Bringing a Farm Down to the Mortal World

Ignore those who say it's bad. It's well-written, at least the Dream of the Red Chamber part is good. It's a good draft. Just write it according to your plan. It's not bad. It's clear that Dream of the Red Chamber is a smooth transition. At least get to the level of a Golden Immortal. (With the help of Heaven and Hell, how can you not become a Golden Immortal?)

He has a farm, but instead of doing good deeds, he's trying to become an official and take exams. What decent person would bother with all this fancy stuff? He's clearly a time traveler with cultivation techniques who doesn't take shortcuts, and he's clearly a reincarnated celestial official, yet this is all he gets.

The protagonist is supposed to be a god, but he ends up fawning over a bunch of mortals. The wives he marries are all mortals, and they all die young. He has to spend a lot of resources to raise them and then he has to support them. He's supposed to be powerful and influential in the celestial realm, but in the mortal world... The sense of disconnect is too severe.

A keen understanding of the ways of the world is true learning; a mastery of human relationships is true literature! The author's descriptions of human nature and social dynamics are meticulous, and the handling of character relationships is both logical and measured. With a solid framework, this book promises to be a masterpiece!

It feels a bit too contrived. In Dream of the Red Chamber, when the protagonist passed the imperial examination twice, even several dukes' mansions took notice of him. Even when he passed the imperial examination six times, he was still a nobody in front of the dukes' mansions. Why would they care about him so much?

I've finished reading it. It turns out *Dream of the Red Chamber* is all about harems, not sparing a single one. It's definitely not suitable for women. The author's outline seems to be getting increasingly flawed; everything about dealing with people relies on deception. Seriously, if you're so capable, you could just guide the narrative naturally; why be so deliberate? The protagonist has become a charlatan. I'm dropping it.

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Are you sure this is a fantasy novel? It's filled with dozens of chapters of intrigue and scheming from *Dream of the Red Chamber*, not satisfying at all. All this fuss about getting an official position? If you just focused on cultivating your skills, you could become the Imperial Advisor! Aside from the first few chapters, who knows if it's a fantasy novel? It's a waste of time.

I'm totally confused. The protagonist seems to know everything about Journey to the West, while the gods in heaven seem oblivious. His original world was a minor world within Journey to the West, and he's reincarnating not through the cultivation path of Strange Tales from a Chinese Studio, but through the officialdom path of Dream of the Red Chamber, supposedly to accumulate merit?

This is a historical novel about officialdom, so don't be fooled by the titles. I'm leaving now.