Entering the Liaozhai Studio and Becoming a Swordsman

The protagonist said that this world was exactly the same as the earth's history before the Tang Dynasty, but it changed with Yang Guang in the Sui Dynasty, and the conquest of Korea was successful. Don't you think there's something wrong with what's being said here? Is this protagonist a graduate student in history?

Generally speaking, this is a self-help article. Your family's 50,000 taels worth of goods were lost, and then you owe 50,000 taels of money. Your family co-operated in the business without spending any money, and it was all a waste of money, right? ? Besides, your family is bankrupt, and you, a time traveler, don't want to make money, but you want to take the exam to become a scholar? Is it enough for people to give you just one month? ? There are also people who beat your sister and pay to humiliate you, but you turned around and took it away. I don't believe in what kind of family can go out to do business worth tens of thousands and not leave a few hundred taels at home? ? ? What's the use of these two hundred? In general, this is a self-pleasure article by the author. The author feels that he has written the protagonist's tolerance and improvement, but it is actually very poisonous.

The author's ideas are quite good, I hope they won't be affected by the comments.

When writing about Liaozhai, just write about Liaozhai properly, without adding Dream of Red Mansions. It's just like the romance element in fairy tale movies, which is neither fish nor fowl.

Let's change the name. What is the Sword Immortal? It should be renamed Liaozhai Zhiguanlu. Every day is about private affairs, family affairs and state affairs. It's a damn fairy! It's very inconsistent. There is a great immortal like Lishan Mother but the underworld is closed, all the gods are there but the heaven does not appear. The logic is messed up enough. He also talks about the cycle of human beings. He is bullied by others every day. He knows it but doesn't solve it. He dares to kill people from the Celestial Master's way. Enemies in the mortal world are left to bully his family every day. He is mentally ill.

You're like a lunatic. You keep offending all kinds of people all the way. You offend all the forces that you can name. It's like the whole world is against you.

I found that the protagonist told lies but he had no brains. My family asked who did you learn swordsmanship from. You clearly know that this is a fairy tale world and there are gods. However, you lied to death because it was taught by Lu Dongbin in the dream. Are you too busy to seek death? Wrong, the author wrote the plot but did not have the brains.

When I read Chapter 5, this is outrageous. I am doing business with 50,000 taels but I don't even have a tael of capital. Is it all due to debts? ? ? ? You still have so many years of business and no money at all? ? ? Whose business can do this? ? ?

In the harem novel, the author hates Taoism so much that he imitates the swordsman and curses Taoism, haha...

The heroine of this Virgin Bitch is also drunk, and the author also likes to bring in private goods. He is dressed in the skin of a sword fairy and is actually written as a Confucianist, and then a desperate gangster.

The writing is actually pretty good. But the protagonist is not very strong and keeps causing trouble. He has not wiped his butt clean. He is like crazy. He takes the initiative to get involved in everything and jumps into the whirlpool by himself. Otherwise, the protagonist would have died long ago. This has happened so many times. It is not a good thing to be too risky or too coincidental in everything.

Why would two evil cultivators in a trap kill an ignorant swordsman for a few hundred taels of silver? What's more, behind the protagonist stands the number one swordsman in the dynasty. Is wealth able to communicate with gods? Or is Yan Chixia, who is number one in the dynasty and is about to become an immortal, too cheap?

I feel relieved when I see so many people scolding you.

I feel like the author himself is confused. He owes 50,000 yuan for raw materials and has a finished product worth 50,000 yuan. If these 50,000 yuan for finished products run out of raw materials, your business will probably go bankrupt long ago. In the finished product processing industry, there is no profit of at least a few percent, so why are you all going to drink the northwest wind?

Brother, I'm not here to watch a house fight. The title of your book embarrasses me. I can only give up. I advise you to give yourself a knife as soon as possible. Let's start a new one

It was very tiring and confusing to watch. The protagonist wants to have a career as an official or a fairy, and at the same time, he has to fall in love with seven or eight women at the same time. The plot looks very bloody.

The businessmen in the small county town are quite energetic! I know everyone! Can do anything

Liaozhai is not Liaozhai, White Snake is not White Snake, Red Mansion is not Red Mansion

Is the protagonist not cheap? After someone broke off the engagement, he took the initiative to greet them as brothers and sisters every time they met. When dealing with those big Taoist sects who were many times more powerful than himself, he would kill and silence them at every turn. When dealing with a bunch of useless people in red buildings, he would only hold back his hands and make many concessions. It was really baffling to see.

Jia Yuanchun cuckolded the emperor, and his imagination is really big. If this book were to be a stand-alone book, it would really be considered an alternative perspective among the Red Mansions. It would be very novel, but you still have to mention the Swordsman from the Liaozhai Studio. The title of the book is also based on the Swordsman from the Liaozhai Studio, but most of the story is about the Red Mansion. The Red Mansion alone is indeed well written, but the combination of the Red Mansion from the Liaozhai Studio is very poor. Could it be that the author plans to become the emperor himself and establish the Immortal Dynasty?

It has nothing to do with Sword Immortal, let's just call it Dream of Red Mansions

After reading a few chapters, there is a dark thread. When faced with a crisis, the protagonist does not think about practicing to get back his father and property, but thinks about sharpening his skills to take the imperial examination. It is simply a headache to cure the brain circuit. Of course, I also know that under the halo of the protagonist, everything is reasonable, but I accept my incompetence and say goodbye.

Did you just write an SB?

The article is not on topic, it simulates the plot of a Chinese fairy tale, but it is further and further away from the title of the book. The plot is simple.

After reading so much, I didn't see the protagonist transforming into a sword fairy to slay demons. It was all about intrigues. I have never encountered so many monsters and monsters in the world of Liaozhai. I was really convinced.

Already retired, the pig's trotters have a lot of shortcomings in the front, but they directly transform into super nannies in the back. Is the enemy a pig's trotter with a smaller body than a cow, surely he can handle it?

Poisoned to death by all kinds of poisonous spots, it makes people sick when they see it

I think this book has the qualities of a great person, please give it a try, the author

Damn it, eunuch dog. Waste my time

Have you forgotten one thing? 🤫 His father has not been found yet. Who is the person who captured his father is not found. The biggest enemy has not been found yet.