My Card Unlocked the Skin

It's been updated, let me know what you think. First of all, I was attracted by the setting of the story. I think this setting is really interesting, so I keep reading for updates, but I think the author still has a lot to improve. For example, the plot content is too exaggerated and refreshing. Although the author may have wanted to write a refreshing novel, it is too routine and rigid. It is not close to reality but shows the shortcomings of the writing style. The character descriptions and emotional changes are also a bit abrupt. To put it bluntly, it is a bit facial makeup. Every character, especially the supporting characters, is more or less inconsistent. There is also Qiu Qingqing. I can clearly feel that the author wanted to write her as the heroine (?) And want to increase the interaction with the protagonist. However, from the beginning of her appearance, she was not very likable. Some of her subsequent behaviors were really inconsistent with the teacher-student relationship, and the emotional changes were a bit abrupt. I won't comment too much on the plot. The author hasn't written enough yet and I'm not sure what direction the author wants to take in terms of plot, but the scene descriptions could be more detailed. I hope my suggestions are useful to the author, come on! ! !

Since helping an old lady find a cat has a lot of kindness points, and donating a full 1,000 is just a little bit, is there a possibility that the charity you donated to doesn't actually use all the money to do charity?

The latest three chapters are so disgusting, especially that woman, so disgusting

Although I don't really like the kind of protagonist who gets everything he wants when everything goes well, I don't think there's anything interesting about this kind of protagonist with a dark face.

Suggestion. The problem of nuclear weapons can be set as follows: Nuclear weapons can cause harm to monsters, but the area has become a paradise for monsters due to radiation. Monsters grow faster when exposed to radiation, and most mining areas are occupied by monsters, making it more difficult to make nuclear weapons. Firearms and bombs have limited damage to monsters. Missiles require semiconductors (rare earth), satellites, solid fuel, etc.

The dark-faced protagonist retreats, retreats

Girl Tantai Ayane fanart

Come on, every word that has been typed so hard, those bitterness and tears are all for a better future

There is a lot of room for improvement, but there are too many redundant characters.

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Update quickly

Update quickly and there will be no shortage of rewards

Has Brother Qian endorsed the author? Dog riding rabbit image spokesperson. 🐶

Alice

Enmn, achieved this achievement for the first time

Found a bug. Since the cards are condensed from monsters after death, why are there humanoid cards? Isn't this a bit unreasonable? Is the background condition not set properly?

Good guy

Join the group! ! ! If the group reaches 100, the group leader will post women's clothing

I'm a bit novice, but my ideas are very good, keep up the good work

Update quickly

I just started looking at the results and I'm already a eunuch! ! ! ! ! ? ? ? ? Twenty-five thousand fans! ! ! Why is he a eunuch? ? ? So many people watching? ? ? ? The income should be fine, right? ?

Does the author have a single heroine or multiple heroines?

Why don't the chapters match up? ? ? ? .