The Mysterious Walker at Hogwarts

Baidu entry: If young wizards lack guidance, suffer abuse, and have their magical abilities artificially suppressed... They will give birth to Obscurus. This black substance resides in their bodies, hiding deep in their hearts. When a loss of control occurs, the Obscurus will be released, like a black oily substance that moves in the air, destroying everything around it. These young sorcerer hosts are often called "obscurials." Born out of pain and despair, Obscurus exhibits strong dark tendencies - uncontrollable and extremely destructive. It is like a black flame, burning the host's soul all the time until they collapse completely... Therefore, it is rumored that the Obscurials usually do not live to be 10 years old. It is even more unreasonable for the protagonist's sister to become an Obscurus

I was really convinced. It was the first time I saw a college professor dealing with a problem involving Muggle parents using a confusion spell! ? Don't forget that this is not a matter of short time, seven years! I don't know why no one complained about this. Could it be that Hogwarts was originally from the Chaos camp?

I was mentally exhausted all the time, I was really speechless.

After reading Chapter 11, I feel that the protagonist's talent is like a grass on the wall. Whichever way the wind blows, he will fall. One moment he was a prophet with the gift of prophecy, and the next moment he was a Muggle who knew nothing. It looks really awkward, I can't stand it anymore

When I saw the Sorting House, first of all, it was Snape's favor. The Sorting Hat recommended the Snake House, but the male protagonist still chose the Lion House, so I gave it up. Those who can accept the Lion House protagonist can watch it. It was quite good. I really couldn't accept the Lion House, so I gave up.

It's very good. After reading 6 pictures, it appeared. I used Legilimency on the professor I met for the first time, which caused me to suffer from mental failure and fainted. But the main story was that the sixth chapter showed me that I was a warrior in my previous life. I came to watch martial arts?

My own dean (intrusion and deletion)

I couldn't help it when I saw Legilimency and the square characters. I am illiterate and it doesn't work for me. This setting is really

You're mentally exhausted and still so energetic. . .

Look at your profile, martial artist, Harry Potter, system?

Just to avoid stealing Hao Min's limelight?

After reading the previous chapters, are the Muggle freshmen at Hogwarts in such a difficult situation? You have no money and you get attacked at every turn?

The martial artist introduced in the introduction made me feel a little scared. Who can reassure me?

The wand is only used to guide and sort out the magic power in the wizard's body, just like Thor's hammer. Without the wand, the wizard can still use magic, and you can be 100% sure that the protagonist is a Muggle.

I read half of it, but I can't get into it. There are some problems with the plot progression. I won't talk about the poisonous points. I have read more books, and I can handle many of them. I have a better immunity. This book has some poisonous points, but it is still readable. The author wants to integrate his own original work. Halfway through the first grade, the second volume suddenly deviates from the main line. Playing with time, why do you think about Westward Journey? Three hundred years ago, you Zixia Fairy, the last half of it is probably not in the second grade, but the twelve-year-old protagonist is already almost as strong as Invincible. As a fan, well~~, the selling point is different, and it depends on the audience, but I have also watched half of it. This rhythm is very unpleasant.

Is it Slytherin? Otherwise, the protagonist's first good impression will be wasted!

It can be seen that the author wants to explore the Harry Potter world from another angle, and wants to add original content reasonably without causing too much conflict with the original work. Come on!

Monthly Pass is better than the previous books, which is pretty good. Occasionally, there is a feeling of participating in this magical world, and the experience is not bad. It's just that the lottery is sometimes a little too dramatic 😂 The added system setting has a bit of an infinite flow feel. It's still unclear where the system comes from, and I don't know if it will be explained in the end of the book (needless to say it involves spoilers). The Harry novels are not considered an upgrade stream, but are plot growth streams. They are quite suitable for your writing style. See if you can attract readers with similar preferences to become loyal fans, and then you don't need to follow the pure upgrade stream in the future. However, for other books, more people may still like the upgrade stream. The passive "specialization" in the system always feels too buggy, which affects the experience a bit. The protagonist obtains it too easily, which dilutes the sense of participation (omitting the process of upgrading and growth). At the same time, similar settings exist in several novels. I personally don't agree with this setting.

Mysterious Walker? Can't you just change it to a martial arts practitioner?

The protagonist of this book is an ordinary person. His ability to cast spells comes entirely from the system. The protagonist does not have any knowledge of magic. Everything about him is cheated by the system. The more things the protagonist uses about the system, the more the system invades the protagonist's soul, until it finally completely harvests the protagonist's soul.

The writing is pretty good, but I do feel a little discriminatory towards Ah San. The basic page says it's not Ah San, but in my opinion it's still Ah San's writing.

I don't understand why the principal keeps saying not to ruin his plan to train Harry. Maybe there is some secret that the protagonist doesn't know about? The following chapters of the Principal make me feel like he has changed a bit. The setting is quite interesting, and then the story of the protagonist's father's generation unfolds little by little, and it is very interesting to see clearly the connection between the protagonist and other people and the care of the elders for him. Looking forward to the following~

Being crazy🙂

Can it be faster? Please. (

I just saw the first few pictures and they seemed pretty good. I want to ask, is the protagonist a Slytherin? (The Snake Yard girl just wants to watch Slyklin)