The Strong Man Killed in the Reincarnation Palace

When I was writing about the second half of the Long March, based on my experience of reading books for so many years, I felt that the author's writing power had collapsed, and it was completely different from what he had written before. What follows is basically a blunt display of enthusiasm for the motherland. This is good, the author is very patriotic. But has the author violated his original intention? I don't know this, but the author failed to live up to the readers' expectations. It is obviously a pretentious article about happily defeating monsters and upgrading, but it is forced to make the blood boil. As a result, the first half of the Long March was well written, but later on, you can find that the protagonist has changed from a round character to a flat character. He only has passion and no normal emotions, which is very sad. The Long March was great, but the author didn't grasp it, okay. That's all I can say, I hope the author can slow down. What I said is only my personal opinion. The author does not need to revise the previous article, believe in yourself, go for it!

Why is it called Cao Zheng? Wouldn't it be nice to call him Cao Zhengchun?

Why do you care so much about the world of reincarnation?

A certain dean wearing a blood-stained white coat and holding a fire ax pushed it over.

Your introduction is like the God of War returning and seeing his daughter living in a kennel. He smiled evilly and recruited a hundred thousand soldiers to help his daughter build a bigger kennel. This is how it feels.

It's great to kill the Qing soldiers, but cutting off a thousand heads and carving names on them is a bit deliberate. If you have this time, it's better to kill more and recover more. Also, why do you want to die and fight the army when you are obviously invincible in a duel? Isn't it good to sleep during the day and kill at night?

I watched them all in one go. It's a hay+ level. The main problem is that the character writing is messy. The teacher wanted to kill the students in order to collect some money, but later he sacrificed his life to save the students. Change the map and put a bunch of people's names in a mess, highlight a random word, keep it up and see if you make any progress 😅

Get your money back! ! ×××, Refund the money! Are you worthy of us? Get your money back! !

What are you afraid of in the world of reincarnation? If you see a beautiful woman, go to her and kill everyone who gets in the way. It's that simple.

Your introduction is too long-winded. It keeps going over and over again. It's easy to arouse people's disgust.

Can you make a suggestion, the author, can you stop emphasizing that the protagonist is the security captain? I know, it's annoying to keep emphasizing.

During the Three Kingdoms period, Pig's Knuckle became Hua Xiong and it is estimated that he did not even exert one-third of the strength of the original Hua Xiong. But the tortured and weakened version of Pan Feng is indeed similar.

I literally vomited. Is it good to have a good kitchen knife? Can't be normal. Does the author find this interesting?

I feel aggrieved in reality, I feel aggrieved in a copy, whatever, let's see how you feel aggrieved

There has been no update for three days. Are you planning to enter the palace?

Looking at the introduction, you are an old Neptune. You are like the stars and the sea.

I read more than 30 fake introductions, and I'm still acting like a dog, which doesn't feel good at all. And the dogs inside have no IQ. The other dogs know that the pig's feet are destined to die, but they still step on them. If they are really hungry, they will wake up and open the door.

666, I was so moved when I wrote it. Few people write about the hardships of the Red Army's Long March.

This novel must have been written by someone else. The first and 80 chapters were all learned sword skills in the dungeon. For example, Tiger Roar had the understanding of being a tiger and the knowledge of Guan Dao to be able to cut it. After it was released, I changed writers and learned a bad name to dominate the world, defeating everyone with just the king's eight punches. Haha, the descriptions of moves, sword light, sword shadow, are too different.