Start Cultivating the Tao from the World of Martial Arts

As soon as I saw Xiaoao, I didn't want to watch it anymore. It was really Xiaoao Jianghu in the Novice Village of Ten Thousand Realms. Yue Buqun, the Great Luo Realm Heavenly Lord and one of the Saint Masters of Ten Thousand Realms (Lin Jiu), said that he was tired.

The ending of Swordsman is really bad

It's outrageous. Seeing Lao Mozi smiling proudly in his mother's version, and praising this version of Dongfang's undefeated domineering style, it's so pure and disgusting. Chen Qiaoen and Ba Qi are at odds with each other

Drive high and go low, knowing that there is a big meal but going to beg for it

A world must have a mature social system. The protagonist (author) always feels that there is something wrong here and there in the martial arts world, instead of making up for the rationality of the events in the original work, and treats everyone in the martial arts world as fools and abandons them.

In the Double Dragon World of the Tang Dynasty, while talking about how unreliable Kou Zhong is, looking down on him, the protagonist then imitates Kou Zhong, takes Wu Commandery, builds an army, and then says I don't want to fight for hegemony and gives his subordinates to the Yuwen Clan. Is there any difference between your approach and Kou Zhong's? It's just a matter of fifty steps and a hundred steps! You still have the nerve to call Kou Zhong rubbish, but you are breaking the law knowingly, right?

When I saw the story about cultivating immortality in the main world, and then going to the dungeon martial arts world, I couldn't stand it anymore. When I first read the introduction, I thought it was the kind of upgrading process in martial arts. It was designed to improve the entire world and then practice Taoism. But you told me that it was a copy of martial arts running in the world of cultivating immortals.

Author, if you have some common sense, how come Laojun Mountain has become the traditional site of Shaolin Temple? Are all the people in your Taoist sect except Wudang dead?

It was okay to laugh proudly in the first world, but in the Tang Dynasty, it started to include private goods, and Yang Guang was always shady and denied the Sui Dynasty. I really can't stand it anymore. You can deny Yang Guang of Shuanglong of the Tang Dynasty, but you cannot deny history. Does Yang Guang know that?

Chapter 2: To persuade people to retreat, in ancient times, they also practiced military training privately with great fanfare. This was a serious crime in all dynasties. Can I have some basic common sense when writing a novel?

Chapter 1: Discouraging Resignation: In a martial arts world, the status of a scholar is raised so high, and the underlying logic is wrong.

Top-notch, top-notch, top-notch, peerless show! !

How can you, an ancient martial arts sect, be an inner sect and an outer sect without making a show? Let's write those underworld cultivation articles!

If you write about martial arts, you have to lick the official and join the military household. So are you from the Huashan faction or the army? Will you listen to the military's next order? Are you still making excuses for Huashan's high-level NPCs not to cooperate with the authorities? Everyone is drunk and you are the only one awake? Is the martial arts sect that has been here for hundreds of years not as considerate as you?

Seeing so many squirts makes me feel relieved

Another rubbish book written by the studio

I also read a book about Taiqing Laozi who has become a quasi-sage. He wants to go to the low-level martial arts world to preach and rebuild. It says that the Three Pure Ones are born sacred and cannot be perfected without rebuilding. Just like an individual, a person who is born holy and has a vision and training memory are not perfect enough.

Writers of martial arts often look down on Taoism, except for Quanzhen and Wudang. We must know that Longhu Mountain is the master of Taoism in all dynasties. Since the Western Han Dynasty, no matter how the outside world is shaken, the inheritance of Zhang Tianshi of all dynasties has been unimaginable.

I really don't understand how this kind of thing got to Sanjiang?

In the following chapters, there is only one sentence in one chapter and the rest are all explanations. It can really hydrate, hypnotize and cause eye pain.

That's a garbage summary. The protagonist wants to dominate the world at one moment, and at the next he wants to be the strongest. What is the point of the author writing these novels? Copying other people's work every day, one moment he is proud of the Jianghu world, and the next moment, in the Double Dragon world of the Tang Dynasty, the protagonist looks like a schizophrenic! ! ! Neuropathy.

Isn't Laojunshan the chief helmsman of the Beggar Clan? I have read several novels about beggars! If you write it as a Taoist sect, that's fine, but if you write it as a Buddhist sect, that's nonsense! Lao Jun is a Taoist priest when he hears it! !

Seeking the Way? I don't know how to spell any novel. You're welcome to grow rice.

Plagiarizing "The Road to Evergreen" is too much.

I have a bad brain. If I don't practice the "Eternal Life Art", I want to practice the "Golden Sword and Fierce Flame Art". The Jue of Immortality was written by Guangchengzi. Who is Guangchengzi? He is the teacher of the Yellow Emperor and the Immortal Yuxu. If you practice the Immortality Art in "Double Dragon World" and go to Shushan to practice "Purple Green Treasure Record", you will be able to properly explain the direct inheritance of the teaching. In the future, when you go to the prehistoric era, just by virtue of your status as the direct descendant of the third generation of Chanjiao, you will be given three points wherever you go. I really don't know what the author was thinking.

There's so much going on at the end, skipping fifty chapters won't have any impact on reading.

After Chapter 20, I didn't even know what a golden finger was. I don't know what the hell I am doing. The whole article is about what I did, what I did, and how much I spent. I don't see anyone practicing the exercises seriously. How do I practice them? Why am I faster than others? Where are you soon? It's always narrating, there aren't many dialogues, and there aren't many characters. Why is there a plug-in that has a stronger soul and consumes dozens of times more than others but is not much stronger than others? I don't even write about fights. I really can't understand

It's too watery, especially in the mythical world. Things that can be explained clearly in one sentence always take several chapters, making it unreadable.

It's so long-winded. When it comes to the mythology section, I divided one page into ten.

What kind of system is difficult to repair? The main world is building a rubbish mortal system.