I Can Tell at a Glance That You Are Not Human!

I can give this book a three-and-a-half-star rating. The one-and-a-half star I deducted is mainly because the author is a newcomer, and the writing still needs polishing, and the plot is a bit cliche and has nothing new. The beginning is really good, but when it comes to sealing the memory, I can even directly guess what will happen later. The facts prove that I was not wrong. This book is not a fairy grass, but it is not bad after all and is worth reading.

To be honest, there is no need to put it here as a handyman. No matter what the layout is, to put it bluntly, it restricts the development of the protagonist, which is outrageous... Knowing that Daozi is of great significance, but not giving him resources, not giving him anything, and letting the youngest waste his time? Even if you use means to give away some resources, it wouldn't be so weird. It gives me the feeling that it is just to suppress the protagonist. You don't have to be a Taoist. How can you be free? Everything depends on the protagonist himself. The last sentence is, we are for your own good, to protect you, haha... I really laughed. Resources are not given, friends are separated. If the author later has a protagonist who becomes stronger on his own, this group of people come up and say that it is for his own good, and the protagonist accepts it, and feels at ease that they are for his own good. Then this book... ... Go directly from the good grass to the poisonous area... No need to read...

Subscribe to a chapter and you can comment. Let's not talk about the genius being turned into a handyman. Too many people have complained about it. You wrote that entering the sect requires xinxing, and there are also special levels to test xinxing. In the end, what are the official disciples, bandits and bullies? Then why do you write about character? A handyman puts on shoes for formal disciples. Can such a thing climb the ladder you wrote? ? ? ? ?

The latest chapters 34 35. Just when I see a similar plot, I always have a strange idea, like this, putting people with excellent talents in the position of handyman disciples, and then being trashed without knowing it. Ordinary formal disciples rely on time and practice for a long time. If they are not as capable as the protagonist but are slightly less talented and cannot do 1 vs. 5, What will happen if the elder who ran to see Wentian Mirror or Wentian Stone and was just watching comes back and is really beaten to death by the official disciples? Probably this type. Elder: "This boy's talent is limitless and his future is limitless. He is the future of our sect!" The head "put him as a handyman disciple" (I don't know if it is to protect him or what, I think it is impossible not to sugar-coat it just because the demon clan sent him here) After a while "Not good The genius was killed." "What? Is he a spy from the enemy sect or someone? I've already put him in the position of a handyman, so how could he be killed?" "Well, it's the disciples of our sect who have been unable to progress for decades and have stayed in the position of official disciples."

I think it's a bit inappropriate to place the protagonist among the handyman disciples. I don't know if the author wants to use this identity to let the protagonist get away from those messy things like pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. But I think a protagonist has a very good talent, but as a handyman, the growth of the protagonist will be limited.

The opening chapter was very attractive to me, and I read it carefully. After arriving at the sect, I was forced to surrender my wisdom, and the genius became a handyman disciple for some unknown reason. I wondered if this was the way of a powerful sect? How to cultivate a sense of belonging among disciples? After the trial, he was unjustly accused of betraying the sect. Comparing one's feelings with others does not cultivate talents. Skipping directly and continuing to write about the unfair treatment of various alien races, this is sending the protagonist further and further to the alien side. I really can't understand the poison. I really hope the author will take care of the outline and dig holes properly.

There are two main problems. 1. There are too many pits and too deep, and everyone is playing the Riddler trick, but Su Mu just wants to resurrect the fox now, and he will let him have his way. Making him work as a handyman and forcing him to rebel are all forcibly creating conflicts, and the plot is very awkward. 2. There are too few updates and too many pitfalls, so no one reads it. To be honest, Su Mu's life was given by the little fox. Except for Zhou Jian who was kind to Su Mu, the rest of the human race were irrelevant. No matter what the Taoist sect had planned, they would and could only be enemies in the end.

If I were the protagonist, I would find an opportunity to go to Shanmao and come out after I develop. Anyway, the quality of the disciples in this sect is uneven, and they are not given resources. Instead, they are restricted everywhere and forced to suppress it. It doesn't look good. I heard the author said that this is the first time to write a book. Come on, I will read your next book later.

Write a fox to death to draw out the main plot; design to save people and join a Taoist sect; a talented evildoer who is demoted to a handyman; a ghost mirror kills a person and the protagonist takes the blame; Xiaoqing seeks a teacher and swears to forget his love; You write it like this, and then even though it is foreshadowed, people have no desire to read further, and even if there is an explanation later, it is no longer visible. So the teacher said that you were feeling aggrieved when you wrote about it. If people see this and leave, who will look behind you?

Kill the heroine as soon as she comes? ? ? Is there still a market for abusive articles? What's this. Retro? ? ? It's a pity that the writing is so good. See you in the next book.

It's well written and can be read. However, I didn't understand it when the protagonist was forced to be demoted to a handyman later on. I didn't understand it even after I finished chasing it. The reason was too far-fetched. It felt like it was just to forcefully increase the plot. Anyway, the reason was not enough. You have a super-talented sect with no training resources. Didn't you think that the protagonist would run away?

It's too old-fashioned, what kind of way, even if it is cultivated secretly, there is not even a person to monitor/protect it, and it is still made to work as a handyman. Are you sure they won't hate you when they get up? Hehe

Author, is your description of love too childish? Love requires meeting, getting to know each other, common topics, hobbies, and at least some aspect of mutual attraction! After that, we need to get along harmoniously, tolerate each other, and respect each other! What are you describing? You have never experienced it yourself or have too little love experience! Why don't you describe love like this? I couldn't stand it after reading the first few chapters. Gu Xian'er you described fell in love with the protagonist without any reason? And the protagonist doesn't want to have a relationship with her, so he's just lazy? Just because of appearance? Scholar? The author uses your own view of love that has been poisoned by modern society to write about transvestite love. Your twisted love story poisoned me! Love is not about loyalty, but at least it requires a spark to attract each other's strengths. Not to mention the plot of life and death, at least common hobbies, topics, silent dedication for each other... Etc. Even if you describe eating soft food, you must have this ability. People who can eat soft food are capable of others or are beyond the reach of others. What you are doing is completely unreasonable, inconsistent with common sense, completely unreasonable, has no logic at all, and is completely divorced from love.

Putting the protagonist in the role of a handyman disciple means driving high and moving low. Are you really not here to disgust people?

The protagonist might as well go to other sects, or go to the Demon Sect. He has to be a handyman. The maid is gone and he has no other ideas. He looks like a saint, so lenient.

Laughing to death, the malice that leads to poison every day

So Xiaoqing arrived in Lingfu two years ago, and the protagonist is still a runner after two years? Is this still the best qualification? Even if you take drugs, the difference won't be so big, right?

It's really disgusting for you to be the protagonist. You don't provide resources or skills. If you don't leave when you get the things, then the author thinks that there are too many people reading this book and wants to reduce some of them.

The plot is actually not surprising, and none of the book lovers have come from reading a group of books. It's just that your writing style is a bit poor. The whole text is good, but the twists and turns are a little too serious. This book is a bit similar to Zhu Xian. The author can revise it if he can, and try to avoid it later. Don't be alone, but also consider everyone else.