The Legend of Qin: The Outcast

Do any book friends say why the protagonist is not the King of Qin? There are many reasons for this, including the protagonist's character, the outline setting, the author's writing skills, and another reason. This is the world of the Qin Dynasty, not serious history. If it is serious history, why should we fight for it? The title of the book is actually not complete. There are still four words: "One person, one person", so take a good look at it. 🙂🙃

Seeing that the assassination of Wei Wuji failed, I would like to make some suggestions. It does not mean that the trap cannot fail, nor does it mean that the protagonist must succeed. The Qin State should have lost, but the protagonist cannot personally participate in it and then fail. The details are appropriate. Wei Wuji is your idol, why don't you write a novel in which he is the protagonist? Write in detail the parts where the protagonist succeeds, and briefly write down the parts that fail. Do you understand? For example, Liu Bei was chased by Cao Cao like a rabbit. How did Luo Guanzhong write it? Zhao Yun went in and out of Changban Slope seven times, and Zhang Fei broke the Dangyang Bridge. Look at how you wrote it? His subordinate Zhongganyi was his confidant, and Lord Xinling managed to escape through clever tricks. Huh? Who is the protagonist? Do you still have to give Wei Wuji the entire character card and let readers compare their feelings for him every day?

This book is okay, the first 40 chapters were written about the photovoltaic killing of Wei Wuji and more than ten chapters. When RNG was captured at level 6, not only the people came, but also the soldiers, and even the towers were brought. As a result, a jungler was caught, and AD and support were all gone. Protagonist: Not a big problem Author: I admire Wei Wuji and don't want him to die too early. Audience:? ? ? ? ? ?

By the way, if you were asked to choose the abilities of one of Qin Shimingyue, what would you choose?

The protagonist is strong, powerful, smart, and has good kung fu skills. Ying Zheng is a rational person. If he wants to think about his son, will he be unable to suppress the protagonist? Zhu Yuanzhang's group of old friends who accompanied her to fight in the country have been eliminated by him. Ying Zheng himself has sent you behind to the point where he cannot suppress the protagonist. His son can do it. The protagonist already has the strength to rebel and has a way to die. In The Story of Love, how much did Xiang Shaolong help Ying Zheng? It can be said that the throne was all decided by him. And the threat is not as big as the protagonist. It's better to get rid of him. Don't talk about good relationships. Good relationships are not as important as the country. In a word, you deserve to die.

Cheng Qiao: Brother Emperor, this Zhao Gao must be killed, otherwise he will endanger our country of Qin!! Ying Zheng: No, he has been with me for many years after all. Cheng Qiao: Brother Huang, you will regret it. Ying Zheng: That's enough, Cheng Qiao! I am the King of Qin!

I just saw it on the shelves and was poisoned. What's next? Is it necessary to read on?

After reading the novel and reading the comments, the part about Lord Xinling is really flattering. Do you know what thunder is? It is written at the beginning that thunder can paralyze and cover the sun. In the sneak attack, it takes so long to hit the opponent several times and it is as if nothing happened. It should be that the more you are hit by electricity, the weaker your true energy is. You can't use it. And the sword can be used to write electricity. Why does the protagonist need so much water when he has already taken action? , I just wrote a quick word about the characteristics of Tianshi Mansion's skills and didn't write anything else. I even fought back and forth with others. The realm is quite similar, but the special skills are not your opponent, not to mention the three or four ordinary masters. They are not your opponents, and they are still escaped. The protagonist is no different from ordinary masters except that he has more tricks. Isn't it better not to write about thunder skills? Isn't it cool to see what the fans are doing? You have to cater to popular taste.

No need to say anything else

If you don't want to be the emperor and directly control Ying Zheng with the eight magic skills, you won't instill mental control from childhood. After all, he is still a master after three generations. How can you develop a relationship with a little kid when you are nearly a hundred years old? Can you expect an emperor to appreciate the brotherly love he had when he was a child? Maybe he will kill the protagonist and eat his flesh in his later years if he wants to live forever.