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A person who started to practice Qi and become immortal went to assassinate people, but was shot to death by ordinary people with guns. He was very powerful 😰

Fuck, I'm sick of seeing this, this garbage operation and writing style

Did you start cultivating immortality innately in the first story?

Already confirmed "Swordsman of Two Flags Town", "Dangerous City", "Let the Bullets Fly" "Knife" and "Flying Swords of Dragon Gate"

How can I put it, the author's golden three chapters are particularly well written, and really have a Jianghu flavor, but later on it fell into a cliche, especially after the end of Double Flag Town. You said you wanted to describe the protagonist's spiritual transformation, but you rarely describe what the protagonist is thinking. The protagonist is always doing things, but you don't know why he acts. This makes the image of the protagonist very pale. Although the compact plot is an advantage, your pace is too anxious.

If the protagonist who travels to the movie world doesn't know the plot, you might as well write about the indigenous people, which is unsatisfactory...

My suggestion is, since you are a swordsman, go to a world where there are masters of swords, and then go through them one by one according to the level of force I feel that it is hard to integrate If you want to integrate, you must at least be of a similar era and have similar force. If some are lower and one is higher, the world behind It must have a long span, so it won't be long It's like writing the Snow Mountain Flying Fox series (Hu Yidao), which can be connected with Liancheng Jue (Blood Sword Ancestor), as well as other works by Wen, Gu, and Huang, which are of similar era and have similar martial arts.

Golden Chapter Three is good, if you can keep it up, it's good food.

Do you dare to put this on the shelves? Short of money?

Updates are too slow. It's not worth pursuing anymore. Keep it first

The writing is okay, but the updates are too slow. Also, I don't know if you know how to be a eunuch. Many people are probably keeping them.

I didn't read the previous chapter and skipped directly to the first chapter of Sword Rain. Li Gui kowtowed and bowed, and I was done. There was no depth. He was a miracle doctor who had lived for decades and was a bit cunning, so he bowed to just anyone.

How can we write about Shuangqi Town Swordsman without writing about Broken Swordsman and Xinlongmen Inn. These three movies are among the few Western swordsman movies.