The Ice Saint of the Xiao Clan in Dou Po

By the way, I think the author's writing in capital letters is pretty good? I feel like it was written with a lot of feeling.

After reading the beginning, I didn't dare to read anymore. I really dared to say anything, but the Imperial Clan, the Xiao family knew nothing, and they talked like setting off firecrackers. They talked about everything, the origins of the Xiao family, enemies, etc. If you tell these things, it will not only make people panic, but also the hidden dangers are too great. Do you believe that if the Soul Clan or the other eight clans find out, they will come and destroy you the next day? I don't know if the author is of age, but I would be forgiven if he is not.

It would be too much to increase the strength of other people in the Xiao family. Especially Xiao Zhan, with his talent, even with the power of blood, it is already a blessing to be able to reach the level of Dou Zhan. How can he actually be promoted to Dou Sage by taking drugs and external forces? [It took the protagonist more than two hundred years, and was trapped in the secret realm for more than a hundred years, to become a Dou Sage. Xiao Zhan only took drugs and external forces, and it only took forty or fifty years...] Others, the protagonist's disciples, and the two one-star Dou Sages of the Xiao family who went to the "Human Palace" of the Soul Destruction Hall with Yao Lao... Descendants of Dou Emperor, even the strongest Dou Emperor bloodline, if they rely too much on the power of Dou Emperor's bloodline, they will be nine-level Dou Zun at most. The seven ancient clans have countless times more information than the protagonist, and there are not necessarily many fighting saints. Many fighting saints have not made any progress in hundreds of years.

The author should not write emotional scenes. It's too awkward. Just explain it casually. I don't know if the author has ever been in love or has watched too many short videos. Your emotional scenes are really awkward, especially the dialogue between the male and female protagonists.

The emotional scene is so awkward, the heroine is superfluous

What a little Yanzi, he is obviously a handful.

What does it mean to cut off every three days? There is not even a notice, so everyone waits in vain. What kind of attitude is this? There is no respect for the subscribed readers. You are the author and you can do whatever you want, right? What do you think of the readers? Leeks? Your surname is also Zhao.

This is a forced level reduction, right? What Dou Di is fighting against is not Heavenly Supreme. Even if there are losses, he won't be transformed into the Supreme realm.

I really don't understand. Did you, the protagonist, do this just to trick the Xiao family and Xiao Yan?

The protagonist's level is really bad. He has been practicing for so many years and has not even reached the limit of Fighting Saint. Look at Lin Dong next door. He has been practicing from the Body Tempering Realm to the Ancestral Realm in 10 years.

Can you please continue to update? Please tell me something.

Brother, you did it on purpose😡😡😡

The protagonist used the most powerful and expensive fighting skill in the Dou Qi Continent, 'Horse Leg Cutting', and cut off the legs of the horse under the Emperor Hun Tian Emperor's seat with one knife. The Emperor Hun Tian Emperor's horse lost its front hoof on the spot and died. 😜😜😜

It's really perfect. I've been looking for the starting protagonist. The Xiao clan in Wutan City has Dou Sheng, or it's a Dou Sheng novel left over from Xiao Xuan's period. Never be a eunuch

This emotional drama is really embarrassing to write, so embarrassing that it can take away three rooms and one living room. If you don't know how to write, write less, avoid the important and take the easy, and write more about what you are good at. Also, you are a Dou Sheng, and the situation is bigger. The Dou Sheng goes to the Gama Empire to show off his power and play with a group of Dou Huang. You are embarrassed. There is no need to write these plots. The Dou Sheng must have the vision and structure of the Dou Sheng, and the things he does must be in line with the Dou Sheng. As for cultivation, otherwise you only have the cultivation of a fighting saint, but your eyes are stuck on the pattern of fighting spirit and king, which seems nondescript. You should end the plot of Dou Po Continent as soon as possible, ascend to the world as soon as possible, and run to play with the strong men of the world. Isn't it more fun? What fun is there with these little brats from Dou Po Continent?

Can the protagonist not be a strict wife?

So awesome! The first person in the world, Earth Supreme, bravely breaks into the Ice Spirit Clan. From various versions and novels, the ancestor of the Ice Spirit Tribe is between the middle stage of Heavenly Supreme Stage and the middle stage of Immortal Grade. You are one by one. The next Earth Supreme held the top of the three Earth Supremes. You are so brave. Description of potato. Heaven is supreme. Breath. I can force you to kneel on the ground. You are so awesome. After seeing so much, I have never been so brave as you. At best. Half step to heaven.

It's not that I think the writing is quite good. There are so many fan books that are unique, so why do I have to stop updating them? Dear author, come back soon! !

You must be following too slowly. I finished reading Chapter 574 when I was a sophomore in high school. I am already a freshman, and you have only updated a few chapters.

Xiao Han

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