto very much. I guess he has been pursuing them since childhood, and the emotional bonus is very high. But this book is mainly about pirates after all. Gawain has grown up in the pirate world. He is an emperor and a ruler, and he has his own ambitions! What's the matter with suddenly starting to play house in the Naruto world? Now Gawain should conquer like he did in the ghoul world! Go suppress it! My wife has been sealed and she is still playing house. There is an enemy in the Pure Land who is fighting against her son and doing him! Kaguya has been sealed, unsealed when it's time, and resurrected when it's time to resurrect! It's really too procrastinating. I have too few subscriptions and the author can think of me as a fart. I've read too many books and don't have enough funds. I've already started reading. Now I'm ready to give up. It's a good book but I won't go to Naruto World for the second time.

The author probably taught it from the same master at Z University. The whole article is about why although but. One chapter contains less than one-tenth of the plot. Are you planning to write tens of thousands of chapters when you write Zhutianliu like this?

, I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 27. It was a strange and inexplicable feeling. Twist