Human Emperor Fuxi: My Ancient Times Have Changed.

After reading Chapter 15, he died from the poisonous hair, and the merits from the heavens did not have any heating effect. He even had divine fire... And even a mortal fight with a bruised nose and a swollen face... The poisonous hair...

It feels like the golden finger you gave me is of no use. The merits are just there to look good. The divine fire is not available except when the Emperor of Heaven comes to the door and forcibly takes it out at other times. The Heavenly Book's deduction of the future sounds very powerful, but it does not show its role in seeking good luck and avoiding disaster. The fishing rod just pulls in a dispensable NPC and then retires. You can use the Heavenly Book to hit people, but using the fishing rod to draw people out as a weapon is not as useful as that and consumes less. The same goes for the weak water section. A big pit suddenly appeared. There was no foreshadowing before and no clues behind. Everyone was confused.

... The writing is messy. One moment I was still in the ancient times, and the next I was traveling to the West. Damn it. The span is so big, but my tribe is still in primitive society. What do you want to write?

Fuxi's... How to say, I don't know anything else, but his surname is not Fu... Just like Nuwa is not surnamed Nv. Just like Shennong's surname is Jiang and Xuanyuan's surname is Ji. Why do you think Fuxi's surname is Fu, as if his surname is Feng?

There is already a god of fire, how about the first fire in the world?

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Why do so many merits fail to show their usefulness?

Fu Xi's surname is not Fu. He only has a given name and no surname.

Make a small suggestion. First of all, the setting of this prehistoric flow is a bit interesting, the creation of the prehistoric flow. But. It must comply with basic logic. Fire is the source of civilization! In the primitive era when there was no fire, the ancients could not speak... You can use specific communication methods. But it's impossible to speak so fluently. I didn't watch the follow-up. I've been a little perfunctory recently. If I have a chance to read this book again in the future, I'd like to read it.

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Although the male protagonist written in this chapter is very happy, he has problems with his character. After all, the genius Dibao was trained by someone else. He steals whenever he wants. After stealing, he still has the same expression. Don't you think there is something wrong with it? Doesn't such a person harm his merits?

It's tasteless to eat, but it's a pity to discard it The protagonist is a modern person. Some childish words and TV dramas in the first few chapters are poisonous, but they are still acceptable. The description of gods does not have the feeling of gods. . . Even if it is a setting, try to keep it as small as possible. The writing of these guys who can live for a long time at first glance is too childish, which will make people feel that the characters and backgrounds are torn apart. It is understandable that the protagonist is not arranged properly, and it promotes the growth of the protagonist, but it is too hasty to arrange only one person to protect him after he may have the ability to predict. Although there is a patch where one person is nearby and a wolf pack attacks, but as modern people, when they know that they are in danger, they just prepare It is indeed inappropriate to face danger alone with crude weapons and your own weak body. Just by looking at the conversation between the two night watchmen in the previous article, you can see that some tribesmen trust and respect the protagonist, and there is absolutely no shortage of people to protect them. Secondly, they have been stationed here for so long, and this tribe is not at all prepared for the traps that the protagonist just taught them to resist wild beasts. They should be very aware that there are often wild beasts at night, and a wolf pack attack attracts all the people, which is a bit thoughtless. It's okay to describe the scene where the protagonist appears as a saint, and the description of the ogre is also good, but it's a little deliberate. For example, the details can be added a little bit when the teeth are exposed. The mouth is full of fangs, and the deliberate description of cannibalism is a bad idea It's still very good, not too poisonous, and the thinking is very clear.

It's so messed up that I don't even know what you want to express.

It's too poisonous, and I can't even watch it with my brain.

The writing is okay, but there are a lot of flaws. It's already ninety chapters, and the main character is still Ye Ze. Obviously the main character's name is Xi. It's already ninety chapters, but you're still unwilling to change it.

Seeing that the last 3 days of April & 7 consecutive days in May... Maybe we should still build a building...? Although it is a new book, Addition and Subtraction needs encouragement??

What is this? It's written in such a mess, and you still have to change it.

It should be Emperor Fuxi, right? Isn't the Human Emperor Xuanyuan?