I Upgraded

If it is digitized, you will be disappointed to find that some people have their own "smarts: experience gain +900%", "draw inferences from one example: gain a small amount of related skill experience", "multitasking: gain experience with up to 5 skills at the same time", "concentrate: when only one skill is gaining experience "When using a skill, the experience gained is doubled", "Talent: The skill effect is the current level + 3", "Memory: Each time you use the skill, you will get more prompt information", "Inspiration: There is a 1% chance of directly upgrading this skill when using the skill continuously", "Agility: Automatically use the optimal skill combination"...

The author's thoughts are too free and his imagination is very rich, but his writing style is also very casual

Why don't you just write about society directly? It's really a waste to write about having cheats in college but not trying hard. In this world, only those who are rich or hardworking are liked by people. You have no reason to play with anything.

One suggestion I would like to make is that the screenwriter participates in the box office share. I checked the information and it seems that in our country, editors rarely participate in box office sharing, and even if they participate, they are unlikely to get 10% of the total box office share. This is too high. For a domestic movie, the total number of movie producers seems to be able to get less than half of the box office, and it is unlikely that 10% of the box office revenue will be given to the screenwriter. I suggest that this aspect be considered to make the plot more reasonable.

The sword must be stronger than this one.

These last few chapters... The author didn't want to write them anymore, so he changed them.

I personally don't understand why there is an element of cultivating immortality in it. This is the biggest flaw. After the element of cultivating is included, the whole thing becomes nondescript.

Come on! Your rise in the house is so beautiful,

I hope the author will write another good book like The Rise of Otaku

There are many people who don't want to work hard without plug-ins, but there are not many people who don't have the motivation to work hard with plug-ins. Watching the protagonist waste his life with cheats, I am speechless.

Everything else was fine, but I felt that the women in the book were all trying to get beyond their means, which was really disgusting and unpleasant.

I always feel that the protagonist wanders around but doesn't grow much. He mainly relies on the game as a migrant worker. The skills he learned are not mentioned, and his career is not growing.

The setting and writing are quite interesting but there are a lot of logical flaws that make it difficult to play The main plot is unclear. The protagonist is basically passive throughout the whole process. It is no longer clear whether the protagonist is improving his data for a better life and salted fish, or whether he is controlled by data and supporting characters. It deviated from the main character's original intention of not wanting to be controlled and wanting to be free.

The author's biggest problem is the plot. The connection between the plots is too blunt, and he is too passive towards the system. He basically just muddles along. 1; The first one is that after the protagonist has a golden finger, let's not talk about comprehensive development. As a student, at least you should study hard. After all, hard work will bear fruit. You can learn various aspects if you are interested, such as music, art, composition, singing, etc., Which can pave the way for future plots. 2; The second one is that when you get rich, don't just write about borrowing money from relatives. There is too little about your own family. At the very least, you can talk about buying some things for your parents and helping your grandparents to renovate the house in your hometown. 3; The third thing is that the previous plot is connected only by one Gao Yiyi and a woman. It feels like all the plots are focused on her. Wouldn't the protagonist be able to survive without him? 4; The fourth is that the plot connection is stiff and rigid. If there is no reply, the protagonist just comes when he needs it. Once is okay, but if it is too many, it will be annoying. You can write it out a little in advance to set the stage. For example, there is a plot about 40 chapters ago (the protagonist wants to be scolded on a certain blog but has no fans. The person who manages the account for the protagonist tells him that he needs to be popular to participate in a variety show. As soon as he finished speaking, someone called and invited him. It was too deliberate. You can write that someone invited him first but the protagonist had to think about it, and then the manager told him that he needed popularity. The protagonist agreed to go. This is much better.) 5; If the author has nothing to do, you can read something like "Detective Conan". Each story is independent but has some connections, but some plots are also foreshadowed in advance. 6; Generally speaking, the plot is not good, the writing is blunt and rough, the protagonist's system settings are not complete and there is no autonomy, most of them are used passively, and a student does not study or learn anything else in school, he just plays games. There is a lot to write in school and pave the way for the follow-up. Also, the characters are monotonous. In the early stage, Gao Yiyi was relied upon to keep the plot going. Needless to say, it was even worse in the later stages. 7; first-rate creativity, second-rate storyline (some are not good stories but poor writing), third-rate writing techniques

Goldfinger was okay, but I found the wrong person.

If people could really see the progress of their efforts, then most people would be very motivated to live.

How can I put it in terms of feeling? I've watched everything I can, but it always feels a little bit boring. I don't feel any ups and downs. It always feels very bland and not attractive enough.

The author just made the pig's feet an NPC that gives out welfare

It was a bit interesting at first, but later on it became less interesting as the plot was about causing trouble for yourself inexplicably.

I couldn't understand the meaning of this book, but I was greatly shocked. The last time I was so shocked was the last time

This book by the author makes me really want to curse people, not because of anything else, but because I am angry at him. It can be seen that the author is a bit skilled, and his funny style is good at the beginning, but what are you writing next? The repeated routines are very cliche, and the emotional intelligence is so low that it is ridiculous. Although my emotional intelligence is not very good in reality, I can still distinguish what the situation is. What is the main character doing in this book while shouting that he does not want to eat dog food and wants to be single, while at the same time he is not good at it, right? It is understandable for an otaku to be shy, and it is understandable for a Buddhist to be unenterprising, but do you want to read what you are writing next? Thing, the back part of this book is Chun Chun's self-liberation work, right? For the sake of my own happiness, I don't know what I am writing. Chun Chun is just a running account. There are those parents in daily life. It's really weird. Not to mention, Guan Shan's parents are stubborn and temperamental, and so is Tangtang. I was really disgusted at the end. Goodbye, I can obviously write well, but I am very casual. I am really angry.

Part of the problem with this book is about the island. If you want to change it and see the effect, then the timeline will accelerate forward. The fast flow of time and the casual style give me a, how should I say it? An ethereal feeling. Although the author has a rich imagination, being trapped on an island with a painted land as a prison still limits the development of the plot, and the things he can access are limited. This system is no better than The Rise of the House. The Rise of the House is also locked in the ground, but it embraces the whole world, with unlimited possibilities and various exciting features and settings.

When will the author release a new book?

Why did it end immediately? Woohoo

Selected game type: Text Selected to enter the game ... ... Entered Horror category/ [Midnight Death Rattles] In the middle of the night, I stayed up late, lying on the bed sideways and playing with my mobile phone. In a quiet and dark room, I stared at the fluorescent screen and quickly browsed the novel. When I was absorbed in reading, I suddenly heard strange noises coming from outside the room. At this time, I would choose... A. I am curious and choose to get out of bed to check B. It has nothing to do with me, I want to continue reading the novel.

What's going on? Aren't you going to update it? Are you worthy of us? Geneva, update soon

The part where I was looking for green tea online started to persuade me to quit.

When will the new book be released? Finished reading

Well written, the style suits my personal preferences

The strongest talent: your wishes will come true immediately, your dreams will come true immediately