Sacrifice to the Heavens

The spiritual energy of the main world has revived, and with the help of the golden finger of the Luck Altar, it can travel to and from the heavens. At present, it seems that there is an infinite flow in the heavens. The writing skills are okay, but currently Swordsman (Jin Yong's Martial Arts) and the Mr. Zombie series are both worlds that are about to be written badly. It may be something to consider later. Let's put nationalism aside for a moment. The part about Japan in the book feels like a third-rate anti-Japanese drama. Having to complain is a poisonous point. There are many ways to highlight national culture, but the writing method of anti-Japanese drama is the most vicious.

A good forest rescue plot was coupled with a unruly and willful policewoman with no tutor, which instantly lowered the level of the entire novel. There are also many typos.

Everywhere I go I meet beautiful women, either beautiful police officers or other beautiful women. I'm really impressed.

I'm speechless. Seven aunts and eight aunts can practice. Is this family a genius? At least you have to have the Nascent Soul strength of Xianxia novels to do this kind of popular practice, but here is a qi training scum who just thinks about chickens and dogs ascending to heaven.

After reading more than 30 chapters, I found a question. Did the author think too badly about the Jin Yiwei? The strongest thing about the Jin Yiwei is not martial arts but the army. Before they have extraordinary martial arts and become holy, they are no match for the army. A Jianghu sect is equivalent to the current gangster gang. Can it be compared with the army? They are all Jin Yiwei. If you are cooperating with a gang leader, you are afraid that you don't want to die. What do you want your boss to think if you cooperate with an official and a gangster?

I found that this kind of novels are all about being an father in another world, and then becoming a grandson in reality. I am threatened and beaten by others, and I have no temper at all. It is really incomprehensible. The strength of the protagonist in the foundation-building stage in the real world can be said to be invincible in the world. Ordinary guns and cannons have magical weapons, and there is no threat at all. Do countries dare to throw powerful weapons such as missiles into the city? I just feel that I can't understand what the pig's feet are afraid of. He lives like a dog in the real world.

The power system has collapsed, and the status of martial arts warriors has been over-elevated. The so-called strength cannot hit anyone, but can it hurt the immortal cultivator? Can you block any fireball? The mentality system, after traveling across the world to cultivate immortality for decades, has withered as soon as you return to modern times. What is the use of your spiritual consciousness? How far can it sweep? You can't even see through other people's masks and shields. What's the use of JB? Since you have been practicing immortality for decades, your mentality has not changed at all? It's just like a joke, calling ordinary people brothers and sisters. The main world is really awesome. No matter if you become an immortal or an ancestor outside, you will kneel down and lick it as soon as you come back to the world. It's weird to be popular. Don't you think it's a pity for the author to have coded so many chapters?

Can someone like this become a policewoman? Not surprisingly, this novel will be a hit

What kind of operation is this? The writing is getting more and more like a saint. Some ants are disgusting in front of the protagonist. You said you don't like ants. It's hard to ignore them. They are very good and powerful.

The author's level is worrying. A whole family can practice cultivation, but his family was threatened, his sister was kidnapped, and he didn't show any sign at all. How can he be afraid of having his water meter checked?

Realistic chapters were a waste of my time💰

There was so much water that a battle lasted for several days without even climaxing.

After seeing more than 40 pictures, I immediately persuaded him to quit. With his little cultivation, what's the point of showing off? Do you really think that since the real world is full of ordinary people, no one can kill you? If the country directly sends troops here, can you still fly? Do you have great qinggong skills? Just bomb the ground. Even if you escape, what's the big deal? Can your parents, brothers and sisters escape? Even if your family has escaped, and the country directly releases the news that you have mastered internal martial arts and light kung fu, white gangsters, gangsters, military, intelligence agencies, and secret services all over the world are looking for you. Can you still live on the moon? ? The most disgusting thing is this kind of novel that pretends to be cool when it comes to reality, as if the country is blind. What's even more disgusting is that the author actually described all the forces in the real world as blind men and good old men.

To be honest, what was written in reality is simply rubbish, and this book was wasted.

It's just you people who can't stand and talk without back pain, so the author doesn't update anymore.

Someone has said a long time ago that if you don't have the ability, don't write about reality. It's best to write less. If you write too much, it will collapse.

When I saw the chapter with the female police officer going up the mountain to save someone, I couldn't watch it anymore.

The protagonist is **, who hasn't learned anything about Uncle Jiu's world but knows how to draw and draw symbols, but can't open the big world? Such as Shi Jian's Lightning Running Thunder Fist, an extraordinary skill. What can we learn from the world of martial arts? The author would say, "I know how to show off, and thousands of people will support me." Emmm, learning martial arts does not mean learning the state of skills, sword intention, boxing intention, martial arts artistic conception, in the end, cultivating immortals is not cultivating immortals, and practicing martial arts is not practicing martial arts? Say you have poor qualifications? The second function of the golden finger, brain overclocking, is a decoration? Can't collecting exercises improve physical fitness? **Stuff

After reading the comments, thank you for trying the poison.

I especially don't like the part about the real world written by the protagonist. If it's not good, just don't write it, just write about the world. Originally, in the previous low-martial worlds, Zhutianliu was everywhere, and your writing style couldn't get ahead, and it was very poisonous when you returned to reality. Goodbye! Come on

The protagonist who has traveled through so many worlds and still transformed into a god is so pitiful, and no other protagonist can compare to it. I am also convinced. The more I watch, the more frustrated I am.

Why do you treat someone like a dog just by writing it?

What to do? ? Rivers and lakes help! You can tell the content just by looking at the table of contents. Have I read too many novels? ? ? ?

After reading the part about going home, I understood why the protagonist had to be made an orphan. It was not well written and it was really poisonous.

There are so many typos that it gives me a headache to read, and the writing style is also very average, but fortunately there is nothing too poisonous.

Zhutianliu writes rubbish novels about the main world.

As I write, I write the main character as someone else's dog.

I don't know why the author insists on writing about modern times, but he can't write well! Don't you know that chivalrous people use force to break the law? There is no need to be a dog-licker when writing about modern times! Pig's feet don't have a halo. With your random licking, all your relatives and friends will be dead when you travel back in time. You keep talking about keeping secrets every day, but you don't take any safety measures when licking people's butts! If you want to save people and contribute to the country, just be like Superman and wear your underwear outside. Who knows who you are!

The brainless novel was okay at first, but later on, it was a fallacy that only by rescuing people and getting luck, and that by eliminating violence and keeping good people in peace, could you get luck. Won't it be enough to have luck only if the protagonist has a good character and steal the protagonist's opportunity? If saving people brings luck, then those who have been saved long ago can still have your turn. And you said that for those civilians, why don't they rely on their own luck to save themselves? And what about the saying that the disaster will last for thousands of years? Finally, why is there a sister like this burden?

It looked really cool! A sudden move by meow makes others bully your family members, and the protagonist has no reaction, hahaha! Later, they also kidnapped family members. . . And still no response? Suddenly it doesn't smell good anymore! I have no desire to read anymore and am speechless!