Doomsday Simulation: I Can See the Future

It slipped away, there were many typos, the plot was not smooth and unreasonable, and the protagonist was abnormal.

It's best to change this paragraph. It makes the protagonist act like an ungrateful white-eyed wolf who is not satisfied with the benefits. It would be better to write the protagonist wondering why there are so few points? Then I thought that maybe some kind of consumption was turned on. This section is really too disappointing. Describe the protagonist like an idiot, not satisfied with the benefits, and not grateful 😥 Also, without the simulator, the protagonist would have died long ago

The description of the simulation is too long and the content of the story is too little. It's boring to read.

Shouldn't the talent selection be limited to a few talents? You can only choose two at the start

{"NickName":"Xia Tiandao","UserId":327885760}Lai 😃 skirt, your writing ability is very good, I hope your work will get better and better. 🤭5, 755🌹901, 33

"An old man who time-traveled and picked up rags and made a living by making bad movies" [Mental patients have more happiness] A director graduate from his past life accidentally time-traveled into an old man who smelled like sheep and picked up rags. He was arrested for killing people at the beginning. He had a miserable job in variety shows. He was professionally incompetent, and he blackmailed people with group performances. Broadcast begging and exploring ghosts to scare people, crack down on counterfeit goods and sell fake goods, make horror videos to scare people, make short skits to scare people, and make bad movies to extend your life After that, you can travel to infinite planes and other worlds, collect movie materials, and return to reality on the big screen to scare the audience

Oops, my God, it's so hard to read because of the typos.

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