Travel Through Time and Become a Follower of Goblins

I guessed that Kenobi was Xuan's brother when I saw the similarity in personality and the fact that Kenobi was also a time traveler. It seems right.

The author's knowledge base is really good, better than most writers! Highly recommended! Strong support!

The first one was okay, but the second one was really disgusting. Readers will unconsciously put themselves into the protagonist and savor the book. In the first book, Alfie was unable to take advantage of the time traveler's advantages, and was still being trained and led by the goblin Augusta. The most annoying thing is that a beautiful girl finally belongs to the goblin. Alas, I just held my nose and watched patiently. By the second book, the oppressive feeling of the protagonist being stepped on all the time came over me. I was really angry. I saw the goblin Kenobi flirting with various girls, and the protagonist was led by the nose. I am sorry that I am powerless and cannot support you. This protagonist is too crotch-stretching. You might as well write "The world's best goblin's invincible pretense in Eliat". 😅

The two books combined seem to have over 5 million words, but the plot feels like it is only about 50% of the total. There are too many descriptions and a lot of dialogue, which makes it feel a bit dragging. Let me talk about the problem first. The combat power setting is too vague. I always feel that there is not much difference in the fighting between the three holy realm levels. They all use various props. The same goes for Alfie's growth. He has more than 5 million words and has been equipped with various inheritances, but there is no numerical improvement in combat power. He doesn't know which stage he is at. How to use it is just a brief introduction. He can temporarily find a method of use from the inheritance to cope with it. This creates a big conflict with the plot setting, because the plot is comprehensive and meticulous, and even the pit is dug from the front. It is rare to come across a novel that is as grand (or even more so) than Devil's Law in terms of world view setting and the plot is not inferior at all. These two aspects are very important nowadays, and Cuttlefish is excellent in these two aspects. When he added a powerful combat setting to Lord of Mysteries, a novel that dominated the list was born. Therefore, slow recovery is not a problem. If you summarize the problems and improve them step by step, things will get better one day. So when I saw Alfie traveling back two thousand years in the past and engaging in a legendary battle setting planned by people from the past and future for thousands of years on two battlefields at the same time, I was really excited! And it reminds me of Nolan's Time Pincer Tactics 😄. Isn't the plot setting similar? Of course, Nolan's settings are not easy to express in novels, but Creation is already very good.

Report I was completely shocked to see that "The Twelve Movements of Creation" actually has a sequel/prequel. I remember this seemed to be the first novel I read that had rigorous logical thinking, a grand world view, and many old coins. I remember that I didn't have a mobile phone at that time [ahem, because my parents were very strict, but it shouldn't be that old in fact], so I used my Ipad to browse the web version, and I didn't have any awareness of genuine and piracy at that time, so I would like to apologize first (つд⊂). Well, anyway, whether it's the dual-line advancement, or the settings of various classes, events, and backgrounds, it's all great! I was recently looking for a book I had read before coming to Qidian, and then I discovered a treasure! Moreover, the author of Xiaohuo is also a book lover, and those who write books for their own hearts are great. (As for why I call myself Xiaohuo, I say it a bit embarrassingly...) Ah, yes, this is me, Bai Yueguang. So is there anything wrong with me blowing it up? ╮(￣▽￣)╭Unreasonable Then, having said all that, I haven't actually started reading this book yet. I'm just talking based on the impression of the previous one, cough cough... I've been a little busy recently, and I've put it in my favorites since there are more than 700 chapters. I will definitely read it. Xiaohuo, don't think that no one is following the update, in fact, they should be raising it (until it is finished)... [Manual Dog Head] Finally, because I don't have the habit of saving monthly tickets and automatic subscriptions, I will give a reward first [Statement in advance, student party, save the New Year's money and save money, just a little bit of meaning] (Giving to characters/works is the same, then I will give it all to Alfie, or half and half?) Finally, I am used to writing very serious book reviews, but this time I was a bit tongue-tied. So, will you catch an author | ू•ૅω•́)ᵎᵎᵎ!

What did you say at the beginning? , Can't read?

I have been listening to the Himalaya app before, and I have listened to many novels in it. I still remember that when I was playing Warcraft when I was a child, I once thought about writing a novel about goblins, but I am not the material, so I can only read other people's novels. In order to save time, I first chose to listen to novels on Himalaya. After listening to it for 4 years, I still really want to hear novels about Warcraft, but unfortunately There are very few Malaya, so out of desperation I went to Qidian. Com and read quite a few articles. I felt that this novel was really well written. I don't have high requirements for reading novels. The main character is invincible. Don't be a beauty again and again, especially not a stallion. I hope there are some new routines so that we don't easily guess the development of the plot. In short, that's all the requirements. I feel that this novel has indeed achieved it. I hope to continue working hard. Come on.

After reading Chapter 17, I don't know what to watch before the soul fusion is completed. Single machine slave flow? Judging from the current character of the goblins, I think that as long as a golden finger doesn't suddenly pop out, they will only be crazily squeezed before the fusion is completed. Looking at the comments, it seems that it is a sequel. I don't know if the world view will be explained clearly.

(I haven't read either book) It is recommended to include a book club in the introduction to prevent readers from not being found when receiving a 404.

Although I haven't read the book yet, the author's ability to persevere in writing the book under such circumstances is quite impressive. Come on, author!

Come on, author ^0^~, I've been waiting, I've watched the first part three times

Why did the movement disappear before it was finished? The new one is that the background is the same as the previous one, and the story is rewritten? Is Celtic gone?

The title looked pretty good, so I decided to take a bite. After all, there are not many novels on this subject, and all that can be written about is true love.

Will the author write traditional Western fantasy in his next novel?

At that time, I had just entered the industry, and my investment was a bit casual. I thought I was going to lose everything, but this book actually paid back? Incredible.