Crazy, You Call This a Prosecutor

There are not many chapters yet. You have buried so many pits. How do you fill them in? There are too many branch plots. Let's advance the main plot first and explain it clearly. My personal suggestions:

1. The subject matter is relatively new. There are indeed many high-quality Korean dramas and movies in recent years. It is interesting to mix them into a Korean drama/movie world. But there are certain shortcomings. Korean dramas are not popular enough and cannot be as familiar as those in the Hong Kong drama world. To be honest, I have almost never watched the movies and TV series in this book 2. The writing is relatively smooth and has no stumbling 3. The role of the prosecutor is relatively new, and the power is amazing in the Korean context. The climbing process is a highlight 4. After reading Chapter 84, I feel that the main line is not very clear. I only know a 10-year goal, which is lacking in the short and medium term. It is recommended that the protagonist make a plan himself, what forces are needed, what obstacles need to be overcome, etc., To create a sense of excitement and anticipation. 5. If you have an unpleasant personality, you must have a good time reading novels and do things that cannot be done in reality. But the protagonist is full of compromises. Of course, this is determined by the author's writing style and outline, but I don't like this. People who like it may like it very much. To sum up, it is a good source of information, you can read it if you like it. ps. Chapter 30 or 40, the one about killing hundreds of people at once is a bit poisonous, I suggest you use some poison resistance ps2. The author can learn from an author named He Jun, who writes about Hong Kong variety shows (not advertising, but I feel there is a certain similarity in genre)

I have been waiting for half a year, and the first world is not over yet. How come you can do ink so well?

It doesn't make much sense from the back.

It can't be opened, there are too many branch lines, why dig so many holes? There are several other events in between. It's very uncomfortable to drive.

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Thank you for your hard work, but I want to update as soon as possible if I am not dead. Otherwise, I won't be able to hold my 80m sword any longer.

Above, photos of the heroines Han Hyo-joo

I thought this book was a cool novel. In the dark place of the peninsula, a powerful character intervened in the Sowon case and the melting pot case, and insisted on judicial justice and justice. . . . As a result, I read Chapter 25, and they were all about groveling for people to climb up the ladder and giving gifts for black money. . . Gone, it's not the subject I want to see.

Heroine Video Post 2, Han Hyo-joo

Heroine

The protagonist can betray South Korea in exchange for the support of the Americans, and then raise the butcher knife to kill the Korean chaebol. Or take advantage of the Americans to control South Korea! Turn Korea into your own hall of expression

Seeing the scene of self-mutilation in order to avoid military service, it feels like the gain is not worth the loss. According to the protagonist's IQ, there should be a better way, right? Besides, you are currently on the rise in your career, and you are still in a critical period of dealing with the Golden Gate Group. If the protagonist comes to do this to test everyone's emotions towards you, are you not afraid of a fire in the backyard, or someone trying to take away the status of your foundation?

The subject matter is quite good, but it's a pity that the author's writing skills are a bit lacking. The characters are rather stereotyped, and the content is also about gangsters and giving gifts. Some of the points are quite poisonous. For example, in order to subjugate the auxiliary officer, he went to the gang and killed hundreds of people. You yourself said that you can't change it to another one! As for taking such a big risk in order to conquer an auxiliary officer, he was framed and silenced later.

After reading dozens of chapters, I gave up immediately. It's so tiring to see the protagonist working so hard for tens or hundreds of billions of won. The protagonist is a time traveler and has a system, so why can't he make tens of billions of dollars from investing? How can you become a super chaebol by investing in Twitter, Tesla, food delivery websites, short videos, etc.? Still on the one-third of an acre of land on the peninsula, trying to make some small money. My liver hurts from watching it.

If you don't play in a girl group, what's the point of ravaging Korean entertainment?

The plot is too tight and too big. It's all about scheming against some big group and so on. Logically speaking, this part should be moved to the back. After all, the protagonist's current status is not enough, and it feels like he was forced into it. There should be more about Ding Qing and his own development of power.

Is the heroine really useless without any merit? 😰 Is it really useless? I spent a special time to comment. Please tell me {"NickName":"Kung Fu Cat Master","UserId":322606578}

I would like to ask the author which female protagonists are virgins.

Can you give me some time? Why don't you save it for 100 years? Why do you feel that you have the same time as Conan in one year? More than 900 chapters have to be copied by the procuratorate. It will take many years and months to wait for you to become the first political leader of the peninsula. Give up and can't waitanymore

The two dramas "Prosecutor Princess" and "Liar" are also about prosecutors! There are also Im Jin Na and Kim So Yeon in it, so you can write about them too! Pictured above

The author used this picture, Jeon Ji-yeon

I don't know any of the heroines, including Han Ga-in, Kim Tae-hee, Son Ye-jin, Ha Ji-wan, Lee Young-ae, girl group SNSD, Tara, Bae Joo-hyun, Lee Ji-eun, Kim Hyun-a, all of them are okay, and even Lee Fuzhen is okay, she also has a younger sister. Being with the Samsung Princess, taking the path of the Attorney General and the path of the Member of Parliament is not always easy.

🙂the k2 Mrs. Is upset

The police found a printed suicide note with the protagonist's handprint on the clothes of the protagonist's body. The coroner found half a pound of bullets in the protagonist's body. The bullets were all kinds of bullets, and they were all bullets in the back. Finally, they concluded that the protagonist committed suicide.

Aren't foreign stars allowed to use their real names? After reading more than a dozen Korean entertainment books, everyone uses their real names! It's okay to just use official titles like prosecutor, why do you have so many restrictions... It looks uncomfortable

Yin Xiyue has had a coup, but the author still hasn't come back to write?

Even if I don't write it anymore, I can at least send out the rest of the outline! I'm sorry to the readers directly!

After reading dozens of chapters of this book, I don't have any other major problems. It's just too watery. Maybe the author just wants to write more detailedly, but just like traditional Chinese painting, you have to learn to leave blank space. If you write too much, it will seem too watery.

No longer updated? , And don't you explain what's going on?