A Leisurely Career Starting from Picking up Rags

The setting is very novel, I like it very much. I hope it won't happen later

To be honest, most people go there because it can bring out things from anime and games, but in the end, your book is just for fun. At least half of the text describes the game interaction with the female anchor? So horny?

This book... I feel like it's neither good nor bad. The setting is pretty good, but it doesn't feel like it develops the interesting parts. Instead, it keeps writing about uninteresting parts (connected with the anchor)

This is no longer Sun Wukong who settled on the seven fairies and then ate peaches. This was after he settled in, he took a photo of a peach and posted it on WeChat Moments, wtf

Author, can this book be written well? It's okay, right, right?

Long time no see, I miss you so much, I even forgot who you are!

The book written by the author is similar to the "Fantasy World" that often appeared in our minds when we were bored and dazed as teenagers. The main theme is "relaxation and happiness", and it is a beautiful book created entirely from imagination. If you read the author's book, you should not read it with an "adult's" dark social outlook, but with a child's "society is beautiful" social outlook. In the world of novels, where life and death are always the norm, and one is the only one in the world, this kind of book is a "clean stream". Wash away your impetuousness I have been reading novels for twenty years. At first, I liked the no-brainer novel Long Aotian. Then I read more and began to like novels with brains. Then I continued to read more, and started to like the dark novels, and I went crazy. Finally, I started to like this kind of leisurely writing about retirement life.

It's so stupid. There are so many secrets in Pig's Feet, but people can come in casually. For example, the female college student who asked her family to stay here for a few months during the summer vacation and came to the cat cafe was afraid that Pig's Feet would be too lonely to show off, so she wanted people to reveal the secrets of Pig's Feet's bedroom to show off, right? This is so stupid

The beginning and setting are very interesting, but the follow-up is weak, Just a few questions As a super artificial intelligence, the refrigerator, as long as it is put into the network, the protagonist does not need to worry about money at all. As for the Omnic Crisis, just add a setting at will. There are also three bosses whose ability settings are too outrageous. It is normal to have high-level structure and wisdom, but possessing extraordinary force is a bit out of the norm. There is one last question. If you go inside the live broadcast room of the main character Runway anchor, are you sure you are not suffering from twitching? Even if the protagonist is bound to skyrocket in the future, the protagonist is still in the underground stage now. Anything that may expose himself is irrational. Hasn't the author never thought about this?

The protagonist of this book has no ambitions and is very childish. He can play whenever he wants. What stands out is that he just does what he wants and entertains like a child. There is no deep hatred, no pursuit of climbing to the top, all kinds of things in the world, all kinds of life, only time to care about one-third of one acre of land. But even that private land is only partially real, and there is still a part that stays in the ethereal and real network. If you agree that Nobita, who owns Doraemon, did not choose to dominate, but played in the open space with his friends. There are joys and sorrows during this period, but under the warmth day after day is their childhood. Then the final test remains: this is a fairy tale for adults and belongs to the dead house. If you still don't reject it after reading this, then I think, my friend, we are already book friends.

Even if the protagonist's IQ is set to be very low and the other characters are very intelligent, it does not prevent this from being a good book. However, the question that I don't understand is, is the protagonist's character set like this deliberately? IQ is low, and the plot depends entirely on the protagonist's low IQ. The main plot should be to upgrade by stealing game items. In real life, it should be about making money. However, the protagonist has a low IQ, and his ability to make money is limited. Moreover, after entering an online game, he is involved with the anchor, which has no effect on upgrading and making money. Money has no effect, it's just deliberately looking for trouble. I don't understand or even resent this, Ma Daha. Recruiting characters can be said to be an advantage, but it is too superficial. The main reason is that there is a bit of description when you first appear. There is obviously not enough communication later. What should be interesting here is not written.

Hmm, I was thinking about your review of this book. How about just copying the ideas, deleting the bad points, smoothing out the plot, and then writing another book?

The subject matter is quite good, but every time I see a brainless part, I tell myself that the brainless and enjoyable article is enough to finish reading, but the brainlessness behind it becomes more disgusting each time.

This is a self-pleasure novel. Regardless of whether the reader is happy or not, the author must have been happy when he wrote this book. It's like reading a mindless novel without using your brain. It's hard to feel the excitement of this book. I actually like it better.

I can barely read it without using my brain.

The author is sea bream (diaoyin) fish. Not a silk fish. This article is full of silk fish, which makes me feel embarrassed

In terms of creativity, this book and even the author's previous books are top-notch, but I suspect that the author may not have an outline and write wherever he thinks. So there are always some plots that make people a little speechless. As dio said, the more scheming you are, the more unexpected things will happen. In reality, the most we can do is control our own words and deeds, but we cannot control others', so unexpected situations will always occur. There is no novel without conflict. It is normal for the protagonist to encounter unexpected situations in novels. But this surprise should be the protagonist's surprise, not the author's surprise. This unexpected plot development should lead to more interesting content, but instead it leads to some relatively speechless plots. Actually, in terms of character setting, there is no problem with this plot development. After all, the protagonist's character is just an ordinary otaku who is a bit nerdy, but not particularly thick-skinned, and is embarrassed to refuse other people's requests. So there is actually no problem with the development of the plot. There is no situation where the character's personality changes, the character becomes wiser, or the character becomes occ in order to promote the development of the plot. But this is fiction. Why do many novels set the protagonist as having neither father nor mother? Even if there is a father and a mother, the parents are just background images. It is because it is difficult to write about family, relatives, and interpersonal relationships. For example, in the cultivation stream, the protagonist is practicing, and then a relative comes to stay at your house for two days. It is definitely difficult to refuse. But the problem is that when the protagonist should practice, there is a relative next to him, causing the protagonist to have to stop his practice. At this time, the relative will feel that this relative is superfluous. The protagonist of this book is, first, a girl who played with her when she was a child, and her classmates, and then several girls came because of the protagonist's little animals. These women undoubtedly promoted the development of the plot, but compared to promoting the plot, they caused more trouble to the protagonist. After reading it, I felt that these women were a bit annoying. The first two women are okay. The other two women mainly set up stalls outside and don't have much interaction with the protagonist. The latter batch of women are really annoying. The same goes for the previous book. The protagonist's classmates were really superfluous, which made me complain several times. Of course, this book is an improvement over the previous one. The students in the previous book were of no use at all, but the women in this book are somewhat useful.

What is your main line? If you want to say it's about making money, the output is only a few things, and there are various restrictions. You want to say it's about making money, right? It's also all kinds of baffling. Let's talk about farming, but you're renting a house in the city. I really don't understand where the main plot of your novel is

If that doesn't work, just rest for a few days and take a day off. It won't be good if you keep doing this and people will misunderstand you.

I really don't understand why the protagonist wants to take out Nora directly in front of colleagues in the company. I really don't understand. I'm really not afraid of being exposed. I treat others as blind and deaf, unable to hear or see.

You can only read the first 50 chapters, but then the maze opens up. The plot is really too fragmented, there is no main line, the author writes whatever he thinks of, the urban plot does not focus on career, does not focus on women, and does not even pretend to be bad. Even if it is a farming article, it cannot just cover farming, and the most important daily life in a farming article is not included. The protagonist is involved in everything and is not good at anything. It's a bit like a setting article. It just sells the setting. It has no outline, the plot is weak, and it reads like a half-finished product. My suggestion is to either weaken the maze, strengthen the urban plot, and add a love or career line, or specialize in writing a maze copy first and choose a world where the two-dimensional dimension is very popular to explore in depth. Now there are several chapters in a maze, and the urban plot is slightly pretentious and not routine. It is too fragmented to read and gives me a headache.

I still can't forget it. Let's see it in the new year

I have never seen such an abstract author, nor have I ever followed such an abstract novel. More abstractly, I fucking voted. Why. Is there any way to like it? That's it

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

Are there any books on similar themes? The setting of this book really appealed to me, but I couldn't stand it after the appearance of the female characters.

Alas, the setting is very good, but the biggest problem is that the protagonist is really too weak and useless, which makes people feel a headache watching it.

This author has a lot of fun doing it

Give me another vote and delete the book, out of sight, out of mind

Alive? I thought the author had changed his name to write another work, but it turns out it was updated every year. I wanted to know what the author's mental state was when he was updated every year. The performance of this book was basically terrible.

It's pretty good, even though it's a bit unfinished, but at least it has an ending.