An Escape Game for Those with Abilities

After reading dozens of chapters, I'm a little disappointed. It's been a long time since I've seen such an attractive subject matter, and the writing skills are up to par. The above are the advantages Let's talk about the problem. After reading the title introduction, I believe everyone's default expectation for this work is a battle royale survival game. There is no doubt that it should be a traditional apocalyptic survival game at its core But the cruelty of the killing is almost invisible, the collapse of order is not seen, the pressure of survival is not seen, the protagonist is just like playing The most important thing is that I meet the heroine in Chapter 23, I start to contact other people in Chapter 4, I find that there are more than ten people in the community in Chapter 6, and I rely on an unnatural event to force the child. People in the area gather together to strengthen contact, and then there is a copy of the community... OK, to summarize, this book only has 1 chapter of battle royale survival elements, and then it directly changes to exploration, strategy, organization... There is no doubt that it is off topic It is not impossible to have a female protagonist, it is not impossible to have organization, and it is not impossible to explore. No, but these should be branch lines under the main line of survival. With many years of bookworm experience, at least the first twenty or thirty chapters should be about single-player survival. You can meet the heroine during the period and avoid each other, and then become comrades and join a group for warmth, cherish each other, and decide to survive together because of certain beliefs... This would be more suitable. In short, the disappointment is greater than the expectation. The author still needs to work hard. If he is willing, I hope the author can readjust the outline and re-publish it if there is a chance. I will support him then Above

Please go advertise and ask for recommendations on forums and book lists. The book is good, but not many people know about it.

It's rare to see such a novel that satisfies your appetite, with online IQ and online logic. It seems to be very satisfying.

I sent a girl to the game at the beginning. She dared to touch such poisonous points. How brave she was.

Nowadays, there are too many novice readers, so many good online articles are well received but not popular. Like Van Gogh, they became famous only after their death.

Personally, I feel that if I really encounter this kind of game! I believe in gay friendship more! Women really affect the speed of drawing a knife

Such a good-looking book has so little popularity. What is the starting point for? I am still a daily guide 😭

Yes, it's quite interesting. After reading the first volume, I don't see anything bad about it.

The first volume was okay The second volume turned into a team competition with the whole family On the contrary, it became boring The reason why jojo is exciting is that it controls 1v1 and does not have a team competition

After reading the beginning, there is no need to conflict with the dragon-clawed man. .

After seeing this introduction, I wanted to come in and take a look 😍

It's from the post bar, yes, it means he wants to give you a bad review to help you calm down. I came and looked at the profile and thought it was quite interesting. Go check it out.

Boss, I don't understand something. Aren't the tracking darts and the ability to give kinetic energy to objects a duplicate?

The subject matter is quite interesting, but the escape game was not mentioned at all.

The book is well written, but no one read it yesterday?

Can't men escape heroes saving beauties?

If you don't listen to this book with all your heart, you'll be confused, and the conversations and fights will be reversed.

Boss! Don't abandon the book! Very well written! Please!

I wrote 300,000 words in a year. Stop writing. Who else will read it?

Finally found a good book, did you tell me eunuch?

I finished reading the first part in one go and came out of the building. It was so well written. The author doesn't want to be a eunuch. Keep up the good work. If you persist, you will become a god.

Awesome and awesome indirect sex eunuch

After reading the first volume, I confirmed that it was a female author, and the writing was quite good, and it was quite attractive to me. Is the fighting a bit sloppy? But the basic battle of wits can still be felt. The female companion didn't think it was poisonous, but it was really abrupt and she didn't understand the author's intention Do you think the novice village was quite harmonious in the early days? Not very smart? According to this quality, all orders will be made

It was okay at first, but it changed after beating the dragon-clawed man. The killing was unclear, and the male protagonist teleported directly behind him, right? It was a bit out of his wits. Looking at the effect of the sound transmission skill, is it possible to set the sound and sound effects by yourself? Otherwise, the dart sound and system sound cannot be expressed. If this skill can do this, can it deceive the dragon claw man's hearing and transmit a sound without footsteps behind him to him, so that the male protagonist can use this skill to touch behind him or something like that. It's better than teleporting directly, and then giving a female companion from the beginning is also very poisonous

It feels like they are all one person, like there are many protagonists fighting each other

A small goal is 1 million. The plot will only unfold if it reaches 1 million. If it reaches 1 million, it will be short videos.

Give me a monthly ticket to support it, hey.

The plot is quite good, but the writing method may be a bit problematic, the writing is a bit too messy. It's not Hei Chun's personal feelings.