One Piece: I Built a Shadow World Government

Authors on Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform) often add Chinese fantasy elements to non-Chinese fantasy novels, resulting in a hodgepodge effect. In One Piece novels, the more complex the abilities, the harder they are to handle. The Sun God is arguably the most outrageous mythical Zoan type; what are its awakening conditions? With these five abilities, Nika would have to take a backseat. After all, any one of those five abilities could be considered a powerful Devil Fruit.

I saw a comment saying that some authors like to add Eastern fantasy elements, which makes it seem incongruous. I strongly disagree with this. You need to remember that you are writing a novel, and many Devil Fruits in One Piece have already been overused. If you add some, whether it is Eastern fantasy or Western fantasy, the most important thing is to add something fresh.

My friend, the White Tiger doesn't have wings, and the place where this Devil Fruit grows is full of poisonous snakes; it should be the ferocious beast Qiongqi.

Look at me! I have some great ideas for the protagonist's design. The author could design the protagonist's hairstyle to be similar to Jin's, with a roaring tiger's head tattooed on the left side of his head, a left claw extending from his left shoulder and chest, and a right claw extending to his right shoulder and arm.

I won't read this book.

With so many main characters and such overpowered abilities, especially with Kaido's Blue Dragon Fruit as a comparison, could we perhaps add a compatibility factor to Devil Fruits? The higher the compatibility, the more powerful and varied the Devil Fruit's abilities become. And because the protagonist, due to various reasons from his time travel, has a compatibility exceeding 100% with this Devil Fruit, which is why he's so eager to acquire it.

Make a naval version, featuring all beasts, but without mythical beasts; the main character being a mythical beast is enough.

I like the author's writing about Qin's Time; if the author gets tired of it, they can continue with time travel as an infinite flow story.

I hope you will all read and support my new book. Thank you! 😊

The abilities of the Kujira weren't used much by the World Government; the focus was more on its individual strength. There were too few interesting plot points involving the Kujira.